Stories of A Mary Sue

by Just A Random Pegasus

Royal Love

A Pegasus stallion named Cloud Wing was very sad. He couldn't fly because of a disorder, and everypony he met turned out to be liars. He was beaten up many times; which was shown by the few scars he had on his body. He guessed they were permanent.

He didn't understand why everypony was so rude to him. He never did anything wrong. His parents even told him that he was practically flawless; and that his great personality made up for his lack of flight.

His life changed one day when he went to Canterlot. He thought that he could try living there; and hoped that somepony would be nice to him for once.

The streets were crowded with high-class ponies, and he felt like he didn't fit in. He ran into the Canterlot castle, hoping to be alone. That was when his life changed.

He turned to find Princess Luna, who seemed to be avoiding his glance. He always heard that princesses were beautiful, but man, she was gorgeous.

He walked up to her, not dropping eye contact.

"Hello. I am Princess Luna." Luna greeted, a blush fairly noticeable on her cheeks.

"I am Cloud Wing, a Pegasus who can't fly and is abused by others."

"Oh, I'm sorry!" Luna responded, her eyes fully meeting his now. "I won't be rude to you. Do you want to... go out for lunch?"

"Certainty." He replied.

Turns out, Princess Luna had developed a crush on him. That's when he realized how attractive he must really be. I mean, to get a princess' attention, you must be pretty good-looking.

He asked the Princess out, who agreed. The two spent a lot of time together from then on.

Princess Luna soon made an announcement; that everypony had to treat Cloud Wing like a royal. Soon, Cloud was invited to the most amazing parties all around Equestria. He was bowed to, and everypony respected him. He then was told by one of the ponies that attacked him that they were just jealous. They envied his looks, and wanted his personality.

A few months later, he proposed to Luna, and with excitement, Luna made him an alicorn prince.

Now, he was a ruler. Turns out, he was really good with magic. Better than Celestia herself.

Soon, Princess Luna and Prince Cloud Wing started a happy life and family together.

Comments

[mlpsuperfan]

Marvellous! These are hilarious!

[Altered Giratina]

6187064 Well Twilight Sparkle actually did stuff. Knocked down three villains at that time, all with her own magic. Screw that Tirek episode, she had the power of four alicorns at that time. This OC was just doing normal stuff.

[Altered Giratina]

Oh hey, a classic Luna fanboy must've wrote this.
*Hides all my Luna merchandise*

[ChangelingQueenDragonfly]

6187108 Exept without her friends she would have failed. I say all of the mane six should have become princesses, hence the Princessverse.

[ChangelingQueenDragonfly]

6187143
*Does the same*

[The oracle]

6245836
Tries to push all of his stuff into a closet, but realizes he keeps his shrine in there.

[ponybird21]

His parents even told him that he was practically flawless; and that his great personality made up for his lack of flight.

So basically Mommy and daddy made this little piece of sh*t.
XD these are great to read, love em so much. But so painful. Because some people actually do write these stories. My poor eyes.