After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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And the other shoe drops. As much as I liked this chapter the conflict for it seemed to be resolved far too quickly. Hopefully this subject will be touched upon more in later chapters. I'm happy that you have someone in your life like to keep you motivated and her artwork is always a nice touch to an otherwise already great installment. Honestly i'm kind of jealous. Anyway excellent work Darling I look forward to more.
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Oh that conflict is FAR from resolved. ;)
Well I didn't expect this mystery to be revealed until much later/climax on regarding the parent's death. Clever, but I'm guessing something bigger is going to happen in later chapters then, guess that might mean a return of an old fiend that's been missing for quite a while.
Mildly bothered that they're sticking with the just sisters thing. Was totally hoping for some Sunset on Shimmer macking.
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I considered the idea, but by this point I felt there really wasn't romantic tension or anything between the two of them. Not to mention I realized I had different plans for the both of them.
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Same, but I'm still interested to see where it goes instead. I'm pretty sure everyone's first thought when Romance is a tag for a story like this is that they'll get together.
ok i dislike the idea of the sirens being in the modern era from the start it takes away so much story ideas of them being on earth for 1000s of years
the comics should never be taken as a source for anything we saw the actual banishment in the show it was nothing like what the comic showed (and star swirl was nothing like his comic self)
but i know this was written before that just sharing my thoughts