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So here I'm stuck in Equestria, in the form of Mewtwo from Pokemon, FUN!
What's not so 'fun' is that my appearance is frightening to most ponies. It doesn't help that I can only communicate by projecting my thoughts into the minds of others. Now I need to find some way to convince the Princesses that I don't want to harm anypony, and that there's something bigger is happening.
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Nice story. You should probably add this to the displaced group as soon as you can. Just sayin'
Was just about to. :)
Looks good, now post more!
....
I WANT A CROSSOVER WITH YOU!
5790498 Will do, almost half way (or more) through ch 2.
I definitely like where this is going, and I, for one, can't wait to see the next chapter! Also, welcome to the Displaced!
(P.S.: Third!)
huh..neat
5790500 That may have to wait until the chapter 3 or 4 once he gets his summon token.
5790595 okay....
Medulla better watch out or Flynn will shove him(?) into a tiny ball.
go on :D
5790661 That is soooo true.... I know my Displaced learned that the hard way.... *Shudders*
5790696
Muhahahahahahahahahaha!
huh...neat...
although...with his bag..wouldnt he be able to use those berries as some sort of peace offering?
5790781 Fear not!! All will be explained in time.
Amaaazzingg~!
It's Darkrai, isn't it? Also, if I could be the first one you could summon, I'd be a very big help in a fight against even that huge dark dragon thingy pokemon.... I forgot his name okay, but he's red, grey, yellow, and a bit of black and he's in Diamond and Pearl.
5790898 Darkai will be involved at some point. Which of your stories will the cross over happen in because I would like to read that particular one first to understand what's going on. And the dragon you're thinking of is Giratina, that will be an interesting challenge for Medulla and now I'm very intrigued.
5790927 It's Wibbly-Wobbly Timey-Wimey? Nope, Just Max. I'll be useful against all but Arceus. I'll be too busy fan-girling to help for most of the fight.
5791171 The key is workarounds, and using his move pool wisely.
5791184 Like I said: I'll be too busy fan-girling for half the fight. The other half I'll probably be unsummoned for.
I like it.
Well, that one way to describe a disembodied voice only you can hear...
Nice, Mewtwo is one of my favorite Pokemon. But why didn't he use just telekinesis to move? it does so in the Movies.
what does "B.O." means?
I can't wait to see where this will lead XD.
and who is "it"?
see you next chapter.
Companion ball luna, hold her for a couple weeks, end of conflict
Oh my god, Mudella's going to get kidnapped by some shaymin!
Question: Should I add the gore tag? There will be some more stuff like this.
Nice thing to have smash into your face. I think i'll give you a call sometime next week.
5793296 Honestly I wish I thought of that, but I'll still incorporate it.
5793483 Hurray! I gave you ideas!
5793575 Thank you! and Fixed it.
5793345 I don't think it's needed, you haven't vividly explained the "gore" in this chapter. And if that's how you describe gore & stuff, I don't think it needs it.
5793664 Ok, thanks.
*Sighs*
My body better have been taken good care of.
so.....the normal pokemon are evil then?
5794001 Maybe?
Keep going...
Or I will have to start threatening innocent authors.
5794352 I'll do what I can but honestly no promises... So I guess ether your bluffing or those authors will have to deal.
5794388 That#s all I wanted to hear
Or read, to be more precise...
Well, just some personal thing.
Doing the game stuff in a story is just lame, why cant he use more then four moves in battle if he clearly knows more?! Is this a Pokemon syndrome? When they forget nearly everything as the plot commands?
Also killing a legi so easily, and don't deny it, Medulla mostly dominated the fight, is just..... i don't know, it is disappointing.
still a good story with much potential, just some personal thoughts.
5794442 Mostly the whole thing with only four moves in battle is one way I'm limiting his power, because he could easily become a Merry Sue. I tried to explain it as he sets certain moves to the front of his mind, the other moves then require more concentration than he can allow in a combat scenario. He might be able to use other moves in battle but he wouldn't be able to fire them off as fast. The other game stuff like his bag inventory, is my way at hinting that he is both trainer and Pokemon, I could probably work on it though to make it better. Yes, he did completely own Palkia, but he did take significant damage at the end(from an attack meant to level most of a small town), and passed out because of the portal he created to send his token, a process that put so much strain on him before he had to rest for a time. Thank you for your criticism though, I'll work on conveying this type of information in the future and edit the previous chapters if needed.
Edit: sorry I misread part of your comment. Yes he did kill Palkia easily, Medulla is also a 'legi' possibly of higher level. He also caught Palkia off guard with Mewtwo's signature move, it just so happens to pit the user's Special Attack against the targets Defense, Palkia's lowest stats are HP and Defense. But trust me the fights will get better from here. Think of this one as the badguys' learning just how strong the goodguy is and not underestimating him in the furture.
Again, only negative thing for me is still the game mechanic thing, it is more like Medulla is some sort of fusion of the player character and the Pokemon itself. not just Mewtow.
So will the Princesses make a move in the next Chapter?
Eeee~ *rolls around in the ground.*
One of my friends calls them Veg-hedges.
Oh cool! A Mewtwo Displaced fic?! Awesome!
Great work! Loving this!
5795523 Thank you!
5795553 No prob! I'm making a Displaced fic of my own. Maybe you could give me some tips when you're able?
well arceus needs to learn to not bring in the pokemon that way... (not the new world universe)
5795668 Best advice I can give is write something you would want to read. Something you find enjoyable. Use elements form other stories you like, but make it your own. Other than that, is let the characters tell the story don't make them do something because the "plot says so", if you need them to do something put them in a situation that they will respond to in that way. I try to follow this, but I'm not really sure how well I follow it.