Relations begin to break down between Equestria and the griffon tribes. As war approaches, new foes and alliances emerge. The mane six find themselves in a race against time to uncover dark plans and stop the griffon chief from ending their world.
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Well I was wondering how Lyra and Bon Bon would factor into the story and surprisingly enough I hadn't connected two and two together of using magical creatures as a weapon of mass destruction but it totally works and is rather an interesting use of some of the more odd and dangerous types of creatures while helping out. The brief humor scenes were needed since I did feel they brought some nice bits of levity, Vinyl's dad and the goofy griffon moments were rather fun, though I did like Celestia's little cake monologue. Seems like Rainbow and Shy are either out of the story's fight for a long while or there could be a time skip, either or I wasn't expecting the sheer amount of damage they sustained. Oh and with the weird reintroduction of Luna's Nightmare form and a slight deterioration of her mental state- that's going to be rather bad for both Pinkie and a lot of the characters. Also, I might have let the character information slip since the last few updates a few months ago, but for a moment I forgot that Cadance is Celestia's daughter or something? Interesting since I might be remembering bits of the original but I don't remember that before. Or if it was in the story from now, it's been a while since I read some of the earlier chapters.
Overall, this was a complete surprise to see this updated again.
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Glad I could surprise you with an update and that it seems to work well. I'll try to keep the updates more constant again.
Celestia and Cake are always fun to write... It's sort of like Soarin and his pie... Except Celestia has several thousand years of love of cake.
“do you believe your fillyfriend could be a military asset to the team?” Yeah that's a definite no
Toughest and craziest? I wonder what she did huh.
Hospital scene was tense and set the mood well. I suppose using magic to regrow flesh is going to take some time.
Lol getting fired will be least of that bouncer's worries for talking down to the Chief.
Ah cake first, but of course because Celestia.
I'm glad I found the time to finish reading this. Looking forward to the next chapter!