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He began is walk through the castle, passing into the barracks section, nodding to guards he passed in the lantern lit corridors.
“Lighthoof, you might not want it. It feel like an earth-pony double-bucked you in the sack then set it on fire.”
Couple errors. Otherwise great chapter.
Oh god what
welcome to the night guard bitches
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Derp
Yeah, I'm tired when I was editing tonight. Forgive me. I shall fix promptly.
OH SNAP!
Well then, yeah. This entire chapter took me by surprise, from Star's immediate encounter with Luna, to her reaction to his answers, and of course the ending. Now we just need to suffer this cliffhanger and ponder the fate of Star and Light, I cannot recall if in your fic, Luna has her own royal guard separate from Celestia's. Otherwise if they are out of the job for good then it will certainly complicate Star's attempts to court Luna. Of course if Star doesn't hurry up and admit to Luna about his 'excursions' with Cheerilee the past week, then he may just have to kiss the moon farewell.
If it wasn't for the fact that you update so frequently I would be kind of dreading a cliffhanger ending like this, now I get to play the 'Pondering Game'
Also Light Hoof is a true bro /)
hope the next chapter clears the ending up a bit
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Alas, you'll have to wait till Sunday for the next installment. I usually play Warmachine on Sats.
I could answer your question about the guard but...eh...nah. I hinted enough through the pre-ponyville arc. You'll just have to wait
And yes, Lighthoof is a true bro. But never fear that Star takes him for granted. There will be a chance to repay the loyalty.
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After thinking about it I remember there being mention of a Night Guard, which I'm not gonna lie sounds pretty bad flank if you ask me, I'd be on the Night Guard any day (sorry Celestia)
I'm contemplating whether i want to take the time to confirm this, buuuuuut I'd rather just remain oblivious, plus i doubt the story just ends with:
'LOL you're both fired.'
'But Princess Celestia what about my efforts to court your sister?'
'Son you got Scootaloo, Cheerilee (and Twilight since she'll do whatever Cheerilee says), Light Hoof's ladies, and I hear everypony keeps saying to go check on Sweetie Belle. Well they want you to "check" up on her if you know what I mean?
Yea and in regards to paying back Light Hoof, well
...........................................God fucking dam your Cliffhangers..................wait..........she siad no longer a part of Her SUN guards............
geeknisses.com.br/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/oh_snap.gif This took me by surprise welcome to the Night Shift boys. You will have bat wings and strange looking eyes. And that question 'Would you sacrifice the Sun for the Moon?' after I read my reaction was -->images.icanhascheezburger.com/completestore/2008/5/5/hahaha128545307360478750.jpg And images.sodahead.com/polls/002398997/654980539_ha_ha_ha2_answer_1_xlarge.jpeg You made my day with this chapter. Good Job.
“Remove your armor. You are no longer a part of my Sun-Guards.”
"As of now both of you will be lunar gaurds"
Oh my, removed from the Sun Guard.
Now the question: full-time Night Guards or Royal Guardspoinies no longer...?
INDIGO YOU TEASE!!!
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Welcome to the lunar guard!
So many predictions coming and going with each new chapter. Enjoy your time off, I look forward to the next chapter.
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There was lots of pew'pew'pew in my Warmachine games. My Princess Luna Battle-engine destroyed a lot of my enemy. Twas epic indeed. Now then, if FiMFiction will stop being a jerk and giving me 502 gateways, maybe I can get to working on the next chapter.
Sadly, I cannot acknowledge when ponies guess correctly what's going to happen. Kinda spoils it. But then, there's only so many options most cliff-hangers can go.
now i am going to be mashing reload for the next few hours while i play aion! Must read moar! Btw any readers on the tiamat server that are elyos and luna fans i'm recruiting just message tissot
I noticed your chapter a day has stopped, i assume you have posted all the chapters already typed up and you just need to type the rest.
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Neigh. Every chapter I've posted thus far, were generally written that day. I just took the weekend off from writing to get outta the house and give my wrists a break. I had no back-log of chapters. You ponies got em as I finished.
I'll resume writing this evening. I expect new chapter finished hopefully tonight or tomorrow afternoon at latest.
Unless somepony wishes to start paying me to write non-stop, I do need breaks here and there.
918739 by all means take your time, i do not wish to rush such a awesome story
Annnd now they're Lunar guards.
If they're moon-guards (I think they're called) I FRIKIN CALLED IT.
918739 You cannot rush perfection no matter how dedicated you may be.
hauled to the cells to await trial the next morning.
He didn't know what else he could do to support, Star.
Que?
How much did Celestias know?
There are two now?
Celestia closed her eyes and gave a deep sigh, “You are right, Lu-Lu. It is done.” She turned her disappointed gaze to the two pegasi.
wait...something's not right here...
“Remove your armor. You are no longer a part of my Sun-Guards.”
...what?!?!?!
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gonna go ahead and guess they become part of the "night" guards, love the story by the way, Favorited and thumbed up
Anyone who does not guess what happens next is an idiot...
Probably.
I don't know whats gonna happen next but i can make a pretty good guess.
One question first. Is it a promotion or a reassignment
Nice cliffhanger by the way even if i think it's obvious
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I had to say, honestly, I saw this one coming. And no I haven't read the next chapter over, I know whats next...lol It was PAINFULLY obvious.
Though I have to admit, I feel some more 'clever' writing would of been "Light"hoof's being Sun guard, and "Star"Step would be night guard...I mean...that just seemed to make sense in MY head...but WHATEVER :D ....hm....damn, I should of written that story out a year ago...lol oh well, you've done an amazing job of it so far, I can't stop reading.
It's so obvious they are gonna become Night Guards, though I suppose it wasn't really meant to be subtle. Anyways I LIKE IT!
2887029 You're a good troll, keep it up.
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