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Just A Random Pegasus


I'm just a random user who writes a lot of different ideas that pop into my strange mind, and ships almost everything imaginable.

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Princess Luna caused everypony in Ponyville to share a dream. That means that everyone could see each other's fantasy desires.

Big Mac had a secret, and now Applejack knows about it. She questions him.

(Contains spoilers of season 5 episode 13: "Do Princesses Dream of Magic Sheep?". I recommend watching that first.)

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Mac, you're drunk. Wake up.

Not bad considering the speed you must've of wrote but maybe you went a little too quick,, A few misspells and the talk is a bit rough but considering how rough my own writing is,, Not bad at all....

What if Luna needs the Mane 6 and Spike's help for another adventure?

You do realise that Applebloom saw "Princess" Big Mac during the dream, right? :facehoof:

Everypony saw Princess Big Mac. :rainbowlaugh:

Big Mac is a technical fan fic writer? I APPROVE! :pinkiehappy::raritystarry::eeyup:

This didn't take long.

All hail Big Bigishounen Princess Macintosh. :eeyup:

It's always the quiet ones, I tell ya. :eeyup:

A Story About Big McIntosh

"Big McIntosh," said Applejack, "I couldn't help but notice you havin' a great plot hook for a story last night."

"Eeyup," said Big McIntosh. "That there was a great plot hook all right. I hope somepony writes a story about it."

"Me too," said Applejack. "That would make a mighty fine story."

Applejack and Big McIntosh smiled happily.

THE END

Eh. If this was much longer, I wouldn't have enjoyed it very much, but as it is, it's kind of a nice short read.

Of course Mac wants to be a princess. Who doesn't?

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... Right?

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I've actually been considering writing Big Mac's journal as a sequel to this story. It would probably be a few days before I get the draft started, though.

I guess it's a story... but there is no conflict, no build up, no climax, and no resolution.
Any of these things would have been nice.

6202030 And Applejack is a dick to her brother at the end.

6202965 Arent all Siblings Dicks to eah other at one point or another? I know me and brothers are like that often with each other.

The Element of Honesty went back on her word!?:pinkiegasp::twilightoops::facehoof:
Next!!!!:scootangel:

Took me forever to get around to reading this. And it's kind of interesting.

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