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I always found it a more humorous word than 'ass'. *shrug* Granted the first few chapters were written over a year ago and I may go back to change that.
It is sprinkled here and there in the story, but was done out of personal amusement and a nod to our fandom vocabulary. Not to down-play a pony's rear-end. Plus, I like puns. And being able to twist 'Plot' into other mixed uses, well, it's entertaining in its own way.
If you turn star step against Luna via NMM I fear I will be severely disappointed. Then again I also hope that NMM and the alicorn filly can make up for what has happened in the past.
2 chapters in a week? Why Ser, I feel spoiled. Excellent chapter as always, with little to no spelling/grammar mistakes. I don't know how, but even the less exciting chapters you write always keep my attention. Looking forward to the next.
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You'll learn a bit more about what NM is up to next chapter.
It also will touch on the second part of your comment.
As for Star turning against Luna? After everything he's been through for her? I like story twists but that'd be a straight up 180.
I thunk so! Star got tied to NMM somehow. And I'm guessing Light will be dreaming about a small alicorn filly who wants to play with him.
I just hope that fact comes out sooner rather than later, but I suspect that Star will be keeping it from Luna regardless of whether it's wise. That's most often how these things go.
Now that was a good chapter. Full of anguish, yet seemingly calm at the same time. I quite like how Starstep is starting to understand his impact on others with his title etc a little better.
I am most definitely intrigued as to what is going on with the violent thoughts and then NMM showing up. I'm theorising that perhaps she/they entered his subconsciousness when he freed her/them.
Omg this story is awesome don't think I have even enjoyed a story so much as I have with this one an some parts have even made me cry . Very well done :)
Sooooooo good
That ending that awesome ending... the return of nightmare star.
I love the character development.
The red empress and her legions are made so well I might have to get their story
The whole part with the dead was good and emotional
I love it
The fish? Goldwing?
I really really hope Nightmare can be persuaded to... well... join the cause?
It happens in next chapter, am i right?
3848725 True but I would assume that the 180 would be very slow. Not to say it wouldn't make for a great story but I just wouldn't like the twist in this story. It would be the kind of thing I would stop reading until the end of that arc, read the end of the arc to see what happens then read the story.
I do have faith in whatever you write regardless, you are the author and you have not done anything I haven't liked yet.
I am very interested in what you are going to do with NMM though, I hope it is really good!
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>Little to no spelling or grammar mistakes
<3
*reads to the end*
More NMM?
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Otherwise I think it is good that you are picking up again on the character building of Star being a prince now and how this has changed some things.
Question:
I might have missed it but what about the other griffon leaders? They basically disappeared out of the picture magically. Also normal griffons? Or were the new forces only leniant to ponies and happily slaughtered every single griffon that was not directly belonging to them, to the last one?
(Though I wouldn´t be surprised if the leaders had managed to slink off and call in a platoon of griffons to escort the poor helpless (HELPLESS!, including the immortal rulsers!) ponys :P)
Edit:
I concur with what the others have said concerning the swath of updates. I feel like a spoiled princess!
Phantom S, and it should be an em dash at the end.
So, the Nightmare is in Star's head? Good luck with that. This guy has seen some shit. I've always thought that some malevolent entity wouldn't last five minutes in my fucked-up head. Best defense against mind control: Bat-shit insanity.
3848897 ...
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There was a quick sentence in there with Alexander. He and the other griffons are rounding up their family/friends/clan-members in the city and rejoining the herd later. Being griffons, it'll be a little easier for them to slip out after the dead-line.
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Who says she wants to control him?
The best shows are ones you have front-seats for. Muahaha.
Phenomenal... Every time I read a new chapter it just makes my day that much more better. I'm very excited to see where this exodus arc. goes.
I kinda figured that Star had NMM in him, and that probably means that Light got the filly alicorn.
NMM may not be controlling Star, however that doesn't mean that she can't influence his emotions, she senses his anger when they found those dead ponies after they left the town.
I KNEW IT! When I was doing dishes, I was wondering why Star kept hearing that voice in his head, and why was Luna surprised if he shook his head after that 'rutting' thought.
So then I remembered, Luna had nightmare moon being part of her. so instead of thinking it was luna giving him those thoughts, I switched it to Nightmare, and what-T-do... it's her! lol...
Great chapter, looking forward to the next update... this has to be the best (besides my own of course ) Princess Luna story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. keep up the great work!
