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I'm interested in seeing how Peregrine is going to transform. I also enjoyed the conversations at the start of this chapter and the scene with Luna.
And the references just keep coming! I need to go re-watch Turnabout Storm now.
I have only read up to chapter two, but I like what you're doing and that you're taking it slow. most clop fics I don't like because how quick it just gets to the mess. but I like this and am interested on how the other chapters will be, you get a follow from me and i hope i enjoy the rest of your stuff.
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Thank you! It's nice to hear from someone who appreciates storytelling and taking the time to get things setup properly before reaching the actual rutting. What's frustrating is that those stories which get there immediately are often the ones that do well and feature.
I appreciate the follow! I hope you like it too. I've got plenty of stuff to peruse, including a couple military thrillers to go with several varied but always story-driven clop stories.
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I said the same thing to Titty Sparkles earlier today. There are a few honest, hardworking clopfiction writers earning their upvotes and I'm happy to say Firesight is one of them.
Peregrine will be a sight to see, that's for sure. As for the mating fight, the bluster honestly got old. Just a lot of shouting over and over; after a while, it started to feel repetitive. Still, looking forward to more. Especially when Luna arrives on the scene.
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Well-spotted! And it never gets old.
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Indeed. I know what I want him to become, but the trick here will be to make his eventual transformation make sense in context of how the curse actually works.
I'm sorry to hear that. None of my prereaders flagged it as such. Looking over it again, you might be right. I'll have to think about how best to fix it.
I'm glad. She's on her way.
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all sounds good, your ideas put into this are different compared to other clopfics, it's weird like a lot are but it has a structure to it. a good story needs build up and the scenes you have in place, that I have read are actually good. it's just really different to most and I like different.
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So do I. I could turn out generic stuff and probably amass a pretty decent following with it, but I don't do generic. Like you, I prefer the unusual and exotic, and making sex story-driven is a must for me. The advantage of a story like this is that the structure and plot (in the corruptive nature of the curse) allows me to do pretty much whatever I like with the characters; explore any ship or topic I wish in the course of it. Needless to say, I take full advantage of that both here and in the chapters to come.
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you did good, and to be upfront I don't know incestuous means and I still don't. I don't go deep into this stuff most of the time so most terms go over my head. but it's still good so far and chapter name 'spiked drinks' I see what you did there haha. also, I never have heard of miss cake and spike but it's a ship, it doesn't always make sense and you can basically ship anyone in my eyes, there's not much of a wrong answer because who knows what interests they actually have anyway.
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am similar in that feeling, I only have one story written down with a single chapter. but I plan to make it stand out a bit as I use the materials of the dead space games, twist them around to my best ability and using that material to make my own monsters as the not many seem to expand on that front. the time is painstaking long to make the monsters and use them in a way that adds to it. I may be gerener with the evorment but the actions of the characters and monsters will be from my best ability. and to think of monsters to fit with the theme is painful I will tell you haha
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Incest means sex among family--i.e., sex between siblings (brothers/sisters) or parents/children or even cousins.
Well, the assumption here is that the curse is causing those interests, which wouldn’t be there normally. But it’s not indiscriminate--the way the curse actually works is a surprise yet to be revealed, but for now, I’ll just say even stuff like Spike/Mrs. Cake make perfect sense within its rules. Beyond that? No, I guess there’s not really a wrong answer, except in context of your own personal headcanon. You can indeed do whoever you wish, however you wish.
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Well, I haven’t played Dead Space so I can’t really comment on it. I wish you luck, however, and thank for you commenting on my story. It’s been hard getting feedback on it despite the large number of reads. I certainly understand how hard it can be to make the monsters here fit the theme and certain scenes I want at times. I’ve had some very frustrating chapters along the way.
After reading chapter 27 again it seemed to me that Eclipse and Nightmarity are the same height which would mean that Eclipse has grown as a result of the curse. I'd like to know if this is correct or if I just got the wrong impression. On a different note I am also aware that it was not just Starlight's spell and Applejack's special cider that created the curse but I'm not certain as to which other thing(s) also created it.
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This is indeed correct. The curse generally makes its hosts bigger to better enable them to catch new victims/overpower them. In Rarity's case, The Nightmare used the curse magic combined with her own to recreate the form of Nightmarity, which it wouldn't have otherwise done. If it hadn't been for her intervention, she would only have become another bestial Timberwolf, which would have been a terrible shame.
