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That was unexpected
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Well thank ya kindly
Because hot damn this was unexpected XD
oof this one went places first off, awesome song choices the first half of the chapter was just the second half was a good decoy for the sucker punch of an ending I always enjoy seeing the songs incorporated into the chapters so well awesome chapter also, nice art
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I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. And oh, the chapter went places? Now that is a compliment that as the writer I can appreciate haha. And yes I worked hard to make sure I find songs that fit and that I incorporate them well. Also yes, I love that art piece. Chrysi looks absolutely stunning in that picture.
Also I'm rather surprised that no one commented at all on the scene with Applejack and Rainbow Dash. I worked hard to have a lot of build up for that. And lastly yes, I ended the chapter with a... 'hard surprise' shall we say? But chapter 100 will explain what that's all about.
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Wow, I don't know what to say. A 9/10? Honored doesn't cover how proud I am as a writer that you enjoyed my writing so much. Thank you for that review.
So about Fluttershy, her behavior is only surprising because it hasn't been revealed what Rayne's suggestion was yet. And sadly there won't be any other hints about it until after the Grand Galloping Galla chapter is written and posted. But once the story gets that far I'm sure you will understand why Fluttershy was so excited. And I have no doubt you will love it.
Oh yes, Scoots is Scootaloo's nickname. I know at least Dash has called her that before.
As for Discord, yes he was a little out of his usual character in chapter 69. It wasn't you, it was intentional in my writing. There was a lot of hidden things happening in that scene. Discord hadn't learned about all of Rayne's power yet so he was surprised. Then he was surprised again at noticing that Rayne's cutie mark had changed for just a moment. But more importantly, I was illuding to how Discord has changed since his reformation. He is a nicer more considerate Draconequus.
Yes that scene with the song in ch70 is one that I am very proud of. It is so awesome and I love picturing it all in my mind as it's happening. Thank you for th compliment. You wouldn't believe the hours I spend making sure that sings fit appropriately to my story.
Powers out... 48 hours. With absolutely nothing to do but read I’ve blasted through 100chapters.
The story would seem to be a slow story progress wise until you realize the majority of the plot has happened in a rather small time frame.
Story is significantly detailed, a good bit of world building, characters are well fleshed out, not all characters are heads over “hooves” with the main character.
I love the fact that the story isn’t limited to just Ponyville and Canterlot.
I’m looking forward to when we start seeing more with chrysalis and where those interactions take the story.
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Thank you so much for that awesome review! I really means so much to me!
It's definitely nice for me as the writer seeing my timeline clearly understood. Even though I'm 99 chapters in, my main character has only been in Equestria for about three months so far. I do try very hard to make sure my characters have depth and personality. And not just the main characters but EVERY character no matter how insignificant.
Also, how could I possibly not explore more than Ponyville and Canterlot? Equestria gives me such a rich and vibrant world to do so many things with. The hours that I've spent watching, rewatching, researching, reading, and rereading content to make sure I get every little detail right. It's been as much of an adventure for me to write as it has been for you to read.
And it is very true that I don't have everypony head over hooves for my character. Is he charming? Sure. Is he attractive? Well he's decent enough. But he isn't walking around with love spells and brainwashing everyone. Nor would I want him to be.
Lastly, I appreciate everyone's patience for the wait but yes chapters about Chrysalis and Luna are coming. Rayne is always going to be continuing his work that he does but most of the continuing chapters from this point will finally be about the primary romance. Everything so far has all just been a lead up to this.
I will say though that I find it ironically disappointing that my writing has slowed down just as we get to this critical part in the story. I've never hid the fact that in real life I have health problems galore. My conditions continue to worsen, I get a decent night's sleep only once a week, and there are always unexpected challenges in my life. I would happily return to shelling out a chapter every two days like I used to. But for now I lack the physical cognitive ability to transcribe this story from my thoughts into text. However no matter how many delays occur... THIS STORY WILL CONTINUE!!! ^_^
Wiley? I think she always called him Wiky or something like that and that's not the first time through this and previous chapter. Also, grasped?
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Sorry about that. Just typos. Both of which have been fixed. I hope you enjoyed the chapter. ^_^
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I did. Sad how the whole situation with Trixie unfold, but considering her character I can see how it could end up like this.
Funny how Chrysalis' hair color in the picture (and in general) is different from Rayne's cutie mark in the same picture. I wonder why it's green on his mark, though... and why I associated it with her anyway from the moment you mentioned his mark all the way at the beginning. XD
Remember when you had Rayne specifically states he didn't want to do anything with Fluttershy shy because he thinks Discord deserves her first everything? Yeah, what the fuck happened with that mister writer? Kind of out of character for him to do a complete 180 and forget about that in such a short time.