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oh my god... you're evil... I love you
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Oh? Care to elaborate?
Dear Celestia.... What a chapter. Glad to have you back, Indigo!
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Glad you enjoyed it. Anything in particular you liked? Any guesses at what's going to happen?
Oh man.
Loved your way of explaining how they were married, and then the dirty talk afterwards? Love the dynamic these two have going on, it's really great.
And Scootaloo... I feel for her, I truly do. Next chapter is going to put her through a meat grinder, there's no other way to put it, and it's not going to be nice either. Especially since she's going to know that Luna and Star are now married.
Glad to see you back in action, missed you during your break, tell life to back off so you can write some more, mkay? : )
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Honestly, what really got me into it was the whole fact that I kept guessing at what would happen soon after each thing! Gosh that was a mental puzzle xD. As for predictions... There's so many ways it could go, I can't even make a proper prediction! That was just some top-tier writing! Great job!
Nice. Scoots u gonna get it.
EEEEEEEEEEupdate!
Uh-oh. . . cue shitstorm.
Dis gun be good
Yay I love this story
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Dun dun dunnnn. Yep. Now you ponys get to find out why Luna has been avoiding talking about scootaloo. I told you all she always has a reason for everything.
I LOVED the return of Scoots, plus the impending torture of Luna is giving me a case of maniacal laughter as well... I may not have said it but I love your Scoots and want more of her.
You keep earning your place as the only clopfic I've ever favorited... well the HiE/Daring one doesn't really count, it has no clop content
whoa! I did not expect this! I was not sure if your Hiatus was going to be long or indefinite..
Anyway, this was an awesome pick back up chapter. Its slow pacing allows a reader to fill in the gaps in their memory after your break. Not exactly fair to new readers, but one could call this book 2
anyway, I learned a bit, and that bit with the marriage was absolutely perfect in execution.
I take it you have mapped out your story?
Also this bit with scootaloo may be very interesting indeed. Luna wants most of all for scoots to ask her forgiveness (according to my perceptions, then again i am about as dense as depleted uranium). tis painful to be sure.
this part with scoots, star and the reprecussions of the whole feather thing, i've been dreading and fearing for the worst.
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Nothing is mapped, per-say. I have key points I want to hit let the writing flow. Organic style writing. At the end of the story I will add a final chapter that tells of story directions I chose not to go.
It's not Luna who needs the applogy.
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Your remark about a final chapter with directions you didn't go with... that will be extremely interesting to see.
I know a lot of us are hoping for some sort of sappy method for Star to extend his life, and even some are already crossing fingers for the dreaded cliche alicornation, or whatever word one might want to use.
The second I saw you had updated this I squeed and had a huge fangasm. Which was soon followed by an even bigger fangasm and round of clapping at how you set up the marriage. I'm still loving this story so much and knew you would find a way to make everything come back from a previous chapter to give hints. When Celestia asked Starstep how a normal wedding was I immediately started thinking back to find each example. I may really need my sleep because I've neglected that a bit too much recently I had to read your chapter. Though I have to feel a bit bad for what's to come of Scootaloo.
Oh, and you just love cliff-hangers don't you?
Greatness waited a while for this but it was well worth the wait. Can't wait till chapter 46.
let us hope all goes well with this
I forgot about this and now I remember why I like it
first 'powers of harmony' and now this. it must be my birthday or something
OH SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wooo
The story is alive
*huggles chapter*
Glad to see another chapter to this I was getting worried
It's funny, usually with stories that I've been waiting for for a long time, I need to re-read the previous chapter so that I can recall the story. I would say that it's a testament to your writing prowess and amazing story telling ability that I didn't do that this time around, as within the first paragraph of this chapter I recalled everything with stunning clarity.
Indigo, you are a wonder, and I am delighted that you are continuing to write!
*wakes up*
*sees this*
FFFFUUUUCCCCKKK YEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.
Sweet, new chapter, twas like forever.
Ha ha! Clever! This story is truly my guilty pleasure; it satisfies my appreciation for Luna fics in a pretty appealing way. Good job, Indigo!
Gah! Drama llama inbound! RUN FOR IT, SCOOTS!!!
Another fantastic chapter, Indie. By the way, this is Jake from the Canterlanta Facebook group. Told you I was stalking you.
Also, I touted your story in my blog a little while back. . Like I said, this is one of the best romance stories on the website. Had to do my part to advertise it.
to almost quote a song.
"She just met the Stallion of her dreams,
And his lovely wife."
one word for the photo shoot would be awkwerd, an ex taking your picture to commemorate your marriage. That is as awkwerd as you can get.
glade you had that happen
2749083 the one with a gundam and a white tiger
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I was in the Air Force, so we had little jokes like that for new guys. The most common one was asking them to go get the keys for the aircraft.
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Hang in there. Not everything in this story is what it appears at first glance. Luna is still very much the focus here.
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*Snerk* yeah, pretty much.