WOW this is so awesome! I can't wait to see more of Nightmare, though I doubt she would really try to do anything that evil to Star considering he freed her. Then again she is quite unpredictable. Anyways I NEED moar!!!!
OH! Does this mean the filly is inside Light's head? xD
3849569 I actually hope that the filly is in Light's head, considering the filly was the only one able to get NMM to stop torturing Star and Light
That chapter was absolutely amazing. You can feel the emotions flowing from the words into your soul. That was beautiful. Also awesome rapid chapter releases XD Keep up the good work!
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You and your goddamn teasing...
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Haha, you should come say hi at one of the MLP:CCG games near Holcomb bridge. I think there's another this Sat.
Besides, tease or not, 53 is with my editor, so you wont have all that long to wait.
I hope you ponies are enjoying these rapid-fire releases.
Chapter 52 and theres something from chapter 5 that aludes to 53
Talk about epic allusion
Three chapters in one month? You're on fire!
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Very much so! And if I[m free this weekend, I shall attend.
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I am? Crap. Me and fire don't get along well. You know, with the whole burning thing.
So yeah, 53 probably this week. (Just waiting on editor to get to it)
AND a bonus side-chapter. If you're not a follower, you're gonna miss out.
Oh hey, this again! i've been wondering where this was.
Nice chapter man. BUT I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
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Where it was? I'm not sure what you mean.
In the last month alone I published 3 chapters coming in at 27 thousand words.
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I was just <3ing you because I appreciate the appreciation of proper spelling and grammar.
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Y'all be nice to mah editor now.
He has the next chapter in his hooves. He knows what happens with Nightmare. Behold the keeper of secrets!
Aaaaaand a side-clop-fic.
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Oh, I thought it was because I misspelled 'little'Ummmm ignore me. I thought you were making fun of me misspelling something I didn't actually misspell. Because I'm retarded.
I'll go sit in the corner of shame....
3850237 Ummm, I do believe that you inadvertently called me your editor. Now, as pleased as I am to be offered a job so suddenly, I'm afraid I hardly even know you
That and my job kinda makes it hard for me to be able to get a solid non-work schedule going...
But if you want me, I'm yours!
3850212 Sorry, i just meant that i read this story a long time ago, but then i forgot the title, and now i finally found it again out of pure luck.
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Haha, no, I mean Idylia is my editor.
I can have you eh?
Where did I put that saddle?
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Ah, tis why you should follow/fav ongoing tales that you enjoy.
3850409 I'll be honest, I've done weirder things. I mean, if you really want a noble steed who can keep you safe from the riggers of war, well... You have to pay for the tickets there and back... That is all.
But yah, helps if you direct those comments at who need to see them
The griffins they rose up and took away our home.
In the oldest of all ruins foretold in a tome.
The Red Empress shall arise and so shall our demise.
They murder with their runes and steel as our foals simply cries.
In sadness and in fear, we were drove away from here.
Spurlin our home. Spurlin our home.
Our Princesses they tell us to let this offence us slide.
They expect to us to walk away, with our damaged pride.
But no we won't hide, we will return once more, our anger creating tide.
We will drive them back into their caves made of stone.
To reclaim our right! For this we will fight!
Spurlin our home, Spurlin our home.
Hey what ya think? A little thing I just came up with. I got the "Remember the Alamo" vibe from this.
Seriously these two last chapters were amazing. They have firmly raised the stakes. Star and Light aren't 'just' saving some mares from slavery. They're gonna fight for the freedom of all ponies. I really see a lot of potential in this, especially the part where at least Nightmare took seat inside him. Ohh I can only imagine how Luna is going to react. Or what if Nightmare has a physical effect on him, like she did on Luna? That would certainly be interesting? And where is Dawn? I guess she took the same route?
3850414 I believe this was one of the first stories I read of this site. I'm vote even sure I had an account back then, let alone. Now what the little clock at the upper left corner was.
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Nah, not based on Lei-shin. That guy's a chump anyway.
It was more on the reflection of what the Princesses were capable of if they did whatever necessary to unite the planet. Great power, enforced law, but deep down does care about the subjects... to a point.
3850097 *Checks* Huh could swear I was following you already (had only favorited the story). We'll lets fix that *clicks a certain button.*
Oh shit.
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actually a fitting song for things to come.
Ah, well then. I think we found where the Nightmare went to. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
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I think the term 'plot' for a rump is based off the idea of a tract of land also being known of as a plot. So, when talking about horse plot, we are talking about the glorious, abundant tracts of flesh rather than land.