After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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Forewarning to everyone, the chapters are going to start getting a bit longer in Act III, you won't notice it right away, but the average length of a chapter I have noticed when writing is starting to increase. This is likely something that will remain the entire story. On average the chapters up to this point have sat around 6,000 words each, but realizing how much behind the scenes stuff needs to be told from Act III onward we may be looking at going to around 7,000 or more from here on out. So forewarning the story is about to get long!
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I am perfectly 100% ok with that. Keep up the awesome work! Even if I dislike you for killing Shimmer right now...
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Shimmer's death was a difficult thing to plan. I went back and forth on whether I wanted her to die or stay dead. Obviously, I decided on her dying, but it's yet to be seen on whether she was planned to stay dead, which will take some time to find out.
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Well, whatever you decide to do, Ill be right hear reading it. So, this mysterious contact Shimmer has, is an Ex? Facinating... and Ghost. Good job on the name, it implies very very little because it is so often used. It could be anyone. Even if a deeper meaning is behind the name, its assumed by too many people that simply think its cool, or badass, to give any hint of who it might be.
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Tons of fixes have been applied.
And there is a reason for that which you'll find out soon enough.
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More fixes!
And thanks! I deeply appreciate it! I write stories for people to enjoy. <3
Am I reading this wrong or did you just kill off one of your two main characters?
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Shimmer may not be alive anymore but her effect on the story is far from over. She continues to play a huge role.
I hope Shimmer lives...
My initial excitement for this story has kinda worn off, I'm happy for those who like this story, but I can't say I particularly enjoyed various story beats. It's not my cup of tea, but still, impressively long and regular updates are something amazing, especially in this magnitude.