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I'm going to try not to have too much fun commenting on this chapter. I'm sure I'll fail miserably, but I will try!
Well, he is quite an extensive guy with quite an extensive dick!
So the Winningverse elements here are a transliteration written by a guy with no connection to the material, edited by two other guys who don't care whatsoever and explained by a guy (me) who only understands the most superficial aspects of the universe in question.
I still think Firesight pulled this off.
Ahem...
Gay gay gay gay gay, GAY GAY GAY gay gay gay gaaaaaay!
(rubs hands greedily)
They proceeded to argue whether or not the trap was gay.
Shut up and take my money!
I wonder if there's a mare that smells like Cashmere Woods®?
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Headcanon accepted.
Thank you, season 7. You were loved.
Littlepip *really* could have used that spell when she was taking down Canterlot! God, I have to read that chapter next... I don't wanna. I don't wanna! Í'm putting it off until next year. Fuck it!
Is nothing good enough for you, Boomer? Goddamn... You Millenials can't do anything right, dagnabit!
She took Frieza's advice and only used 1% of her power during your first battle.
And chugged down some bleach to be triple sure! Yeeeech!
Come with me if you want to live!
And she still has the school jersey with the number 69 on it to prove it.
I think I lost a contact lens!
She's descovering her batty octopus powers. Not good! I feel bad for bat carers who have to try to avoid being scratched by the little bubs. Those talons on their fingers are sharp and they can actually take a swipe at you with their two long thumbs to say nothing of their long foot claws which they use to grip tree branches and even snatch prey in certain species that adapted to eat meat.
Bats are awesome.
Now I think about it, would have been neat to have the ponies the duo was hunting be reversed. If Nymphaea hunted Star Hunter, we would have the ironic twist of him being hunted by the stars, as they are the symbol of the Highborne from Foolers Rush In.
It reminds her of a Jell-O pudding pop. Eh heh heh!
That was definitely a favorite scent of mine back in the day. Had the candles and everything.
Somewhere, in some badly written fictional universe, Christian Gray gets an odd sense of deja vu before jumping into his helicopter and stalking some poorly written female self-insert.
I WHIP MY HEAD TO THE RIIIGHT!
I can't wait until Arthur Fonzerelli and his army of clones show up and get futa thestral pole up the poop chute!
What the effing crap, that bat pony just felt me up!
Like finding out your brain surgeon is cutting for the first time and wielding a chainsaw. Yikes!
Sadly we must wait another chapter for this.
Whoa! I missed this during the preread. Nice visuals!
I will hold them off with my anus as long as I can! HURRY!
This next chapter is going to kill me. And I'm going to enjoy every second of it!
You played the bat pony angle very well and threw in a lot of useful references to bat anatomy. I guess the only thing I would have changed if I was writing this is focusing on thumbs over fingers, of which only the first and third are long enough to do much and are dwarfed by the extreme length of the Chiropteran thumbs. Of course, considering the size of ponies compared to bats, fingers may be just as well.
Whew! I miss my old reliable gallon of tea for chapters like this! I may need to buy one for next chapter.
I smell a rapin' bout ta happen next chapter, poor pones.
Starlight and the others gotta act fast! Run girls, run!
Good work Firesight.
Open Skies is actually a mare and I think you should use Fluffy Clouds instead who is a stallion. I haven't actually read the whole chapter yet but I already enjoyed what I've read so far.
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You had me worried there! I double and triple-checked: Open Skies is a stallion. The proof is in Tanks for the Memories:
https://youtu.be/E8-1TuT5tA0?list=PLOYPh0D-IHNo0qfAXIX2-MIwojmocNrQ1&t=60
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You are right I thought the 2 mares were called Open Skies and Clear Skies. I have now read the whole chapter and I'm enjoying it very much and Eclipse shouldn't underestimate Trixie so much and based on Eclipse's attitude towards the showmare I'm guessiong this happens before the Uncommon Bond. The part with the weatherteam was very enjoyable.
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After a very busy week both on the work and writing fronts, I'm finally kicking back a bit. Time to answer these!
Well, you were certainly having enough fun commenting on the google doc!
Well, there had to be *some* reason the Wonderbolts accepted him even though Rainbow Dash preceded him into the Bolts and it was suggested in season 2 (during Hurricane Fluttershy) Rainbow didn't much like him or thought him a slacker. Kettle, meet pot...
Thanks! That is the perfect summary of this, and I consider it high compliment that even the one who has the barest understanding thinks it works.
