Relations begin to break down between Equestria and the griffon tribes. As war approaches, new foes and alliances emerge. The mane six find themselves in a race against time to uncover dark plans and stop the griffon chief from ending their world.
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If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
That little bit of metal was rather nice to see- felt like a nice break with the big important things set up in this chapter. Didn't expect that a hippogriff of all things would pop up in here- more like season 2 plus some stuff, though that does make that hint of a coming Changeling attack on Canterlot rather important as well since canon events are still happening in all of this absolute carnage. Cadance is Celestia's daughter, but then that makes the scene with Chaotic Sunset? rather odd, is it some split of consciousness thing due to Discord's chaos spell to get her out or is there some odd death spell as well so there's not one kid but two. Have to keep that on the brain. I'd say the realization of using Warbeak's talisman's is a guaranteed suicide mission for whoever calls on him is rather interesting. Especially with Gilda of all gryphons now wanting a hint of it. And finally the Luna and Twilight ending scene was decidedly fluffy and Twilight knows about all the mess between Luna and Celestia- besides of all things Daybreaker (wasn't expecting that either, rather interesting development there) and of all things, she gets to try out being an alicorn before season 3- maybe that hints at an earlier ascension or a secondary or alternate way to ascend? Lot of plot development to fit in one chapter but I was fully hooked.
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There will continue to be the occasional flashback and the like and that will hopefully fill in the gaps and answer questions. Although Cadence is the only living daughter Celestia knows about. Do you think I need to make that clearer in the story?
As to why Chaotic Sunset is lurking in the shadows..? You will have to keep reading to find out.
Can you tell Gilda doesn't yet know its a suicide mission, to summon Warbeak?
I have a lot more fun to be had with Twilight... and while she gets to experience the possibility of a lifechanging experience like her ascension in Season 3, there's also developments between her and Luna. Fluttershy and Dashie, who had a lot of establishing up front are out of it and at this point its kinda weird not to be writing Flutterdash in this story too. But don't worry, I have plans to fix that
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No, I figured that Celestia didn't know about at least one living daughter, just trying to connect all the dots since the sheer magnitude of all the pieces are starting to fit together nicely. Tried to figure out how Cadence and Chaotic Sunset were connected exactly since they haven't been in the same scene yet.
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Very intriguing! Are things going to be better? Yeah, I'm guessing not at all with all this buildup.
So Cadence is the daughter of Celestia and Discord... hmm but not their only?
It's quite clear that Gilda is naïve to most of the important details. Sure she picked up on some things. I don't think snooping around his office and looking to nab the artifacts for herself is going to turn out well.
Hm well, someone is going to do the summoning... and I take it that it won't go very well for that someone.
I kinda expected Luna to totally lose it already but I see that it's slowly building up which makes sense.
I yearn for the simpler things, like finding out FotR has enough updated chapters for a nice binge.