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Poor Sci-Twi. You just want to give her a hug and maybe a therapy session. Goodness knows she could use both.
You didn't think Pinkie got all the impossible genes, did you?
There are stories waiting to be told...
Wow, talk about the full package. Peregrine's certainly had an interesting night. And Sunset's in for one as well. Then it's a clash of transformed Twilights, and there's no telling who'll come out on top there. Especially if the humans manage to send a spell through the portal.
Looking forward to more.
I greatly enjoyed this chapter and the fact that the transformation of Peregrine also changed the CMC was nicely done though I'm happy that the change wasn't permanent. I hope that the Nightmare failed ion taking over her new host and that we're now finally rid of her. It's obvious that Midnight greatly overestimates her own capabilities. I'm looking forward to more.
OK, I didn't think it ould be so long, so I'm sorry in advance. And I'm warning you, spoilers.
There are stories waiting to be told... Wonder when Sunset was in the middle of discovering her powers she heard Midnight in Twilight's head? Or she she tried to pull Sunset into her Dreamscape?
Well, most creatures probably wouldn't mind that. Look at Shadowbolts.
This is foreshadowing. Or at least very tempting.
Don't you just love the moment when the all-mighty villain realize that they're at disadvantage? That all their effort were in vain. When the realisation creeps into their minds and fear into their hearts. Because I sure do.
Ohh well, I'm sure they're gonna get her later. People like her never learn.
Can think of two options, assuming there is no holes in my logic.
She's... got a point. Hunting may be arousing but is not harmonious much.
So they live in Colorado? Don't know why I'm surprised.
Yeah, you may have to share him, Marble. Assuming Fluttershy will allow it.
...as long as they're happy together...
You know, it's very heartwarming that even as corrupted sex obsessed predators most families stays together and the first people they want to convert are other members. That'skind of sweet in very perverted way.
So, you gonna turn Mudbriar into statue, too? Not it's a bad thing, it would definitely boost his charisma and social skills but what about cuddling? Stones in general are better at cuddling up to not getting cuddles from them.
Good people usually don't think about conquering one world. Maybe a neutral.
Can you believe it's been five years? Where did that time go?
She's walking Friendship problem. Same goes to Sunset. She's playing her like a fiddle. Get a room you two.
It's obvious but her over-confidence will end her. Midnight has great power and ability to learn magic quickly but her oponent too. And Twilight studied magic her whole life. And she has an army. And a dragon. Would she attack Spike even if he's not her Spike?
I'm sure she just want an equal or even someone who could dominate her. Let's remember who was on the top last time.
C'mon, Sunset, don't cheat on your girl with an evil version of her. She can see everything you know?
It actually would be interesting. Midnight would be just taller with pitch-black wings but how would Sunset change? into her Demon or Angel form? Or maybe a mix of both?
Don't remember if it waspointed out but what happens with Sci-twi's glasses when Midnight takes control.
Have no comment for the last part, sans it reminds of times when I put together the coolest parts of my LEGO sets. Perry's gonna be very popular.
There she is. Our Hero ready to save the day. Or at least to set up the stage to save it. If not... Equestria is tucked, figuratively and literally.
Sorry again for overwriting. It's lots of going on, can't wait for the (pre)final confrontation. Looks like it's gonna be Something. Big. Awesome chapter like always.
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She may yet be getting both in a way she doesn't suspect!
We did see some fleeting evidence in canon that Maud had the same place-to-place hopping abilities that Pinkie had when she was in Manehattan with Pinkie and Rarity, when she suspected Rarity was trying to avoid telling her something and wouldn't let her get away with it. That was, ironically, well past the point that Pinkie Pie stopped using them, which is something I'm still annoyed at the writers for as they deliberately depowered her along with the rest.
The stories are there. I can't say if I'll ever get to telling them, sorry. For now, I leave it to the imagination of the readers as to what happened.
That's one word for it! I actually went back and forth a bit on what his final form would be.
You got it. But don't think Sunset's going to be pushover even if/when things go wrong.
More is coming! Thanks for commenting, as always.
