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I enjoyed this chapter a lot and I'm looking forward to the next one. I hope that part 2 will contain a bit more sex since this chapter didn't have much of that. I also loved how Eclipse managed to seize control of the Sirens and this chapter shows that without help from the human world Eclipse would certainly have won.
Before I start reading I want to thank you Firesight. I haven't been feeling very well for some time and despite your considerable obligations over the holidays have found time to hang out with me online and watch the good old season 1 MLP episodes. I will repay your kindness in full someday. You're a good friend. For now, I think I owe you commentary on this chapter which promises much to talk about!
Why must the ponies hog her so much? Surely Luna can raise the sun from Hollow Shades? Maybe after the show ends in canon she finally goes home to rule over Thestralslovakia. Sounds a lot better to me than going "on vacation".
I'm going to steal your joke from the google doc:
She must have turned off her friend or foe indicator. She's gone broken arrow on us!
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Or if she is friendly that she'll stay that way.
That's good or her to spare the thestral's innocence. I don't think they really understand or care to understand why ponies are so open about sex. I While I don't imagine thestrals being puritans by any stretch, I think they like to keep that sort of thing between concerned parties. If they knew how goddamn sexy they were everyone would be going to Thestralslovakia as sex tourists and that would disturb the feng shui to put it lightly.
The boy bats — you can see he's got a penis there — we call them "dashes". The girl bats over here who you can see doesn't have a penis, we call them "dots".
The only evidence the Kirin ever existed is ancient statues located in modern-day Chineigh and legends of their tyranny and destructive anger which brought about their downfall. I'm sure they're just some metaphor or something...
A magical chimera virus with no known creation that by all laws of magic shouldn't even exist. This isn't a red-wire/blue-wire scenario it's the entire goddamn Radio Shack!
Doctor Robotnik is fucking with the ponies too?
It's okay Sunset; they'll never find the body. It will be our little secret!
The magic here sounds a lot like light with a vast spectrum of which we can only detect a small part with our eyes. I imagine unicorns have built a number of machines or otherwise to study at least some of these different beams or parts of the spectrum.
Magical energy that breeds itself off of other magical creatures and is itself extremely infectious. And I thought syphilis is bad!
No reset button? Fuck me, we're doomed!
Fair enough. I realize that having Fallout Equestria as my Prima Scriptura gives me a somewhat warped view of My Little Pony but in my defense episodes from season 4 regarding evil books and plunder vines confirmed a great many of biases about the place being unrestrained evil. If FoEpoisoned my perception of the place than season 4 didn't help at all!
If anyone needs me I'll be in the next segment!
Or a living conductor. I'm not sure I buy the idea of a non-alicorn being able to store the kind of power necessary to cure all these people when she can't store the amount of her own power to do the job herself. If it's a matter of volume she could siphon off any energy source until she had the power to do the job since she always had the ability to store all this power but not to generate it.
I am a pone and I'm digging a hole. Diggy diggy hole. Diggy diggy hooole!
From an old man's child, perhaps? Now that's real music!
I had my coming to metal story back in 2005. The guys at work were playing Cradle of Filth. Once you go Black (metal) you truly never go back!
His early days were terrible but these days Bieber puts out some decent enough music. It's just blatantly obvious when he was younger he had no fucking talent and zero charisma. His fame was purely manufactured and entirely undeserved. Thanks, Canada!
Hammerspace, hyperspace, or interdimensional space, Pinkie Pie is your gal for showing up where she doesn't belong. I can't help but accept on its face that Pinkie is not only in communication with her double on the other side but willing to swap places with her on a whim.
It's like riding into hell on the back of a galumphing elephant! I fucking love Old Man's Child! \m/
I told you to edit that! As an aside, the same man runs both groups so in a sense they are both the same band. I just happen to think Old Man's Child is better.
That next battle... Oh I can't wait!
Okay, I normally I do one comment but Firesight has linked me part of the dragon sections, which I usually avoid, and this is hilarious! Special edition comment time.
That's certainly nice of her but Gordon Ramsay will tell you that if you're comping meals that will catch up with you in the end. In plagued Equestria getting it "in the end" is an all too literal possibility!
I'm getting flashbacks of Kit n' Kay Boodle comic strips. If you don't know what that is you didn't find out about it from me! I'm strictly into feral types and have a reputation to uphold.
This whole scene needs suitably surreal music:
There we go! I'm sufficiently grounded to read on.
There is always time for pastry! ALWAYS! Love that bit about having total recall. Ms. Cheerilee's understatement matches this scene brilliantly.
