After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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Just a nitpick: You end everypony' dialogue with an ellipsis '...' when a single period is plenty. It makes the dialogue sttm stilted.
Twilight... when you get out of there, you BETTER pull a G1 Optimus moment and go "No Force in the Universe can stop me now"
I got 7 chapters saved up so far. Let's so how high that will go before I cave in and binge it all.
I swear to God. You better not hurt my gay bois. They're too precious.
Prediction:OP Dazzle overpowers the smartest Retard, Twilight Sparkle(News flash:Ponies rely too much on their magic. Tirek effectively doomed Equestria anyway, so giving up alicorn magic to spend a few more days with your friends is ASININE! We only forgive for it because of Deus Ex Machina), opens the portal to Earth to get revenge on Sunset whom she blames for Adagio's death, SciTwi dies, Serenade mind wipes the rest of the girls, but forgets Moondancer, who researches...cloning? Necromancy has magical overtones, so not sure it applies. Thus 'Sunset' and 'Midnight' from that interlude.
I. Don't. Care. About. Equestria. Your Villain Sue has overpowered everyone with such little effort that she could burn it all down and I'd just yawn. Kill Luna and I'd just roll my eyes. Actually, why hasn't she if she hates mortals so much!
Wait, I'd be upset if she kills Luna, ONLY BECAUSE I WANNA KNOW WHY THE FUCK NIGHTMARE MOON IS RUNNING EQUESTRIA!!! Your demon explanation RAPES Luna's character. Equestria is terrified of dark magic and those who practise it..yet let one of it's greatest user rule their kingdom...
I skipped the last chapter because flashbacks have gotten boring. This chapter because Equestria is now boring. Going to give it chapter or two more to hope it improves.
I had almost forgot about them I do hope the young colt gets his wish
uh how can ther ebe day and night no celestia to move the sun and i doubt luna is using magic on the moon