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Sexy and fun. You write well.
Ooof, they were so close to escaping and finding help, yet... they goofed, poor girls next time, maybe, or maybe Starlight and them will find a way to ungoof things.
Good show, Firesight.
This was a great chapter and I like that Nymphaea has a chance to dominate Cloudkicker and show the latter how inconsiderate she's been to her friend. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
Good stuff :) I know you mentioned earlier that Discord & Celestia aren't specifically an item here, but I hope we get a glimpse of whatever game they are playing when we last left them.
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Thank you! I consider that high compliment.
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Well, if they got away, that wouldn’t be as fun! Unless, of course, they tried to find help at Twilight’s castle or Sugar Cube Corner... but if I did that, then Blossomforth/Nymphaea wouldn’t at long last get hers, and that was the main goal here. Once again, a pure clop story I’m writing ends up having emotions intrude. Funny, that.
This isn’t a bad end story, so things have to get (mostly) ungoofed eventually, same as in the original UtM. The better question is if Starlight will be the one to do it, or if it involves two names in the story’s character tags that haven’t really been involved yet...?
Thanks! And on a side note, I promise I’ll finish reviewing your latest tonight.
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I appreciate you saying so! That’s what I was going for. Like I said above, it’s funny how even if my straight clop stories, I end up letting some genuine feelings intrude. And that even consumed by the curse as they are, the basic desires and core needs of the characters don’t really change.
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You might just hope, as both will certainly be heard from again. Really should check in on Luna at some point, too...
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What more need be said?
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I'll take your word for it, so awesome job on this story man, legit, hehe. And yeah, sorry, just my mind's zeroing in on other stuff when I read this
And that's perfectly fine, Sight, you've done such an amazing job on it the past year or so, take all the time you need
Reading parts of this story again I must say that Nymphaea is one of my favourite characters in this story. It might have to with my strong dislike of the Winningverse Cloudkicker based on the blogs Jordan179 wrote about that version of the character. Based on those lbogs the reactions Rainbow and Blossomforth have to Cloudkicker are more plausible then in the original stroy where everypony just accepts her behaviour with no explanation. Though just like Firesight I have never actually read that story.
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I’m very sorry for not responding to this at the time you posted it. I published a new chapter today only to realize that I hadn’t answered any comments on this story for nearly a year.
Thanks! Yeah, I’ve heard she provokes strong reactions in people. As you say, I haven’t read it, and yet, I’m able to write a scene about it based on reputation alone.