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This story is a sequel to The Cutie Re-Mark: The Ultimate Enemy


Months after Spike's evil self was defeated and his future averted (for now), Equestria has found itself at peace once more from the forces of darkness. However, Spike still feels uneasy because of his fear of the future that will cause him to indeed become him because of what the Future versions of Starswirl and Chrysalis said.

However, both the girls and Spike must now put their fears aside and face not only the darkness that will come, but be ready for the challenges they will face in their future.

(Based off Danny Phantom: The Ultimate Enemy)

Extra tags: (Comedy, Drama, Sad, Dark)

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Wow no thumbs up or comments too bad I like this story you know I read fanfic about Danny phantom and spike yet and I never thought about putting them together like this although I was busy makeing spike an anti hero or the greatest foe the mane 6 ever fought

Off to a SUPERB start once again.

Ps, since the battle took place before season 7 (where Dark Spike's transformation began) him and Spike still have a life link

Didn't know the sequel is out already.
Keeping an eye on it.

"For starters, you were willing to save Flurry Heart after you killed both her parents and her aunts. You chose to spare the one creature you cared about by sending her back to Griffonstone and even chose to spare Ember when she was in harm after you killed Garble and his friends for how they treated you. You even let your pet Pee-Wee reunite with his family and Thorax rule the Changeling kingdom after you tortured Chrysalis." Future Starswirl said in clarification

Still really not liking how Luna was killed off in the future there..
Especially since it doesn't make much sense for Spike to kill her too given what I mentioned in a previous comment there..

I read the previous book and now reading the Sequel. This book is great. I can't wait for the next chapter.

REQUEST: Can you please make a EVIL FUTURE version of DISCORD who is tired of being BULLIED by HIS FRIENDS (in this sequel)?

Discord could say something like " It was easy for you to forgive Luna and she tried to kill you when she was a villain, while all I did was turning you against each other. And your all annoyed whenever I was around. But when Luna was around you all were like {Hey, it's Princess Luna.}"

"Oh please, we both know those 2 fools would just groom their so called precious student turned princess over me and just play the same old lesson learned card. Besides those two old fools wouldn't know the difference between good or evil. Don't believe me?, ask Nightmare Moon."

Again, I am pretty sure Dark Spike would sympathize with Luna due to the circumstances.
Luna fell into darkness due to the ponies and Celestia screwing up badly and Luna ended up suffering till she snapped.
Hell, the whole "lets not help Twilight to teach her" and the retirement crap is solely on Celestia. Luna wanted to help like in the season 3 premiere but Celestia prevented her for the sake of "testing" Twilight.
Luna only retired due to not wanting to be separated from Celestia. So Celestia basically screwed Luna over big time with this whole "successor" crap

Looks like evil Spike escaped.

Yikes. that Dark Spike managed to get out. This is not good.

Awesome work keep going

Spike: getting his hands in blood, deseives Rainbow, teleporting her to the forest in Fire and saying: "Darn it! How could I let her escape so easily?!"
Sonic.Exe from the game "Sonic.Exe: Spirits of Hell" is like: *facepalm* "Really?"

Once again everything is going according to Dark Spike's plan.

I didn't expect To Where And Back Again be arriving so soon.

Honestly I hated that finale a bunch due to how Spike got robbed big time(HE was the who befriended Thorax, not Starlight. The writers having Starlight get full credit for the changeling reforming made it worse. I like Starlight but her getting moments/stuff that should have been Spike's pisses me off).
That and the fact Luna got captured too despite its her domain(the night) and the fact she is robbed of the chance of redeeming herself for not being there for Celestia when the buggos attacked Canterlot. Her chance is gone now due to she was captured and now the changelings reformed.

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Same here. Despite the fact that the changelings technically saw Spike as a main character, and not Starlight, it was poor that Spike didn't get any credit for it, just like how he was the underdog and inspiration to both "Return of Harmony" and "Magical Mystery Cure". :moustache:

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If Chrysalis was too arrogant to nab Starlight, she should have been too arrogant to nab Spike honestly.
Its pretty bullcrap.

Given how it looks like Luna was still conscious while in the cocoon(since her eyes were fully open and when she blinks, they open back up) she would have noticed Dark Spike right there before he reveals himself.
Right?

Nice to see a new chapter.


Still felt like Luna would be feeling some major issues on what has happened honestly..

