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Bow-Chicka-Bow wow
865854 You're telling me lol. My story has 68 views, four thumbs up and two down.
I don't care if most of them gave it a thumbs down. But if the people reading our stories would at least let us know what they think.
Oh man.. I knew something like that was going to happen. Aww man I don't even think I could withstand those pranks. Though.. the end reward there would be worth it XD
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Indeed. Good catch. Even though I proof-read these a few times before publishing, I miss things. I'll even re-read my chapters from time to time to refresh me of events and characters, editing as I go. Glad you're enjoying the story so far. Hope you have fun in the rest of the chapters.
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Hah, and you thought it was going to be a 'happy ending' spa chapter. Well...I guess it's kinda happy, I mean, he did get a reward.
868465 Ya i sort of did think it...........But the Bow-Chicka-Bow Wow was a LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL to StarSteps' face
Discord is really rubbing off on Luna, but hey a kiss is a good redeeming factor.
and "Dost not forget, tomorrow evening at seven at my quarters"...you make it too easy for me, even though i doubt what i think it is
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I believe seven is the time they're supposed to meet for the small diplomatic party Luna is going to with StarStep as her escort. He agreed to do it during his time with Luna in the previous chapter.
Ctrl + F this on the previous chapter to read it again ---> “I am hosting a small party in the Royal Gardens.
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You are correct. It was at the end of her note to StarStep.
"Enjoy thy day off, I shalt meet thou at my chamber doors tomorrow evening at seven."
So Hutser, how did you find Chapter 12?
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i do indeed know what it was, it is just my dirty mind at work.
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One day soon, you will have your Luna flank. And it shall be glorious, but it is not this day. It's the plot at the end of the rainbow. And there are so many colors to taste before then.
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The same way I find every other chapter, glorious. Though not sure if it was just me, but the kiss towards the end felt... meaningless. Like it was more out of pity/guilt than affection. Or was it meant to be like that?
“That's quite enough Lu-Lu. He is not a toy for your amusement.” Even though I know that's not the case, I feel like she's just playing with him. There's no hint of underlying feeling behind her actions or expressions that I've seen; just pranks pulled, lessons learned and Luna laughing hysterically. Though as you've said she can be cold, so I'm holding out hope that in the future maybe some sign of affection will bubble up through the surface.
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In that regard. Keep in mind a few things I consider part of who Luna is. A being who's lived many life times, had many lovers and experienced many things. I couldn't begin to imagine the numbers of potential suitors she's had in her lifetime. You have to give Luna a little lee-way in how she treats him right now. She's only been actively aware of his intentions for a few weeks and wonders if its just puppy-love/crush or if he's serious about pursuing a relationship. She may seem a little cold, and stand-offish to you, but think of it as testing him. She's not some star-struck Disney Princess who fawns over the first handsome male to come her way. For her to even give him a kiss, is a important turning point in how she views his affections. She wont risk her heart to somepony who doesn't deserve it. Remember the harshest point of it all: She's immortal.
WANT. MOAR!!
I almost want to wish this story wasn't so awesome, so i didn't have to agonize while i wait for more chapters. But that's a stupid thought.
Keep it up Indigo, i can say without a doubt that this makes my top5 stories list.
if i were star at this point i would have left the guard forget about the dream of being lunas special somepony and gone back to scootaloo.
poor starstep.
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It's not easy giving up a dream. And it's not helping that Luna has been feeding him little bits of affection the last few days of the story. All is not lost for the pony. Remember that in my story, it's ok to have more than one mare. If StarStep can ever get it through his thick head
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There there. I'm sure Cheerilee will forgive him.
871383 yeah but it still sucks that half of canterlot thinks ur a tranny
My sister pulled that same trick on me when I was a kid. She put make up on me and made me put on a dress. Thank Celestia she didn't keep any pictures. Oh, and YAY A KISS!
867900 Bad Tucker! ( Smacks you on nose with rolled up newspaper)
okay after reading this far i think star really needs to plan a prank to play back on luna
Okay, forget Trollestia. Trolluna has been unleashed.