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Appreciate the shout-out, I need as much as I can get. Alas, not everypony enjoys the direction I take with the tale. Every down-vote stings. So I read your blog, nice overview of the story. Not a fan of 'buck' and 'plot' huh? *shrugs* I like the sound of them, so I use them. Despite some serious elements in the story and a lot of 'daww', I try to keep the humor and lighthearted bits of dialogue to balance the story.
Okay, I think I'm just really old-fashioned, but this whole thing with being promiscuous just grosses me out. One girl, sex only after marriage. That's what I believe in. The whole thing with the... Experimenting... Is really off putting too.
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Oh, no, no! I do like those! As I said, I have been trying to sneak a plot joke into my stories forever, but my editors refuse. I was just speaking really about that one line. While I do appreciate the lighthearted moments—and they do work 99% of the time—in that moment, a time of passion, it broke the immersion for me. At a time when you were trying to elicit an emotional response(which, as I said in the blog, popping a boner is), a line that is designed to break up heavy moments felt out of place.
Upon thinking of it more, I can see now that it is something the characters would say. If they don't say ass or butt, that would be the word. You would hardly expect a woman to say, "you ever done someone up the rectum before?" So I can't really fault you for it. Part of me still finds it odd, though. I guess it's one of those moments where you have to weigh staying true to the world you've created against keeping the reader in the moment.
Meh, 'twas but a minor ripple in an exceedingly epic pond. I just love over analyzing things, I guess.
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I'm not sure how to respond to that. Certainly it's your belief and I wont change that. I'll just state that the head-cannon I have for Equestria is a lot more relaxed than our society. They are a lot more loving of one another. Think 'herd' mentality. So sharing affection a bit more freely is common-place. This was just a look at a different type of society. One without religious dogmas or political right-wing/left-wing nonsense. I'll agree, it's certainly not for everyone but try to picture Equestria in the context of what they are and what they embody.
As for being promiscuous, honestly, Star isn't really the type to just 'do' random ponies. That's more Lighthoof's thing. Star needs to bond, it's just his nature.
Great chapter! Love the back and forth teasing between those two
SWEET UPDATE!!
Also good chapter nothing like a furious Luna when it comes to love lol
Awww dayum, shit is gonna go dowwwwwn!
Also, me gusta.
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You know what? That's actually incredibly clever! A good reason for everything that's happened, definitely. It kinda locks in with the herd mentality shared by the species as a whole, so evolution would take a massive role in culture and the life cycle would be in play, too, with the mating rituals and the way biology works and...
Oh fuck, I'll just stop there.
Unless you WANT to hear a rant.
XD
But still, I just get kinda... Weirded out with the sex...
Anyway, amazing story, a great tale of love to be found and sharing bonds, even with the gratuitous sex.
XD
Nice work, Eclipse.
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Exactly. I didn't do the whole 'more partners' thing to make it kinky. I wanted to use this as an exploration into a race that evolved differently and to see how their society might reflect that. Growing from a 'herd' concept, it would effect bonding between partners, sharing of affection, jealousy, and social 'norms'. Sure, our way of life is so ingrained in us that it can sometimes be hard to accept the idea of more than one lover. But in a group where females outnumber males to such a high ratio, biology adjusted their social acceptance of sharing partners to allow for highest potential of offspring.
Oh dear...
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Oh come on, it wont be that bad *snerk*
Who am I kidding. Bomb-shell incoming!
Just to day I was thinking if this was ever coming back, glad to see it is.
As for the chapter itself, to pick out something from it is hard. Nothing comes to mind about it, not instantly anyway, I do like how Lunas actions have come together, but I feel it’s rather... Lacking. I was expecting a Knights of the Old Republic thing that would leave me speechless, maybe I was over expecting. Don't get me wrong the chapter was great, it all worked, but thinking back on previous chapters I can remember one or two things from most of them, maybe I might remember something from this later but nothing for now. I know this was mostly explanation and setup and I think that's why I can't think of anything that stand out, there was one event that stood out, apart from Scootaloo showing up but that's setup, not and event in itself. But like I said this chapter was great and entertaining, I'm not disappointed with your return and I look forward to your next chapter. Sorry I feel like that was a bit harsh, but I promised to leave a comment on every chapter as long as you didn't pull a fake ending on us again.
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I hope you've learn you lesson, don't make the same mistake again. I'll be watching you
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It's certainly more of a set-up chapter after a long break. Get some readers quickly up to speed, clear up some pressing issues and such. Next chapter will have some madness and drama-llamas and much more exciting. And, like Cheerilee said, it's not always about the destination. Huge set-piece moments are nice and all, but if you're enjoying the ride, then that should be memorable too.
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This guy.
This guy.
This is my kind of guy.
I love you. You know, you're one of the only people I've met that can actually explain herd mentality in fanfiction with ponies. You have my thanks.
And so it begins.....
My response to seeing this updated
That was awesome
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It feels like the climb of a roller coaster before the big drop, there is more excitement for the drop then the climb, and the drop is what sticks with you. And yes I'm looking forward to this drop.