After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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I apologize that the Sunset drawing (first one) was not up to par with some of my more recent sketches...
I hope next weeks go better lol
But thanks to everyone who has been reading and keeping up with this story!! It's been awesome seeing all the support for Mist :D
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It's ok! You're still doing great! I love your art of pony Shimmer, she's so adorable!
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Thank you! :3
Ooh, Shimmer, I don't think that's a great idea, 'cause ...
Yeah. That.
Well, it's gotta be getting close to thirty moons from the Fall Festival. They may get lucky.
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Remember Princess Twilight can open and close the portal on command now, but that means that the portal can only be opened from the other side or they have to wait for it to naturally open. In other words, Shimmer holds all the cards.
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My understanding was that they could only ever open the portal because of the journal acting like a bridge. Without the journal on the human side the Portal can't be opened on demand.
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Correct and currently Shimmer has the journal and Shimmer is on the other side, so on the human side the portal cannot be opened at all, meaning Sci Twi has no means to reach Sunset, period. The only way now is for Princess Twilight to re-open the portal from the Equestrian side.
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you're misunderstanding how it works. It was never possible to open the portal from the human side. Twilight uses a machine connected to the mirror in order to use the connection between the 2 journals to force open the portal. If there is no journal on the other side then Twilight has no connection to use in order to force the portal open. They would have to wait for it open naturally.
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Ah I see what you're saying, but remember did you recall seeing the journal on Shimmer's person when she went through the portal? It would have been impossible for her to carry the journal and Sunset. So while the journal is in Shimmer's possession, it is not on her person, remember her car is parked in front of the school, the journal is likely in her car in the human world.
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Ah OK, the way it was written made it sound like she took it with her.
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That may actually be a mistake I have to fix.
Great story. I am curious who Sunset ends up with. I'm thinking Twilight. The two Sunset's being there for each other is super cute and great. And I am of the opinion, doesn't matter how, that Celestia is Sunset's mother. It explains way way to much not to be true to me.