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Thanks for the well-wishes, Firesight. I'm mostly over the flu by now, but a persistent cough remains. Sorry I couldn't provide much input on this one, but I'm more than ready to help with future chapters.
Why doesn't starlight teleport to Canterlot?
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She can’t. By my headcanon, which I apply in all my works, all magic is at cost (unlike, say, Harry Potter). The further you teleport, the more mana (magical energy) you consume, and it’s not a linear relationship. To travel double the distance, you have to expend four times the magical energy, and you only have so much. So short-range teleports don’t consume much energy, but the costs rise exponentially with further distance traveled. Her maximum is ten miles, but that’s it. And she could only do it once; to travel that distance would completely drain her. This was actually a point made in Turnabout Storm, if you’ve read that. Now, she could travel along a ley line much further since she’d essentially be riding a rail, but she doesn’t have access to one. Though actually... you’ve just given me an idea. Stay tuned.
Overal great chapter. I was hoping Spike would get a bit of a lust growth idea. Increasing his muscles and size, making him a young adult.
I wonder how Mr Cake will react to this? Hopefully with him inside of his wife while both of there asses are being fucked by Spike at the same time.
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Thank you! And not to worry--things are just getting started at Sugar Cube Corner and your points about Spike and Mr. Cake have been considered. Stand by!
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Will any of the other ponies be affected and change? I be honest, while I hope some of the stallions get two penises. I hope they don't become dragons themselves, so it isn't as obvious if this infection was to spread.
Good job with this story. Don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
I've always been under the impression that, regardless of the ship or the content you're writing, it can work as long as it's done right. Doesn't matter what you're going for... well... most things can work, except for... some minor things
Nicely written you guys, good show, good show.
“Oh! Um… yeah. Reckon they went to this hedge on the edge of Everfree. We used it as a clubhouse before the Treehouse. We’ve hid out there before when there was trouble or we wanted privacy.”
Should I feel proud or ashamed that I got this reference?
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Should I feel proud or ashamed that I used it? And hey, I didn’t even have to put HEDGE in all caps like the story it came from...
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You’re very welcome. I know how much the flu sucks. I do have one or two things coming in the story that should be up your alley when you feel up to it. A new Firefly chapter is next, however... and you’re welcome as always to write for it as well.
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To say either way would be a spoiler, sorry. Just remember that the curse involves various physical transformations, and those for Spike & co. haven’t occurred yet...
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‘Done right’ being the operative words. That’s the trick, especially with a completely out-there ship like this one that would otherwise have no place or justification. But you know me... I love difficult ships. TLaTU stands as my most shining example of that.
Thank you, thank you!
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Oooohohoho yeah I do know, TLaTU is/was a good story, the previous one I read awhile back that spawned the idea for it still on my top favorites page, hehe.
No problem man, keep up the good work.
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I figured out much. Just something I thought I'd point out.
It's obvious that Mrs Cake spread the curse to her customers by spiking the drinks. Starlight is a bit too confident in her ability to stop Twilight since Twilight was holding back in their fight on faced other constraints due to the time travel.
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Apologies for it taking me a month to remember to answer this.
You are correct; that's exactly what happened/is happening back at Sugar Cube Corner, though Spike was the initial source of it. As for Starlight, let me spoiler the answer. You're correct there too; she's in for a very rude--and terrifying--awakening as to where she actually stands versus Twilight, who held back on her during their duel for fear of making things worse or shattering the spirit of a promising young mage she wanted as a student. She now faces Eclipse, who is Twilight with all restraints removed. Have to say, that's one scene I'm very much looking forward to writing...
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Hoping both that it has Very nice weather... and that Sparkle doesn't decide to go on vacation.
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I don't think it's a spoiler to say she does. She said earlier she intends to rule both Earth and Equestria, but has to take care of business on her side of the portal first...
This just makes me think of Paper Mario.
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I could see it.
The chapter clearly says she cums in the 6 drinks yet only 5 of them are known and the chapter doesn’t make it clear that there was to be a sixth unknown drink.
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Corrected to five, with apologies.