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I HAVE NOT READ IT YET BUT BY GOD YOUR THE BEST MAN IN THE WORLD!!! THANKS FOR THE NEW YEARS GIFT!!! *bro hoof*
Nod.
Ooooh, bat ponies! I was wondering how they would factor into this story. And it appears that they are more in tune with the Nightmare than ponies are. I'm guessing they used to be pegasi that Nightmare Moon changed into creatures of the night.
Great chapter, though I'm eager to see Luna figure out about Nightmare, or for Star to do something, Her commentary is getting on my nerves, mainly because she's so smug and certain of herself. And I really can't wait to see who else the princesses have called for aid...
maaaan... ive read this... and now i have to wait awhile to read a next chapter... man this was a good one
It lives!
This was a great chapter I am gald that this story is still going I just caught up not even a week ago and I'm hooked on this. I knew it was only a matter f time before the bat ponies came
Luna is hoping to use the Thetrals, the way the SOE/SAS were created, used in Norway? Small specialist groups for scouting, sabotage and assasination in a chaotic geology can make a much larger force very unhappy indeed.
Course, a simple method would be to expect to loose the main pass, get most of the outcast forces in there, then nuke it. I take it Luna hasnt the strength to bombard the mile or two, followed by celestia flaring it to slag, then luna bombarding it again to create a nice cooler surface to walk on, or just encapsulate, seal?
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Now now, Nightmare is just enjoying herself. At least she's not trying to terrorize everyone.
And yeah, the bat-ponies were indeed pegasi that volunteered to be changed.
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In a way, yes. They are certainly much better suited for night missions and low-key ops. That said, socially they are like the Knights-Templar. Initiates, Knights, Knight-Captains, and the Grand Mistress/Master. Along with a smattering of priest-like members for spiritual health and sergeants that control the logistics work. Granny would be a sergeant. But we'll get more into that in another chapter.
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I so want to see Granny call in Precious.
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Eh, still. Prehistoric bitch needs to be shown how we do things downtown...
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Or, she could just set up a few Ms .50 cal machine guns at the pass and rip the griffons to shreds.
What?! It's a valid tactic!
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Fine, you call it Puff The Magic Dragon, Granny calls it Puff the Magic Dragon. Everyones happy.
Well, except those on the recieving end of rocks, talons, blast burn, wingtip vortices, and possibly spell casting as well.
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Flank them form both sides with a few high-powered unicorns, some bat pony elites, and a bunch of rough earth pony warriors.
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Just wait till you meet the ponies from Stalliongrad.
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Oh, fancy seeing you here... guess I better give this a read if I don't want to be pushing for the new year eh?
Thank you
huh i knew luna had an ace up her hoof.....BUT GODDAM THIS CHAPTER TOOK SO FUCKING LONG TO RELEASE!!!!... that and i don't know when you will release the next chapter( it needs more clop )
Took a while to get out. But the quality dulls the irritation of the wait.
so....much....reading....i went back 10 chapters to remember what happened....my regrets are none but i will say that thus is really good stuff man...i cant wait for the bext update and yeah...it does need more clop
Best. New Years. Gift. Ever!
I was worried this was another great story that would die out, does this mean there is yet hope for this story to continue to update til one day it gets to completion (hopefully though completion is not for a very very long time). This was by far one of my favourite stories on this site and i read every chapter the moment it came out and every time i saw a new update hope came back in spite of the huge gaps between some
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You're goddamn right!
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More clop is coming friends. It just woulda been really weird to have it in the middle of the exodus.
"Oh hey, let's buck."
"Um, but all the ponies we're with are about to get brutally murdered."
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I have every intention of finishing. Life was just being rather unkind to me for a while. Should be a much smaller wait for next update.
It's been too long, glad you've finally been able to update.
I've come to consider your portrayal of Luna in this story to be the best out there in the fandom, actually.
Now to re-read the story... AGAIN
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I'm sorry?
