• Member Since 25th May, 2015
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Just A Random Pegasus


I'm just a random user who writes a lot of different ideas that pop into my strange mind, and ships almost everything imaginable.

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Have you ever wondered how many bizarre Mary Sue/ Gary Sue stories I can come up with?

No?

Well, if you were, look no further. Here are some REALLY bad, bizarre, and strange OC stories I came up with at the top of my head.

Sorry if you are offended in any way. I do not copy backstories from other people onto this. This is completely my imagination.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 66 )

Hilarious! MOAR!:pinkiehappy:

Sadly, I've seen people write this kind of crap in earnest.

Though I don't think there is such thing as a "Mary Sue", for reasons I can explain, there is such thing as a terrible backstory. This is why the story is hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

(This is why I don't think Mary Sues exist. Sure, there can be a pony as powerful as Celestia and Luna combined, and that might not be a good story. But, if someone makes a random, balanced out alicorn... ponies will call it a mary sue on first sight. An alicorn isn't a bad oc! It depends on the backstory!

Like, that Twidash thing could've actually worked! It could've been an episode of MLP! Like, Twilight and Dash combine there DNA for an experiment and Twidash is born. Then, Twidash could begin to rule the world, and the Mane Six start to see a problem when Twilight and Rainbow become slaves. Then, they could use the Elements or something to take down Twidash and have a moral about how too much of a good thing can be a bad thing. The only thing that would make that not work is that they started to like Twidash more than the real Rainbow and Twilight. I feel like they wouldn't do that. Anyways, nice story, can't wait to see more!)

So bad but so good. Keep it up! :derpytongue2:

You'd be surprised at all the horrible OC's you can find. Go on DeviantArt and search up your name, then add "The Hedgehog." If that doesn't work somehow, then try "The Fox" or "The Echidna."

OC Logic: Princess Celestia will make you princess, despite no real reason.

Princess Freedom is best princess. :twilightsmile:

This is fun to write so far :rainbowlaugh:

But it is so painful for me to read! Sorry, I just can't continue. I did not write this just to write something negative though (I am not even going to "dislike" it), the fact that it is too painful to read for me might mean that the objective has been reached. Of course I can't say more about it since I don't have the courage to read more.

Not the "worst best" i've read so far, but DAMN you try hard! xD

I laughed several times (Dat Sombra moments...)

Can't wait story of black and red evil pony :rainbowlaugh:
But good job. Or bad job I should say? :rainbowlaugh:

6178823 The fact that this is true both doesn't surprise me and saddens me.

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More updates will be coming almost every day.

I really didn't expect this many people to like this story :pinkiegasp:

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Thanks!

It takes me about five minutes to write each chapter... so of course I try hard to make it bad :rainbowlaugh:

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I found ten different bad OC's before I exploded.

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I swear I think my brain is either on the verge of shutting down or a hard reboot.

Oddly enough I still enjoyed these for their illogical and comedic value then something serious.

Marvellous! These are hilarious!:rainbowlaugh:

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That's not OC Logic, that's Twilight Sparkle Logic. :derpytongue2:

6187064 Well Twilight Sparkle actually did stuff. Knocked down three villains at that time, all with her own magic. Screw that Tirek episode, she had the power of four alicorns at that time. This OC was just doing normal stuff.

Oh hey, a classic Luna fanboy must've wrote this.
*Hides all my Luna merchandise*

What da buck did I just read?

You need to make one of those awful"I H8 Dimond Taraar" stories here. It's more common than you might think.

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Thanks for the idea! I forgot all about those :derpytongue2:

That will probably be my next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

LIEK DIS IF U CRY EVRITIEM

Read all the way up to this chapter. :rainbowlaugh:

. . .

*cringes*

6227502 Oh hello, didn't expect to see you here! :derpytongue2:

This is what they played when he returned:

6187108 Exept without her friends she would have failed. I say all of the mane six should have become princesses, hence the Princessverse.

I can't tell if I'm enjoying these cuz they're so bad or I'm just dying inside for no reason :rainbowlaugh:,

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Boy, you would just Love that, wouldn't you?

Wow.
There is just no build-up. At all.
Just: "Hey, come with me! Whoa, you are the 7th Element!"
The end.

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Exactly. That's why this story is not legitament at all :rainbowlaugh:

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Well it is Stories of a Mary Sue for a reason. :pinkiesick:

This is so horrible its awesome. that doesn't make sense. like pinkie. :pinkiehappy:

I don't think all these OCs could be considered a Mary Sue/Gary Stu, they're just poorly thought-out and written. :duck: Though the best way to discourage these kinds of OCs is by making OC-centered stories that are well written and have decent characters, not making fun of them. Lord knows we have enough blog posts/ "satire" for that.

This is just stupid... In a funny way. See, this is why no one likes perfect characters. Alsoi, being rewarded for unprovoked violence. I mean, he just went up to her and randomly beat her up.

Another case of: "Hey, you're actually an element of harmony despite not having done anything to deserve it!"
Oh well, good thing no one ACTUALLY used this as their OC's backstory... Right?

One day, a boy opened up his eyes to find that he had been magically teleported to Equestria somehow.
He stood up and saw that he was red with a black mane.
"These are my favorite colors!" The boy who was now a stallion said.

Why did I imagined the boy as this kid when I read the chapter?

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Honestly, I don't know how I didn't imagine that voice being like SammyClassicSonicFan until now. :rainbowlaugh:

It makes me shudder to read this, but i want to see just how bad it gets. The grammer... oh God the grammer.

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Tries to push all of his stuff into a closet, but realizes he keeps his shrine in there.

And this is why in my stories, I shall have an explanation for Mary Sues. They will be paradoxes that are only alive because of a special red gym in their skull. Remove the chrystal, and the OC dies.

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