Relations begin to break down between Equestria and the griffon tribes. As war approaches, new foes and alliances emerge. The mane six find themselves in a race against time to uncover dark plans and stop the griffon chief from ending their world.
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Why isn't there a dark tag?
Just a head's up, but I think you meant bored. Unless the sentries were with wooden expressions, I doubt they were board. Though homophones are decidedly awful when editing.
But on a happier note, I really liked this one. Cadance and Shining doing a cool fight scene? Check. Cute Fluttershy and Dash moments check. (Though don't think I missed that reference to Dash wearing the lingerie because they only have one pair of it. Oddly charming that they swap clothes. Definitely nice calm breathing space for this chapter. Though now I imagine Angel taking care of Tank as a scene out of The Tortoise and the Hare or some old Looney Tunes short.
Good to see Philomena since the show rarely uses her and I mean one of the last times Fluttershy saw her in canon, she would have burst into flames in her hooves which would probably be kind of messed up.
Oh and now there's like an entire coalition of bad dudes against Equestria- zebras, changelings, gryphons, minotaurs, and at least one monkey. Didn't expect monkeys but that's a neat idea. Though now I am wondering how Zecora will take the coming war cause she's the only zebra in Equestria so far.
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...Right. I missed that. When I first typed that word I did momentarily wonder, but for whatever reason, I didn't look it up to check...
Glad to know Shining & Cadence have been well received along with the cuteness of Flutterdash. The Angel and Tank mention gives me an extra idea.
Philomena is one pet I am keen to have in the story and she will come back a few times.
..and who says the Zebras are willingly working with the griffons?
Thanks for the review, this brightened up my day.
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