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Glad you liked! Especially glad you liked that little twist at the end. In the end, I guess I decided I liked Perry and really wanted to treat his character well. It would also be a lie to say I didn't enjoy writing those scenes with him! Lucky griffie...
Midnight is formidable but not invincible--much like Eclipse. Her overconfidence may yet be her undoing, but the same could be said for Eclipse as well.
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Hey, don't be sorry! I love longpost comments because they give the kind of feedback I crave. I don't get them very often except from maybe one or two people who specialize in them. They're often very enjoyable to read and best of all, you can come back to them again and again.
She's probably got a few insights on Midnight thanks to her ability to absorb memories, yes, but I don't think she'd let Midnight attack her that way. She's smarter and stronger than that, but that said, she might not object to going in the dreamscape with her for some fun! She does have a bit of a crush on her, after all.
With the exception of Lemon Zest, the Shadowbolts have a bit of a love/fear relationship with Midnight, as they know full well she can turn them into her playthings again at any time. But they also know how much they'll enjoy it, and they'd be lying if they said they didn't like their new futa features.
Good. Then I hit the mark I was aiming for.
The Nightmare is supposed to be a villain you love to hate. She was even more of a monstrosity over in The Lawyer and The Unicorn and readers there were anxious and eager to see her go down at the end.
Very true. For all her acquired knowledge, there are certain lessons she'll never learn for the very simple reason that they would render her motives and everything she wants pointless.
I won't say who it is for now, but whether she succeeded or failed, you will find out the answer when all is said and done.
I'll let Pinkamena answer this one in this next paragraph.
Seemed the most likely place as it had the biggest variety of terrain to match the surroundings we'd previously seen.
You'll find out!
Exactly. Love doesn't usually make sense, after all.
They really do love each other. And the emphasis and converting friends and families makes perfect sense in context of how the curse actually works, which I haven't actually revealed yet.
If memory serves, Mudbriar was turned into stone in one the last season episodes regarding cockatrices. When he was turned back, Maud said she had mixed feelings. :rainbowoops:
I didn't say she was good. She's dark, just not evil in the traditional sense.
You got me. This year especially, I wish I could go back five years. Midnight Rising still accumulates likes and readers, though and whenever I release a new Nightmare Night chapter, I tend to pick up readers on the original Unleash the Magic story.
On different levels, they'd both like nothing more!
All valid questions. And you will get answers by story's end, but I will say this: both Midnight and Eclipse share one critical weakeness--hubris. They both think they're invincible and that they're the superior version. They're not.
Sure. For what point is there in ruling if there's nothing and nobody who can challenge you? If you have nobody to sharpen your skills against or rule alongside?
Unfortunately, Sunset can't be with plain Twilight because she's terrified of her own sensuality after how it burst out of her before in the form of Midnight. Midnight is ultimately the expression of all her suppressed and rejected desires. That's not exactly a healthy way to have outlets for them, but since she doesn't provide any others, Midnight is what happens.
Once again, maybe you'll get a chance to find out as the story continues!
You're right. I need to address that.
He already is! What can I say? I really liked the guy so I gave him an epic series of scenes and eventual transformation.
I've had readers say that they actually root for the villains in this story! And very possibly for a bad end. What end will actually happen? Well, I'll all say for now is it won't be status quo after as memories of these events will not be lost.
No need to apologize! Like I said, I love longposts like this. This is very much appreciated, and I tried to give an equal effort in reply. Thanks again!
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Don't worry about it. Lot's (if not all of them) good stories are not rated high or that popular at the start. Look at "Who's ready for trouble" or "Phoenix Born" or "Friendship Souls" - All great titles, that are still in the process of gaining likes and readers.
And there is that constant obstacle called "Real Life". Some people may just don't have time to read.
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Huh, now that I think about-would that mean Sunset's demon form represent her lust while represent Daydream her love?
Forgot about this one.
They don't sleep in the same bed? Is it an Amish ponies thing? Love or hate this curse, this is a solid improvement. Hm, wonder how other Mane Parents would react seeing their daughters in this state. Pretty sure Windy and Hothoof would argue (or let Dash choose) who'd go first only for Dash to be not 100% if is effect of te curse.