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It's always the quiet ones.
This can only end well... *Laughs evilly*
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Always the most repressed, yes! But it isn’t just Fluttershy who has a repressed dark side within her... far from it in this story!
I’m enjoying this so far. Starlight is really well written, and to be blunt, there’s a criminal lack of Starlight focused clop stories out there.
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For a moment there, I thought you said, "a lack of criminal Starlight focused", which is somewhat true - I haven't seen a whole lot of 'evil Starlight'.
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Guess that depends on the definition of ‘well’!
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Appreciated, thanks! And yes, that is odd considering how much shipping potential she has with various ponies from Sunburst to Maud to Trixie. I’m actually glad I didn’t write this last year as I originally intended now, because the new season gave me a lot more to work with regarding her character and, say, Trixie.
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Maybe because we already saw her ‘evil’ side? Well, she wasn’t so much evil as deeply hurt and misguided, but still...
Second chapter in, and the clop's just getting started... whew... okay, next chapter, this'll be veeeeeery interesting.
Good work so far, hehehe... oooh poor Flutters, this is gonna end crazily.
I feel like Celestia would outright ban mind magic... Feels too dangerous...
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Well, such a spell is normally only supposed to be known or used by licensed clinicians. But Starlight being Starlight, she doesn’t really care about the rules, and as Twilight notes at some point, her biggest fault is that she tends to overrely on magic to solve problems since she’s so good at it. This time, however, it will bite her hard in the flank. Though in fairness, she couldn’t possibly anticipate the confluence of events and mixing of magic to come!
Ooh, this seems really fun! The prose is lovely so far, and I’m always in the mood for Starlight stories that focus on her magical abilities.
Also, Twilight, Flash is at least five years younger than you. Of course, your counterpart is probably dating Sunset, who’s like 35, so the bar is low.