After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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9591737
I remember when Sunset said After all this we're even...not even close, Twilight totally screwed over Sunset and her family, there no telling how long it will take before things can ever be repaired.
IF IF they can be repaired
Sunset lost a lot of trust from her family, Shining furious with her, Velvet is confused but still putting faith in things working out, but she hurting.
Sci Twi not sure how she feels anymore, she hurting, and devastated, and their daughter has no real connections to Sunset. If that can be fixed or not I don't know.
i want Twilight to pay for this big time, if she loses Sunset friendship that be the best. I hope they cut off the connections to the portals for life and she burns the journals to ash.
is this chapter supposed to have 2 titles?
Coming Soon... The Iron Shimmer... *plays Iron Man Intro*
9615999
Minor mixup with my notes. Chapter was titled wrong, issue has been fixed!
9622114
given how hard you work on this series I think we can let a minor mistake like this go lol
9622222
You haven't even seen how much Act VII will destroy me.
Long as hell, and split into two parts. Act VII Part 1 and Act VII Part 2.
FML.
9622333
im sure if the rest of the story is anything to go by its guna destroy us all lol. now im looking forward to it even more
I’ll be mildly disappointed if Scrappy Unexpected Hero doesn’t need to use the prototype to Save the Day When All is Lost.
Sunset’s mnemonics are almost exactly how I memorize long strings of numbers.
9615648
Totally agreed!
Also I have this Scenario in my head where serenade gets to the human world and takes Horizon hostage and Twilight has a gun or something onto serenade but she obviously has Horizon and then sunset points a gun at twilight and says if she won't lower the gun in the next 10 seconds she will shoot Twilight and then she actually shoots.
I feel like Twilight really needs to see how much she actually messed with Sunset.
Also I hope the final confrontation happens in the human world because whenever we are in equestria, the writing quality just drops an insane amount. Idk if that is because Serenade is just a boring villain or sth else but still I'm always bored during the Equestria sections and always love it when we go back to the human world because for what ever reason that is just waaaay Better!!!
10389518
Pretty much everything after Act VI is in the human world shy of a handful of flashbacks or minor scene changes. 95% of the remaining story is in the human world though.
Uh doesn't 1+2+3+4 for the second code add up to 10 not 8?
10625411
Typo, I don't know why it added the word "two" haha!