As you well know, it is a scientific fact that thestral stallions automatically turn any other male gay. But still, the qustion must be asked: are they as gay as this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DvCl2WLIlT8
That would take up the entire story if I let it!
That's true! She should be hawking that instead of Twilight Sparkle Cereal in G4M!
Ditto!
And to think we had doubts about it through the first half of it. My god did it redeem itself through episodes like this, to say nothing of giving us Daybreaker!
I probably don't wanna know. You're made of stern stuff, my friend, to go through that chapter by chapter and longpost!
Yeah, well, back in her day, they could only turn torches into saucers and they had to drink from those! After walking back and forth from home to work uphill in sixty feet of snow both ways, of course.
Not quite that extreme, but... it's fair to say Twilight wasn't really trying. She may well find that out as soon as the next chapter!
You have to admit, her younger self was quite the looker! And just supposing for a moment that the curse is in fact working on her but has to first give her a form suitable for its purposes... and that means it has to de-age her, which isn't an instant process?
Perfect. But nobody has yet spotted the Star Wars reference towards the end! Of course, you wouldn't get that if you haven't seen the original trilogy...
It's still in her closet somewhere! Right beside her Las Pegasus showmare costume she got on her last trip there.
And given how big they'd have to be for pony eyes, she now owes him hundreds of bits to replace them!
Indeed they are! And thanks to all the bat videos we've shared, we can now speak somewhat intelligently about their anatomy and capabilities, even if I'm taking some liberties here. They do have batty octopus powers, though! Beware!
True. I didn't know that about the Highborne, though. Or at least didn't remember. If I thought of it originally, I might have just done that. Of course, we lose all of Shadowdash's teasing plays on his name while she's taking him.
Dammit... now I want one! Of course, I can't think of them now without remembering the Bill Cosby commercials about them back in the day, and now those are tainted for very obvious reasons...
I loved the ice cream, myself. And once in a while I'll still get a black cherry soda, of which you can find some good off-brand ones.
My respect for you only grows at having read that book, even in the interests of science. I won't touch it.
Hey, I think that would be an excellent MLP episode for season 9! Might even almost redeem season 8...
There are worse things in life! But not many better ones...
Who's your brain surgeon; Leatherface?
Apologies. but at 10k words, this was already by far the longest chapter and I really needed to get it out. Promises to keep and all...
It wasn't there before! I put it in at the last second when I was giving the chapter a final pass. If you can keep a secret, I did it at work. You'd be surprised at how creative you can be and the quality of writing you can do when you're bored or need a break from your real work. Just don't get caught!
And you just *know* I"m going to find a way to work that line in now...
If it does, you'll die happy, promise!
Yeah, I may yet make some tweaks to this. Thanks, though!
Whew! I miss my old reliable gallon of tea for chapters like this! I may need to buy one for next chapter.You may need something stronger for this one! May I recommend Fireball whiskey?
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Thanks! But thestral stallions turn all other males gay, it seems--that’s a running joke among my prereaders. And besides, who could resist that wonderful Wonderbolt plot? Certainly not Star Hunter or Open Skies! Of course, they’ll all need new names after this, same as Blossomforth renaming herself Nymphaea...
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Thank you! And hopefully the big finale of it will be as well!
As for Uncommon Bond, I hadn’t really thought about it, but I suppose it might make sense in terms of timeline. I’m pretty sure that episode didn’t assume that Starlight was already in a relationship with Trixie, though!
Eclipse is indeed underestimating Trixie, and perhaps thinking a bit too much of her predictive powers. But more on that later. For now, things are more or less going to plan for her, and she couldn’t be happier.
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But what if the clouds were found to be useful for rapidly spreading the curse after they’ve tucked on them? Look out below!!!!
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The rest yes
man this is getting really interesting, I am noticing a little pattern as who they have sex with can and will add traits to them and not just change there appearance. shadowdash getting her thingy, all of them becoming bat-ponys of sorts. and the stuff with spike, I can tell that this will get a lot more interesting as I read more of this. wonder what other transformations there will be.
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I'm glad you're liking it!
Indeed. In fairness, the curse does have some limits with what it can do; there are still some rules governing the transformations which will hopefuly become more apparent over time.
That's the idea! I like to think this is a very unique clopfic with extremely original takes on things.
I could tell you, but what would the fun be of that? All I'll say is that bat-ponies won't be the only enhanced/corrupted pony form when all is said and done, but I'll leave that to you to discover. Just read and hopefully enjoy!