Relations begin to break down between Equestria and the griffon tribes. As war approaches, new foes and alliances emerge. The mane six find themselves in a race against time to uncover dark plans and stop the griffon chief from ending their world.
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3173019 What can i say... they had temptations and a fair amount of pent up feelings. It comes into play later
I hope you get to see the later chapters soon.
I don't mind if this is a tragidy, just know that if Fluttershy or Dashie die at the end of this you will face the wrath of a hundred fluttershys
and more importantly, leave me a broken mess and you wouldn't want that (man, we need a sad Twi, Dash, and AJ emoticons)
3198803 Don't worry, you'll find out I already know what the last chapter will be and I'm hoping it will be one of the cutest Flutterdash chapters in this whole story.
Tragedy doesn't always mean that ponies have to die at the end though....
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OOOOOOOHHHH, you tease you! I can't wait. The point still stands though...we need a sad Twi, AJ, and Dash emoticon
3216071 Well yea. Cause those stories are more than a little not to my taste... (shock horror... another reason I don't really read much MLP fan fiction anymore)
Thanks for the feedback. I hope you continue to find the time to read later
1: Comet's cameo was great
2: Epic chapter, like, no grammer issues, an awesome action scene, and a massive plot twist!
3: If this is just one griffon, how would equestria face an army of them
4: Is this going to be one story, or a trilogy, just a sequel, or one of those cool things that spans 6 stories with multiple side stories and a prequel?
~Wywint
Much needed awkward humor with all the intrigue and war planning going on in the background. And I was guessing that Warbeak or his stuff would come back in a much larger way with how he was mentioned in Celestia's flashbacks and all that. Also I was dying of laughter with that marriage prank Dash pulled. I feel like Oliver Twist begging for more but yeah, I missed this story, even with the streamlining. More gryphon stories or redone old ones are always fun. And I always felt kind of bummed that this had gotten cancelled or hiatused due to stuff. Good to see that this could be back. Didn't feel like the story was missing big chunks so what you took out/ added felt overall pretty natural.
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Thanks. I am currently working on the next chapter and its good fun to be back writing this epic tale. Great to know such moments are leaving an impact