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apple pie!
892134yeah applebloom pie
This is my new favorite story!
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LoL. For sounding like you want some apple pie, that AJ icon you picked doesn't look to happy.
Come on ponies. After all the little twists I've thrown at you, do you REALLY think it's gonna be an Apple Bloom Pie? I mean, it could, maybe I'm double-twisting you.
OK first off I must say the CheeriLight is strong with this one, and now I must shamelessly ask if we're gonna get a chapter dedicated to Cheerilee and Twilight's umm, escapades?
Now as for this chapter it was spectacular aside from the CheeriLight greatness it had Big Mac in Jesus-mode again , Spike being hilarious , and of course the entire gag with the Ghost Celestia was pretty great too.
Looks like next up is Apple Bloom, and I can think of one apple-themed dessert that she might be referring to (then again this could all be bait for an epic trolling), I'm wondering what Big Mac's reaction to this development will be.
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Me? Troll you ponies? Never!
Afraid I don't get what you mean by "Big Mac in Jesus-mode".
As for the CheeriLight fun-time. Well, I've tried hard to keep the story focused around StarStep. The little aside for the Princesses earlier was an exception I made to help the readers get a much needed glimpse into Luna's feelings. Beside, didn't want to drown you ponies in clop. I could have played out every single rutting Star/Cheerilee had that night but it didn't help the story. I suspect I'll just do a one-shot clop-fic for Twilight/Cheerilee fun-time. Just for the fun.
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Big Mac Jesus Mode is pretty much whenever Big Mac shows up and is a boss, he seems to be a popular choice among authors who need a male character to show up and be pretty freaking awesome (sorry Spike)
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Ah yeah. I suppose that true. Alas, we lack many male characters in Ponyville to use for that role. I've tried to ensure any characters I use feel like they belong. We just dont know enough about the other stallions of the town to make much use. Besides, I felt like he already had a connection to Cheerlee from hearts and Hooves episode. Seemed like a no-brainer to use him as a voice of firm reason involving her.
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Oh yes I totally agree and I'm glad he's just her concerned friend (her heart belongs to Twilight after all) I don't even mind that he's paired with Fluttershy, but I can't expect every fic ever to conform to my shipping needs, keep up the good work this is a great story
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haha, sorry, but I like FlutterMac its too adorably cute. She has a really strong maternal instinct and he has that country-family fatherly-protector personality. Always seemed like a strong match to me. Hmm...that leaves my poor Dashie...wait! I got it! TO THE PLOT MOBILE!
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Oh no what have I started
Also what's Applejack's reaction gonna be to all this funny business next chapter?
Sex...
Oh my. Good god Star, does your mount list know no bounds? Who's next? Celestia herself?
Well I am loving the story and the well timed chapters. There is just too much awesome going on. And wouldn't a Apple bloom pie be safer than lets say a Sorry just could not help it. Keep up the awesome since it looks like Star is starting his own herd. As for the drama llama I cannot wait to see what Luna throws at him next.
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Give it time...give it time. In his defense, Scoots came to him, Sherry made the offer, and Cheerilee...ok, well, they both wanted it. Things aren't always what they seem Castle Tsar.
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Sorry, Pinkie Pie has her hooves busy at the moment. But I'm sure she'd be happy to bake him some cupcakes. Yeah...the Drama Llama that's peeking his head around the corner doesn't belong to Luna.
Oh no. Let's hope AB doesn't hitch a ride on the rutting ride.
894450 Please, allow me to at lest humor their antics. Just adding a personal touch of comedy. Besides, how could I resist such a jest? He already ran to Celestia's door with an erection seeking "help" with it. Regardless of what his real purpose was, that's still a hilarious picture. Heh, poor Star.
Brilliant payoff to the night-court foreshadowing back in chapter 10, managing to work a mare in heat and a magic inhibitor ring into the story is pretty cool.
I like the Spike/Rarity pairing it establishes that inter-species romance is a legitimate choice in Equestria, I now sense StarStep will be hooking up with some Griffins in a future chapter.
Also Big Mac comes of as a complete psychopath breaking a guys legs in twenty places and crippling them for life because they robed the school? That's just such an insane overreaction that it affects my suspension of disbelief.
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Who's to say Big Mac actually did anything? Accidents do happen. Mac is just...protective. I lived in the country when I was young. There are plenty of fathers out there who are dangerously loyal to their kin and friends.
What's with this story, is it some kind of food fetish? All I hear is cream pie this, cream pie that!
Why can't ponies enjoy some cake? Or even cake pie!
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I'm afraid you have me at a loss. What do you mean "Cream Pie"? I'd love to clarify any questions you have, but I'm not sure what your complaint is.
Oh no...not Applebloom too...
“Wait, what about the salads? They'll get cold.”
salads can get cold? either that was a joke that I didn't get or there's a lot about white people food I don't know
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I don't understand the Cheerilight shipping. So I'm not fond of this chapter. Its really out of place and pointless.
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This, my friend, is the definition of a creampie.
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What's not to understand? It's completely plausible that the two most scholarly and supportive mares in town would develop feelings for one another.
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There are some salads that are served warm.
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noun
1. a cold dish consisting of vegetables, as lettuce, tomatoes, and cucumbers, covered with a dressing and sometimes containing seafood, meat, or eggs
How much will I bet that AB's "Dessert" is something sex related?
Probably a lot.
Need sleep. 3 am. 30 more chapters. Must finish.
Her Apple pie