After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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This is a great chapter, but I honestly don't feel like I've been more pissed off because of a few thousand words. Almost hoping Shimmer will get resurrected somehow.
Also, Shimmer's Aunt: what an absolute prick.
I am a bit sad that this Story turned Into a murder case.
I really enjoyed it for Sunset meeting her counterpart and handling the dangers of magic really well but suddenly I found myself in an episode of Criminal Case.
It's still a great story in my opinion but I am not sure what to think about the change of direction.
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I kind of agree, I like stories that explore the idea of Sunset meeting her counterpart and that was the whole reason I started reading it. This change in direction is quite concerning, It will probably still be good but it sucks that it ditched it's strongest aspect.
Shimmer's "family" sucks. Glad she took care of all their friends (though if it were me I would have given them the scholarships and a cool mil each).
Very sad that Shimmer is dead-dead though... Well, Ill hold a small hope that shes not, I really enjoyed her.
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Sorry! I didn't do it to be mean.
Also, yes Lilly is a selfish bitch.
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The story will go through many changes as time goes on, after all this story is planned to last about a little over 2 years with weekly updates. Act III is more of a "serious" act, but you'll see why eventually. Everything connects back to Sunset and Shimmer and that's sort of the real focus of the story. Shimmer's death wasn't something I took lightly, it was planned out and despite her being dead she plays a huge role in the events to follow, we also will still see her in flashbacks.
Oh and eventually a little side story will come out that follows her about one year before Sunset comes into the picture. So if you're looking for more Shimmer there is more Shimmer to be found so to speak.
The story is called SHADOWS Cast Over the Sunset meant to be a play on words of how Sunset's shadow itself that she casts changed the human world just by her being there. That's sort of the idea. And sadly one of those changes was the death of her human counterpart, intentional or otherwise.
Just wait until you find out who Ghost is and why they killed Shimmer... That will be... Interesting...
Also, the murder case only lasts for Act III.
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Yeah she comes from new money so there is a lot of bitterness and jealousy. Her aunt was always an envious and selfish woman who wanted but never wanted to work for it. Spark was a woman who was loved and adored and was rewarded for spreading such love and joy.
I knew shimmer would be gone and yet this chapter still hit hard....
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Oh if only you knew what was to come. I can't reveal anything but some surprises are in store.
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oh I am soooo looking forward to it! this story is keeping me going after a hard Friday's work!
i have read all of this story, up to this in one sitting, I am undecided if I hate you or not. This body was not ment for such feels. Looking forward to what comes next.
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You read 30 chapters in one sitting?
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Yes, I won't bother you on the reasons why i did, but, to be clear, It was good enough that I didn't want to stop once I started.
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Well, that's impressive none the less!
Sorry that you now have to wait on a weekly basis to find out what happens next. D:
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Thank you
Regrettable yes, but certainly better than stories that die, or update once a year. I can live with a once a week update schedule :D
"And also a boot to the head."
"WHAT?"
I love that segment.
Anyway, great chapter, you'll be missed Shimmer.
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If only.
8870099 Yeah I know, but I couldn't pass up the opportunity.
Part of me REALLY hoped Shimmer pulled a Sherlock and faked her death to try and go undercover to find Ghost
Won't lie, I am beyond surprised you did this. I was confident Shimmer'd survive, I mean she's kinda the 2nd half of this story after all, but... she's dead. Well, I mean up to this point at least.
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The wounds described were also survivable.
Granted, she would likely have bags hanging off of her for the rest of her life (Barring magic), but she could have lived.
I've heard this bit before, but the priest had an answer. The answer was "the more people that show up to a funeral shows how many lives that person touched, and the more tears shed proves how deeply they were impacted. Why would I cry for someone who was so blessed? I save my tears and sorrow for the ones where no one shows up, or worse, where people are thankful for their passing. Every death should be mourned, every life is worth that much."