Starlight's throne said in an echoing and ironic way EQUALITY .

she never had a throne. that's why I thought Spike had the better chance of being the 7th element than her. :moustache:
It was probably just a regular chair for her.

So the spirits of Spike's dead friends in the future can communicate there in the past?


Whats going to happen next?

Now that Twilight's spirit made her appearance, I speculate her friends & families spirits will pay a visit next.

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I too, wonder what's going to happen.
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I hope that that is what will happen.

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I'm hoping it turns out Luna happens to have survived what happened in the future honestly.

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Wondering how soon we might find out and such.

Looks like I was right, Sparkle's friends & families spirit's are planning to visit Dark Spike. Although I'm not sure if they'll change his mind. What just happened might push him over the edge if it keeps up.

Are both Spikes teenage dragons?

" I'm begging you Spike! It's time for you to look and follow what your heart is telling you and not your head and ask yourself the big question! Who are you and WHAT do you want? "

Iroh... :applecry:

It appears that Dark Spike is beginning to break.

Its really disappointing it really does turn out that Luna died in the future there..

"Save me? You never bothered to save me at all when you had a chance before Nightmare Moon." Dark Spike condescendingly responded

That doesn't really make any sense honestly.
What does that mean?
Spike wasn't even born when Luna turned into Nightmare Moon due to Celestia's fault there.
What was Luna supposed to do?
Really it doesn't make sense that Luna wronged Spike like that when the other princesses did it to him.

Sorry if this is bothersome..
I am just really bothered on whats happening there..

After hearing how the rulers equally messed up as bad as the main six with Spike but also failed the belief in friendship with others, do you think he'd be better off being raised in a dragon family instead?

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At that point, the ponies' concept of friendship shouldn't be forced onto the other races. A lesson learned too late, and it cost them their lives.

Why didn't anypony want me?

Because the ponies tried to force their way of life onto every other races, such as having you shove down your instinctual desires instead of controlling them for the greater good. If anything, those ponies are hypocritical, in everything they preach. Maybe not all of them, but most of them for sure. If a few decades of peace makes you lazy, proud and arrogant about that, imagine being proud of having your country going through a thousand years of peace. All because a certain pony couldn't accept the reality of keeping the balance of all things, like having order and chaos happen regularly to ensure the new generation learns about accepting pain and going through it.

If those sorts of people don't like you for who you are, you can either change their minds, or find other people to like you for you.

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You know, hypothetically, I wouldn't be surprised if Equestria of G5 happened because of this.

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I agree. He'd probably be better off with the dragons.

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Considering I don't think the school opened yet and spike didn't become a teen until puberty and got wings.

Looks like Dark Spike is doing excellent preparing himself. Though I'm curious on the photo he came across & what are the others are up to at this point.

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Indeed. Do you think the photo can be revealed?

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Definitely. Don't know when, tho.

This is gonna get ugly real soon.


Really wished something is done about the issues I previously mentioned on how Luna was handled and such..

That little rat.

I liked that Luna helped showing that Dark Spike that Spike was seeing was a hallucination.

"I've been afraid of being like him ever since i met him, I guess it's hard to move on, especially since he came back. But I feel like I'm the only one still able to look for him and stop him. Even since he nearly killed all of you the first time and the last in his own timeline."

I really wished the issue about Luna's case is addressed..
As in the embarrassment in the current timeline and how she is dead in Dark Spike's time..


I had pretty nice memories of seeing that Teen Titans episode I think.
Slade's mask making Robin hallucinate shows how terrifying Slade was even in death, he caused trouble.

"You-Your hurting me." Twilight said with surprise

"The others say your not real." Spike replied

Spike, upon hearing this said in realization "Every dark corner, wait. When we fought I have scratch, yet your perfectly fine. Plus in the forest, those footprints must have been mine....Waita minute...."

"The girl's are right! Your just in my head, but in the dark! YOUR NOT REAL!" Spike said with a look of recognition

"Spike, your never alone."

I feel like if I say "you mean you're" someone's gonna say "yore opinion is invalid"

I had a TEEN TITANS vibe in this chapter.

I hope Luna doesn't need rescuing from what trap Dark Spike set up..

That was sure a huge rant from Dark Spike.
Yikes.


Not fond of how Luna was powerless in the dream world like that though. It adds another failure on her and makes her look even weaker..

WOW. If this chapter proved anything to me it's these:
1. Spike should've stayed with the dragons during the migration.
2. If ponies ended being this bad & judgmental about dragons, the show itself should've been canceled after season 2.

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