Wow, that was beautiful. Did you know that this was one of the first stories I read on this site over a year ago? I'm glad I found it. Keep up the good work and don't let life drag you down. When you stumble, get right back up without hesitation and sprint. With regards, Req~
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What does a Stalliongrad pony wear when its minus 40?
Nothing. It Summertime.
Totally worth the wait!
What a nice way to begin the new year!
Totally worth the wait. Thus story is and always will be one of my favorites, the reason I created an account was to keep track of this story. Unfortunately, this story is giving me some technical difficulties and im hoping I won't lose track of it.
MOAR
Once again, the Luna/Starstep dynamic does not dissapoint. Their interactions and dialoge actually make them feel like a married couple.
I still say Luna is totally on to Star's stowaway.
Good to have you back.
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Glad to be back.
I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the Luna/Star interaction. You wouldn't believe how many times I scrapped the first part of the chapter because I wasn't happy with how their dialog was flowing. Keeping her a little mysterious and yet learning to open up to her husband is a difficult balance. I'm glad at least one reader appreciates the effort.
Really glad this updated. I really do the dynamic between Luna and Starstep that you do are maintaining, it's the whole reason I followed the story. His interactions with Nightmare is just icing on the cake, I can't wait for that to come to a head, obviously it's only a matter of time. ANd I think Nightmare knows that despite her earlier threats.
Yet another fantastic chapter! The Middle English is a little rough, but other than that, great job.
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There's a reason Luna and Nightmare got along so well once upon a time.
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I've gotten a lot better at it since the beginning, but yeah, it's not as perfect as I'd like. I've been trying to strike a balance of the blended Middle English from "Luna Eclipsed" and her gradually getting the hang of modern slang and sentence structures.
But that said, I am giving it the ol' college try. Sadly, some of the rules for 2nd/3rd person can throw me for a loop.
5452486 I can see how it could be difficult. It's just kind of instinctual for me because I've read the King James version of the Bible a lot ever since I was a kid.
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Well, if you see any middle english dialog that you think doesn't work, feel free to make a post with edits in the chapter-comments. I can go back and fix.
I have a great editor and he catches a lot of stuff, mostly grammatical-rules, but both of us can still miss things.
Just a week ago was i wondering where this awesome story went. Boy am i glad you're back! \o/
Damn... AMazing writing.... now am sad again, because I am caught up... such a bittersweet moment.
Commence read.
Glad to see some interesting developments and things transpiring about.
Now to ponder on the other forces and see if they are as interesting as the ones that have just been introduced.
Hnnnng...The levels of cute are nearly unbearable....
I can say that this story made my holidays all the more worth celebrating, I popped on to see what had been updated, and low and behold, your story was among the updates!
I found myself enthralled by the bat ponies, Cooing and fawning at the babies around luna, cautious with the skeletons, and laughing with Granny and Nightmare's little comment and replies. A very pleasant and informant chapter to be sure Indigo, thank you for writing it. That said I do look forward to the next update, whenever it should arise. ^^
on a side note:
Ouch. that last sentence was like an obsidian knife driven into my chest by the sweet yet ice cold voice of Nightmare herself.
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Aye, I'd tell you who all was coming to the party, but that'd kinda spoil the surprise. I do hope you'll enjoy the new pony flavors.
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Hah, if you think that little tid-bit from Nightmare at the end was like a knife, wait till we get to the end of this story arc.
5456030 No! this story shalt neva END! never! .....its just too awesome. o.O
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Indeed. A good surprise is worth waiting for.
Flavors all about.
This was a wonderful New Years gift! Been waiting very patiently and now praying for more...( The greedy wretch that I am..) What did I like about the chapter , you ask? Bat Ponies! Many have been calling them "Thestrals" ALA Harry Potter...I don't hold with that. Your depiction of them slotted right into my mental view of them seamlessly! Enjoyed your work from the very first words....Carry on.
*looks to see if any stories have been updated*
.....'To Love the Moon'
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5458197 Yes I get the does make since. Thank you for enlightening me on that matter.