Relations begin to break down between Equestria and the griffon tribes. As war approaches, new foes and alliances emerge. The mane six find themselves in a race against time to uncover dark plans and stop the griffon chief from ending their world.
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I loved this chapter. From the cute TwiLuna chunk that was just pure cute with how they are getting closer and Luna's outburst about Twilight's flank was particularly funny. Then we have the almost Loony Tunes-esque Angel Bunny segment which was just silly in a good way. Totally what I expected from Tank and Angel just doing stuff together. And then we have all the rest of the characters running to Canterlot, more Pinkie is always fun. Bon Bon and Lyra finally having the talk about BB's past was nice, if short, though that wasn't the main focus of the chapter.
The main part of the chapter being the attack on Rainbow and Fluttershy feels better. It's been a while since I read the old version, but pulling from my memories, the fight feels better paced and a lot of stuff is going on- all easy to follow and not confusing. Plus it had some good emotional moments with Dash fighting against two gryphons at once which for how unfair that matchup was, she was holding her own pretty well.
Overall, this chapter was great. And rereading the three chapters in one chunk, I can see why you split it because a lot of important stuff happened in what would have been 1 full chapter. Waiting with baited breath on the pretty much outright new stuff.
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Thanks. Glad to know it flows better and yep, what's to come is mostly set to be new content as this attack is set to spark things off.