You've correctly identified two out of the three elements involved. The third was only mentioned in passing in early chapters, but given all the elements had to come together in the original host to create the curse, you might be able to figure it out by recalling who the original host was and what they were exposed to. Another clue may be found in the chapter where Sci-Twi and Sunset were analyzing the curse's magical signature and noted three separate components, one of which had a very strange energy curve that seemed to encompass and bind the rest together.
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I truncated the first section by about 1000 words to hopefully make it flow better. I cut out most of the sex scene that was previously there, which I honestly just shoehorned in to help advertise the side story and no longer matched what I’d come up with over in Temptations and Transformations anyway. Give it a read and let me know what you think. If anything else needs to change, let me know.
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Definitely reads a lot smoother. Didn't mean for you to rewrite a chunk of the chapter, but I appreciate you taking the time to do so.
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You're welcome. Thanks for pointing out there was a problem. I gave you a shout-out in my latest blog post for it.
Wait a minute...
A virus, with FlutterBAT as patient zero...
Why does this sound familiar? Maybe some Corona beer will help me remember.
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Oh my god, you're right. Firesight is Coronachan's prophet! Hail Firesight!
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Completely by accident, but yes! Now, if only being a prophet would confer immunity to me and all my readers...
finished the last chapter so far, and man this was great. i can't wait for the new chapters you'll add later on. in the med time, I'll look into your other stories hope they're as interesting as this one
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Glad you enjoyed! be sure and catch the other stories in this series if you haven’t already, including the Nightmare Night: Temptations and Transformations side story and the original Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising:
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Why do get the feeling, having read everything so far, that someone's going to have to save Starlight from an angry mob when/if the town gets cured? Correct if me I'm wrong, but didn't Twilight tell everyone Starlight started this whole thing? Personally, I think she'll have to stay on the other side of the portal for awhile (I.E the rest of her life).
I know the inhabitants of Equestria have a higher tolerance for screw ups then us humans would, but come on. I suspect at least pony will want to get back at Starlight.
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She said she had a role in it through the spell she cast, which is true. But Starlight is not solely responsible for what happened. In fact, it took an unholy alliance of several pieces of disparate magic coming together at once to create the curse in Fluttershy, who was patient zero. The other pieces were hinted at in early chapters, and Sunset and Sci-Twi's analysis of the curse in an earlier chapter gives some additional clues as to what the other elements were.
As for the aftermath, I really don't want give anything away there, except to say that there will be definite parallels with what happened at the end of Midnight Rising as well as one significant difference. I'm not into bad ends, so you can be assured it will not ultimately be for Starlight or anyone else.
A better question might be--what would certain ponies and non-ponies other than Starlight think of themselves afterwards? There will be aftershocks and consequences to be detailed at the end. And actually, I do have a scene in mind for addressing those screw ups. I also have what I will hope will be a rather pleasing epilogue or two.
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First off, thanks for the reply. Sorry mine is so late.
I agree with you that many factors were responsible. The problem is that the townsponies don't know that. All they know is what Twilight told them. And Twilight told them Starlight is solely responsible for what happened.
As for what ponies would think of themselves, I think a lot of them would be disgusted with themselves. Those feelings would then project themselves on the thing (or pony) they believe is responsible. Now, I don't expect Starlight to get killed or anything, but I imagine the town will be pretty angry at her, at least until they learn about the other factors.
Not that I'm telling you how to write your story, perish the thought!
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And I'm a week late come back to this, so no problem.
Well, yes, but what about after, when Twilight has (presumably) been restored and isn't inclined to wage psychological warfare on Starlight any longer? You could also bet that Sci-Twi and Sunset would do additional research to figure out just what the curse was and what went into it, and announce their findings. The question is, of course, will it be status quo in terms of bodies and personalities afterwards? Ain't saying yet, except that this is no bad end story.
Perhaps. It remains to be seen what lingering effects the curse may have. In fairness, we've already heard anecdotally of one pony who was cured by Sunset's group, regained his old personality and couldn't immediately deal with what he had done and become, so he just shrieked and then fainted dead away. That was in the Nightmare Eclipsed Part 1 chapter. So it is a concern, and thought has been given to it on this end.
Hey, I don't mind these comments. They're thought provoking and sometimes let me know about matters I should address sooner or later in the story. So feel free to keep making them!
Long story, but it hasn't gotten bad yet.
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Thanks, I think? No, I get what you mean. Clopfics tend to drag after a certain point and they're hard to keep fresh. I certainly didn't intend for this to get so long or involved, but here we are. It's been fun if occasionally frustrating to write for that reason; trying to keep it fresh and interesting. I'll be coming back to this story soon, and some serious action, both sexual and otherwise, lies ahead.