What a wild, wild scene! Holy shit sensei! Wow!
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I'm glad!
I'll see what I can do. More is coming, and more is certainly owed after I used Coitus Interruptus on Spike and the CMC.
I'm happy to hear you say that. How she would beat the sirens was actually something I struggled with for a while. Eclipse is actually on the verge of winning now, but she hasn't yet, either over The Nightmare, or the Twilight/Delta/Sunset combo. Then there's Luna lurking out there as well...
PS: I do want to thank you personally for being a regular commenter on this story, of which I have too few. It is very much appreciated. The usual pattern on chapter releases for this is that I get lots of reads and little feedback, which I find a bit disappointing.
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You're very welcome, my friend. I'm sorry you had such a rough go of it over Xmas, and these longposts of yours are excellent repayment in their own right. I was always look forward to seeing them!
That would be vast improvement over final season canon, not that that's difficult.
Hey, I'm no Denim_Blue, but I can come up with a good joke once in a while!
IFF returns negative. I cast Magic Missile!
And including illustrations by Backlash91 is always welcome. Can't wait to see what he comes up with for Firefly!
That too. As has become clear, Delta and Sunset have a bit of a history from back when the latter was Celly's student. And not a particularly happy one at that. I'm just glad Leo Archon seems to approve of my treatement of Delta. She's his character, after all.
Instead of just Roseluck? Luna knows them, and she's revered by them in both our canons. I don't really have ideas about their sex lives like you do, as the only time I even made a thestral flirtatious was Viscount Alucard in TAS/TLaTU towards Rarity.
"Wow, Pony sex-ed sure is hard, Sunset."
"Um... probably shouldn't use the word 'hard', Twilight..."
Dragons are legends common to most more developed societies of the world. It's *very* interesting how so many different cultures came up with variations on the same mythical race...
I remember reading an article many years ago discussing whether dragons might have actually existed in some form; even coming up with four different plausible species of them. They even found a biological mechanism by which they could breathe fire, if not as spectacularly as movies show.
But Radio Shack finally went defunct, so now we need a new metaphor.
Great. That means we'll be seeing Sonic appear in MLP shortly. Well, as long as he looks more like his second live-action incarnation instead of the first! My god, that was awful...
But they did listen to fans and fix it, unlike, say, Disney. And that alone gets my respect and earns them a ticket from me. I will go see it when the time comes.
You know, she never did answer the question of what happened to her human counterpart! But actually, I do have an answer for what forbidden spell she tried. I'm thinking seriously of using it later on in the story when it's time for Sunset to confront Eclipse.
That's exactly the way I envision it. Instead of an electromagnetic spectrum, they have an ethereomagical one?
I just pulled that out of my posterior, but I like that. I'll use it.
Even Star Trek scientists couldn't solve this one!
Be careful what you say around cursed ponies! But it remains to be seen if the curse is curable... let's see what Delta can do!
Yeah, well, this is just another time where I'm discarding canon and substituting my own to make MLP and Equstria more to my liking. I'd actually forgotten about the plunder vines until you mentioned them.
See you on the other side! Though I did share a certain section of that with you because I thought you'd like it.
I've decided based on your comments that battery is the wrong word here. I'll use conductor instead and fix it.
Maud's life in a nutshell, and he she loves it.
Just ask Limestone!
Not really my thing, but I get why some people like it. And it would be a lie to say I haven't enjoyed some metal myself, considering my overuse of Sabaton songs!
Are you talking about him, or Justin Trudeau?
And now Limestone does, too!
Oops! Sorry. I misunderstood your instructions earlier. It's fixed now.
First I have to write it! That ending sequence kind of popped up there and now I have to address it in the next chapter while still getting the other stuff you've already read in. That's going to be tricky, but I think I've figured out how to do it.
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I thought you'd like it! Cheerilee/Cup Cake is kind of one of those slightly wacky ships that might actually work if you think about it for a bit. I mean, they're roughly the same age, both earth ponies, and probably both need escapes from time to time. I find it perfectly plausible that they were an item back in the day, or at least got drunk and had a fling in Las Pegasus one or twice. What happens there stays there! Unless, of course, Sexually Transmitted Curses are involved!
He's not wrong! But then again, this is a celebration of sorts... and the cover charge was paid in other ways!
I do know, and for the sake of your reputation, I'll say no more than that!
Okay, I'm definitely stealing that music for later!
Thanks! I'll probably have to let those two get together later in the story!
And that's just what I showed you! Trust me, what's behind it and how things got to that point is even wilder, but for the sake of your anti-Spike sensibilities, I'll spare you the details.