After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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Basically how I felt when I thought you weren't going to post today. https://youtu.be/RYhKtsbyB6c
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I came in a little late, but still met the deadline!
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This story is one of my favorite on this site honestly and I'm already waiting on the next chapter with bated breath. Keep up the great work!
I'm sorry. You lost me here. A collar is big deal in BDSM relationships and only after firm rules are set. I feel this is moving way too fast if this is the kind of relationship they're going to have.
I'm not overly thrilled with the shipping going on and the fact that Sunset's gone goth, but I acknowledge that's my own personal dislikes and I can get past those, but that plus events here means this chapter is where I get off. I'm sorry.
I've enjoyed the ride up to this point. It's been exciting and engaging, and you are one of the most talented writers I've seen on this site. I look forward to any other stories you tell in the future.
Ok I was expecting twilight and sunset to certainly have a...different kind of relationship but I certainly wasn’t expecting this. I most certainly want to see how that pans out.
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Not all kinks belong to a community. Also some people actually do "just go for it" without needing to lay out ground rules if they never intend to go so far. Sex sometimes can be spontaneous without all this need for rules and prior discussion. Not to mention it's not uncommon for the inexperienced to not realize that prior discussion would be needed for such a thing.
That and have you seen EQG lately? Sunset has *always* been going alternative. However being that me and my wife are both into the alt scene, I feel I must correct you. What Sunset is doing is far from goth. She is merely alternative. Which if you pay attention to the show, she's always been, in fact she's gotten progressively more so since she was introduced. Going from wearing just a biker jacket to the jacket and heeled boots with skinny jeans then to the studded vest, studded boots and even spiked headphones.
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As you can see, in the actual movies, Sunset herself has indeed grown progressively more alternative. I merely took it to the next logical step.
While I do hope you'd continue to see how the story plays out after so long, I can't force you. I thank you for your readership, though it may disappoint you to know any other fanfictions I produce will likely be in this story's universe,
Well, that was not quite the average encounter for a couple of virgins, but, y’know, hawt.
And more new characters. Don’t get me wrong, I’m generally enjoying the new storylines. Galeal and Eclipse look like they’ll be an adorable couple. And I know this is a huge, sprawling story you’ve conceived of. I just am starting to get flashbacks to Robert Jordan and am worried that as the complexity increases the plot will grind to a halt. But it certainly hasn’t happened yet and I should probably just trust you.
Either there's a misunderstanding of biology here, or they went from zero to extreme fringe fetishes in under 5 minutes.
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Or a typo.
“Bend over,” Sunset commanded, her voice filled with confidence and command as she ordered the girl.
Nodding, Sunset leaned forward and her small skirt lifted slightly over her rear exposing a pair of soft purple panties. Sunset grinned and reached forward and placed a hand on Twilight’s bottom, running it along the firm rump and gently tracing her inner thigh before forcefully running two fingers along the outline of Twilight’s tender womanhood.
Don't you mean Twilight leaned forward?