Lu-lu - 3
Star -0
Oh dear Luna, how amusing you are :-)
the hottest homo in town ^^
I knew there was a catch in there somewhere. I spent the whole spa session trying to figure out what it was, but unfortunately didn't catch it until the gay colt talked to him in the street. That was when I finally realised what they had done to him, and oh sweet Celestia.....that poor, poor bastard.
The lesson to learn from all of this? When Luna is involved, ALWAYS read the fine print...
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Luna knows how to have 'fabulous' fun.
868118 no joke I tried one only got one like and fav (idk how I got the fav) I even requested feedback on what I was doing wrong I guessed it was grammar but still not one comment dafuq
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Only 26 more chapters to go to catch up.
Don't worry, it doesn't get completely insane...yet.
Oh GOSH... It just occurred to me as I hit this point... They put MAKE-UP on him, didn't they? XD
oh yeah, he pressed the big red button.
oh god my sides
Fav. Well damn done sir
The build up, the tension.
Followed up by a perfectly timed punch to the gut leaving me laughing for ages.
Bravo
A really good tip for this chapter: Breathe.
My lungs feel like they imploded, and worst of all, its mid night and my parants are asleep. my lungs hurt, A LOT.
Jus sayin` tho, if i were in that situation, i would have given luna a death stare for a few minutes and vaguely said: "Well played." before bursting into laughter myself.
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OH GOD THATS FUNNY!!!
2405186 i would have said something more along the lines of "You know you just started something thats never going to stop, Right?".
I commend him, i'd be PISSED. like, kill the first person that glances at me pissed. fuck the kiss, I just walked through my work, town,and home, looking like a FUCKING DISNEY PRINCESS. I'd be plotting against the crown. Good job star, you didn't kill anyone.
2751266 woooah that's alota text.
And my reaction would be:
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Damnit Luna. So evil... Pretty darn funny though, I have to admit.
... Of course, this is after banging my head on the wall and bashing my nose to boot.
I love how Luna's pet name for StarStep keeps changing.
this reminds me of the pranks my sister would pull when i was little , and it involved sending me over to our neighbors house and knocking on the door that being a girl i liked, so to any guy that has gone through this damn right im gona laugh.
He could hear her muffled voices.....She has more then one voice? either remove the s, or remove her, so it's 'he could hear muffled voices'...
Which makes more sense. ^^
He sighed remembering the Luna Suggestion ......I feel Luna should be taken out of this sentence. ^^ Or, expunged on- 'He sighed remembering the Suggestion Luna left on the note.'
the first 'so' is unneeded ^^
...what? I'm assuming the sentence was supposed to go 'A pleasant smile offered from each to the soaking colt' ?
Ok, nice, and...I was really hoping that the episode....pardon, the Chapter, wouldn't end like it did....another prank....again....and Again, it got out of hand..
Suddenly the Lunar Rebellion is becoming way more clear as to how it got into 'I'm going to kill you' territory ......
That aside, very nice chapter, very nice, I had fun using the 'Photo Finish/Anna Wintour' voice for Tiger Lily <3 lol
Poor Star, that's fucked up. I thought he was walking round town lookin all sexy. But then Celestia was all like: Lol faggit And then he was all like: But then Luna was all like: And then finally he was like:
3736134 Everyone needs to feel pretty sometime. He's Luna's pretty pony.
3736134 And that one colt who asked him where he got that look thought he looked like
3736134 Can you imagine if Celestia actually said "Lol Faggit" when she saw him? I would Lol. Profusely.
2751266 your image is broken though I know it is not your fault for some reason Google does this with URLs. I'd edit this though or delete it.
1730110 nah now it's more with a repetitive feeling like reading except instead of just small spoilers they were extremely detailed. Alas I must to reconnect with the story and continue.
GAH, WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT!? AH, TOO EMBARRESING, MUST. SKIP. TO. NEXT. CHAPTER.
Don't you have that gut feeling when you read those embarrassing parts? But then skipping isn't as fun so I just have to tough it out.