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I'm going to make the longpost later. I have to focus on this one scene first. Holy shit!
You know, I ain't gay or anything... but I am being completely sincere in saying that I have never read anything in my six years of being a degenerate clopper read anything that has turned me on as much as the following scene. I must have spent a good hour and a half building on it because I loved the concept so much. I was honored to contribute to it.
It's no secret I'm hit or miss with success with my clopfiction and I think this sort of thing is a big reason. I can't resist catoring to myself before the reader - which is considered totally not cricket by the 4chan message boards. I can't help it though. You have the attributes of "collapse from within" resistance breakdown and ear fetish meshed perfectly here. I just had to do it! For Firesight's normal readers who just don't get ears, I'm sorry! Some things just aren't an option when it comes to Muh Dick.
"Is... is this foalcon, Colonel?"
"No, Private... It's winning!"
It's been six years since I came read another author's work. 0 days since last nut. Holy shit, Sensei. This was truly your finest scene!
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Thanks for that!
Longer post tomorrow.
The exclamation point density in the Canterlot sections isn't as bad as it could be. It makes sense that everyone's excited during that initial rush. (And the dissolving armor was a very nice touch.) Sometimes the excited, almost comic book-like narration works. Other times...
Yeah. Not so much.
"And I know what you're thinking. For the love of all you hold dear, do not mention World of Warcraft."
Oh, if only it were that easy...
Thrilling stuff. Definitely looking forward to the heavy hitters throwing down.
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Too late... I already have!
I got earplay to feature twice in 2020. 💪
This is an interesting chapter. I hope we will learn more about the history between Delta and Juniper. Eclipse's statement about Juniper is concerning. The kinks in this chapter did nothing for me and I'm slightly dissapointed that we didn't get to see any background ponies from Canterlot altough the teaser made clear that this was to be expected.
I still hope that we get to see some other background ponies such as: Minuette, Twinkleshine, Lemon Hearts and Moondancer but also Flitter and Cloudchaser. Given that the latter two are frequently paired with Thunderlane he might have converted them and it would be interesting to see what happens to those he converts given that he's hal Nightborne and half Lightborne.
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Yeah, I know that ain't for everyone, but it's impossible for a story like this hit the mark with every reader on every kink. For me, it was less about that (though I still liked it!) than the five-on-one by the stallions with porn star names. Hopefully the rest of it was good. I did try to be more cognizant of the exclamation points for you this time, but as you say, there were definitely points here they were called for.
Credit AJA for this lore. It's all his, and is also being referenced in Firefly. As a bonus, I'm mentioning historical thestral-related events in this story that will happen later in Firefly. It's my way of linking stuff together and providing additional interest.
Easy? No. But it's going to be quite fun, both in terms of sex and battle!
Thanks! A couple more scenes to get through first, and then you'll get your wish. I don't think I'm giving anything away to say that first at bat will be Sunset Shimmer, and though it's not part of the current plan, she's got a major magical trick up her sleeve that's only been hinted at thus far.
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In due course. That's kind of a little side interest right now. It first needs to be worked out fully between the owners of the OCs.
I'm very sorry to hear that. Like I said to Implausible Deniability, there's no way for a story like this to hit the mark on every kink with every reader. The hope, therefore, is that there's enough in here for everyone, and that the surrounding worldbuilding/storytelling will carry you through the chapters you're not that into.
The stallions-on-teen scene with earplay was homage both to AJA's thestral lore and two recent story features regarding them. If you're just not into the gay stuff, the following chapter won't have it since Luna will be front and center.
With apologies, I'm not sure where I gave you that impression, but I'll try and make a point to get them in later. Maybe even next chapter.
I'll see about mentioning them or having some quick scenes with them, but I'm running out of time in this story and need to hit the climax. If you like, I'll try to tell their stories over in Temptations & Transformations. As for Thunderlane, I admit that's a very good point and question. I really should explore that, and I already find myself with some ideas along those lines. So stay tuned.
Thanks for commenting, as always.
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I'll just use this comment to clarify things in regards to my original comment. When I mentioned expectations I actually meant that I didn't expect background ponies to show up because it's focused on the conversion of the Night Guard and not any civilians. Where those background ponies get mentioned (in this story or the side story) doesn't matter to me and it doesn't really have to be long. Minuette, Twinkleshine and Lemon Hearts are interesting in the context of this story since while they live in Canterlot they have been celebrating Nightmare Night in Ponyville at times.
I hope this clears up any possible misunderstandings caused by my first comment
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Ah, I see now. Sure, I can do that. I'll make a point of it in the next chapter.
Is every Bat pony secretly colt-cuddling Neighponese smut fan or it just the guards?
Ominous and unsettling. The plot is geting thickier.
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Some of them are. But some of them are just turning colt-cuddler due to the way the curse works. I said in my latest blog that this chapter showcases all three major ways the curse induces the sexual activity that enables it to spread. See if you can figure out what they are!
Or maybe thiccer in this case, but yes. Thank you for saying so, as that's exactly what I was going for.