Stories of A Mary Sue

by Just A Random Pegasus

Famous

A unicorn stallion named Fabu was famous throughout the land. He was a good singer, dancer, and had really good looks. Anything to brighten a mare's day, right?

One day, he traveled to Ponyville. The train was rented out for him only, since he was so amazing.

When he got to Ponyville, a red carpet was unfolded as he stepped off the train.

All different types of ponies wanted his autograph. A lot of the mares also flirted with him; but it's not like that was uncommon.

He soon saw the mane six. By just glancing at him, all six of them fell in love. Even Rainbow Dash.

The six were chasing him around all day, buying him everything he wanted from Ponyville.

In that time, he found a spark. He started to fall in love with Twilight Sparkle. And she liked him back.

Later that night, he asked Twilight out. All of her friends were upset, so they tried to attack Twilight. Fabu, with his amazing charm, stopped them from attacking.

Their first date was amazing. Twilight took them to the Crystal Empire, where he met Cadance and Shining Armor.

Years flew by, and he and Twilight were getting married.

A huge royal wedding was held, with possibly everypony in Equestria coming. Of course, it's not everyday a famous superstar gets married to a princess.

The night after the wedding, Fabu looked out the balcony on Twilight's castle, since that's where he lived now.

I'm a prince now... he thought. He now realized he was one of the most powerful beings in all the land, and he was happy with that.

He looked inside to see Twilight reading, and decided to blast some of his music.

"You're such a good singer..." Twilight said dreamily as the two talked some more into the evening.

Author's Note:

Fabulous: Take out the "lous" and you get... Fabu! Pretty creative, huh?

No... not really. But that's the point.

Comments

[mlpsuperfan]

Hilarious! MOAR!

[Sdrawkcabsitxetsiht]

Sadly, I've seen people write this kind of crap in earnest.

[PhoelynFabulous]

Though I don't think there is such thing as a "Mary Sue", for reasons I can explain, there is such thing as a terrible backstory. This is why the story is hilarious.

(This is why I don't think Mary Sues exist. Sure, there can be a pony as powerful as Celestia and Luna combined, and that might not be a good story. But, if someone makes a random, balanced out alicorn... ponies will call it a mary sue on first sight. An alicorn isn't a bad oc! It depends on the backstory!

Like, that Twidash thing could've actually worked! It could've been an episode of MLP! Like, Twilight and Dash combine there DNA for an experiment and Twidash is born. Then, Twidash could begin to rule the world, and the Mane Six start to see a problem when Twilight and Rainbow become slaves. Then, they could use the Elements or something to take down Twidash and have a moral about how too much of a good thing can be a bad thing. The only thing that would make that not work is that they started to like Twidash more than the real Rainbow and Twilight. I feel like they wouldn't do that. Anyways, nice story, can't wait to see more!)

[Piecemeal Pony]

Princess Freedom is best princess.

[Robotic Zebra]

Can't wait story of black and red evil pony
But good job. Or bad job I should say?

[Mr Kennedy]

Its like Fabio but without the amazing hair.