Metei was a slave to the A.A.H.W, testing out new dangerous prototypes when he comes across a fallen halo and the P.I.D
With just a brief window opening for escaping and getting the peace he sought out for all his life, he takes a chance, however where he ends up might not be the place he wanted to go
(Second Story. Let's see if this is better)
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okay Madness combat crossed with ponies... people really will try to cross these ponies with anything... you are unleashing a random fodder character from an ultra violent flash series into ponyville with the improbaility drive a device that would put discord to shame in sheer chaotic power.... this is likely going to get messy....
That is the way I like it. But I will not go over the top and make him kill everypony in the world
Back to my previous comment, the only big thing that I'll probably add would be a war between the griffons, humans and ponies in the middle. Give me your thoughts as to whether I should add this or not. To help with the decision I will add a teaser for the war
810988 Don't worry, I'll cut the I.D power's down so they won't be so destructive
*sees your avatar*
*sees title is madness related*
insta like/ faves
813508 Sweet thanks for that. Thanks to you I now have 2 likes and three dislikes. The last one was made be me since I slipped on my mouse
813517 you can change your likes and dislikes y'know
oh and ps i animate some from time to time
and also
are there 2 guys?
im confuse
813596 Well I just don't want to give myself a thumbs up and what do you mean 2 guys?
Sorry if this chapter seemed really rushed, didn't have a lot of inspiration for this chapter
Woo! Made Metei! This is his basic look from what I could work with but turned out good
eyes on a madness dood?
meh least they were black 
what is he christian bale?
anyway loved this chapter, you do pinkie well too
PRAISE THE AUDITOR
818819 Would you like it if he took off his glasses and Pinkie seeing that he can see without eyes?
819164 that would be pretty funny
i say do it
not trying to control the story btw
819183 Can't be bothered to change it but I will try and fit it in the next chapter
K
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If its possible you could make them bruises from his previous scuttle with the testing thing
*edit*
uhg damnit just now seen the story picture
all i needed was mandess and i was on it like *SNAP*
819236 Story picture?
you know
the picture with sunny blue shirt
819285 and how is it?
Every time I look at Metei I get reminded of Hoity Toity
819319 yeah lol
it fits the madness theme
apart from the non madness coloured top :P
819324 Yeah but I have seen fan-made videos of madness combat with the blue armor. I could change it if you want
818819 Got a great idea for his eyes! make them like Jesus's
819344 nah its fine keep it blue i can tell it will invert in colour soon enough
*GASP*
JESUS EYE YES!!
the eyes are a halo effect
thanks doc
819371 oh yea it will change. It will change a lot.
I have already made his clothes for it
i will definitely change the eyes also
819425
yay
819430 My avatar is what Metei wold look like in the war
819472 hes gonna turn into 2 audi-atps?
*edit*
night
its 11:10 aussie time
may the holy lord krinkels plauge my dreams with madness
;P
819479 sorry what?
819486 your avatar is of two auditor possesed atp agents.
as for the night thing
it is now 11:20 PM
so time to get a rest
*YAWN*
Dem eyes
Great chappy as always
Nice use of the powers but It feels like he wasnt trying to hard in th fight
Holding back
I mean he doesn't want to kill anypony yet. YET
824887 of course. I mean he wouldn't want to kill anypony yet, he still had a party to go to
Besides would you rather face guards then an angry Pinkie when you miss a party for you
825026 miss a pinkie party!?
hes angry but not batshit insane 
*edit*
damn i keep posting to late and it goes over to the next chapter >:\
sound the war sirens the madness fellahs are coming >:D
wait a second.
wasnt the bit with metei at the end from the last chapter?
are you a spy?
829315 what?
never mind i wasnt really thinking
829421 do you know why I did that?
829432 hmmm
HMMM....
i wish i did
829449 in almost all the chapters the bits in italics are to show what happens in the next chapter
829454 oh
stupid wonky eyes
oh shitake mushrooms bro
oh and just a little mistake in the story: Metei’s eyes widened when the name was brought up, luckily his eyes concealed his surprise.
i think you mean glasses there
834496 Whoops
OHMYGODTHISSTORYISSOGOODYOUAREGOD
that guy was likee the auditor and the deputy from madness mini 5 combined
holy crap
flashback future time traval revalations
WAR BABY!
r dere gon be mag agents?
854555 haven't thought about that yet
854640
IMMAGEENYUS! 
854646 Well done. For the assistance you receive on AR-15 to the face
854657
wait
WHAT!> 
BYE 
oh look at the time uhh g-gotta...
omg tricky pony
