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Welp. They're fucked.
I truly pity Starlight now. This will not end well for her.
...How long until Celestia realises some serious magical shit is happening down in Ponyville again and arrives to cancel the spell?
Like she did in Lesson Zero?
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Given that it's currently nighttime, she's probably asleep. And we're not sure how her 'vision' powers work.
Point is, we currently have no plans to bring Celestia in.
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Figuratively and at some point literally! Just remember that despite how things look, this doesn’t have a bad end any more than the original UtM did...
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Will it, though? She’s a magical prodigy; she’s got plenty of will and is powerful enough to have fought Twilight herself to a draw in the past. Or did she...?
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Well, in fairness, she was inspired by a particularly depraved hentai... You know, if Coital Convent doesn’t exist, someone should really make it...
That’s just how irredeemably evil I am that I combine not one but two forms of emphasis! Nothing is beneath me!
You flatter me, sir! I consider that high compliment coming from a writer as good as you! Greatly enjoyed your comments on the google doc, as always!
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What Leo said. If memory serves, Celestia wasn’t aware anything was wrong in Lesson Zero until she got Spike’s letter, and one is not forthcoming at this point. Chances are good she’s asleep by now, and Luna isn’t patrolling dreams at the moment because she’s being feted in the thestral community of Hollow Shades. Discord? He’s having a grand old time running a Haunted Maze in the Canterlot Gardens and taking particular delight in tormenting Prince Blueblood. You can also be sure that
TwilightEclipse is not going to let word get out of what’s happening until she’s ready to receive guests, as it were. More on all this in later chapters.Another well done chapter, nicely written. When Granny showed up, I uh... got a little worried for a second about what was gonna happen, but thankfully I was spared
Spitfire? Hot, one of my top ships.
But Soarin as well? Gah... poor Rainbow and Spitfire, subject to such an atrocious stallion they deserve better!
But regardless of the retardation that is Soarin, nicely done, nicely written, and good show you guys! Can't wait for more.
Ohh. What will happen next? Will Granny spread the timber wolf curse to her granddaughter, next?
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Yeah, don’t worry. I don’t think anybody wanted to see that! Besides, this way is much cooler...
My opinion is that Soarin deserves better than the treatment the writers have given him. I hate his squeaky voice and lack of any and all character development. So this operates from my headcanon which says he’s a superb flyer and officer to say nothing of a loyal Lieutenant to Spitfire, who’s something of a sexual Nazi, as you may recall from the end of that Fluttershy flashback scene in TLaTU?
More will come around Christmas, following the release of another TLaTU chapter in a week or two. Be prepared!
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What makes you think Apple Bloom doesn’t already have it? It runs in the family, after all. Granny might teach her how to master it and not be consumed by it, certainly... much more on this to come!
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Oh yeah! If Granny has it, then it's no mystery that all her grandchildren have it!
Holy shit this is hot. I'm gonna follow this one.
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I agree, hehehe, so kudos!
I want to not hate him, but I'd be a hypocrite about it, because like... I honestly can't like any Stallion x Rainbow ships, Soarin kinda left a bad taste in my mouth from the ships in the fics I saw but I gave it no thought until I read this one fic, fuck... it was called uh... Dash of Humanity I think, after that I just couldn't change my view of him. Shipping Dash wit ha mare is fine, but shipping her with stallions is incredibly difficult, I'm sure that makes me petty in the eyes of many, but oh well, just my curse to bear.
Also I vaguely recall that flashback scene, hehe.
Ooooh lawdy lawdy, that'll be something, hehehe, I wish you guys luck!
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Wasn't this sequel supposed to be about the CP6 as you mentioned in the first's Author's Note? I'm not complaining about this at all, just wondering if you'd continue that line
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That sequel is still planned, but I intended all along to do two fics, one for each side of the portal. This is a companion fic more than a sequel to Midnight Rising, but as it’s in the same verse and assumes the original’s events, it was labeled a sequel.
As for when the CP6 sequel might happen? Probably towards Spring at this point. Lot of writing ahead even outside of these stories...
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Ah thanks! Good luck with all them projects
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....yeahh....keep thinking that Rarity...whatever you makes you asleep at night...no matter how much of a lie you've given yourself....and I'm sorry, but all of those reasons are nothing more than excuses....See, you didn't want him, but now that you've rejected him, a part of you now have that nagging thought of 'what could have been'....
...Too bad, so sad. I'm sure Sweetie Belle and her compadres would be more than willng to share ...'their experiences, not their drake...
A few things I would like to mention:
Her use of words and mannerisms remind me a lot of Woken Matt Hardy from WWE.
Bro, just say 'selfish' instead of 'unhumble'. It's not even a real word.
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Very well, I’ve changed that line. Afraid I don’t know much about the WWE, sorry...
So Granny mastered the form. Interesting
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Thanks! Gives an intriguing new dimension to her character and the Apples in general, I think.
Whoa. That was... very unexpected.
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Kinda explains why she's so active at her age
Unicorn?
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Fixed, thanks.