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Rayne is getting a lot of good luck. But we need to unbalanced that luck sooner or later.
Rayne pissed off a lot of creatures. Killing animals an a Minotaur Prince. and Pissing off a deer King that can control the forest. Abusing Diamond dogs like their dogs. Traumatizing a Griffin half his own age. And possibly took in 30 Souls from the mirror pool into his own magical Reserves.
We need to take this mess down. Before he's drunk with power. I hope Twilight turns into L and tracks down this Menace that turn into Kira.
Death Note reference. besides I like the chapter.
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Hahaha! Well then, you'll be excited to know that the title of the next chapter will be 'Consequences From the Past'. Hahaha, way to call it xp. It won't be a very long arc but it shows how from main cast to even background unseen characters, Rayne's actions create ripples that affect the world around him. Now not every ripple is a tidal wave, but he'll still be getting some backsplash in his future.
But let me reassure you (which I know I've been doing for a very long time), the "BIG FALL" for Rayne will happen eventually. I already know when and I already know how. The entire story is written based upon a timeline and we just haven't reached that point yet. Yes I know that Rayne has had a long string of wild successes (and he's had his fair share of pains and failures by now too) but one thing to consider is what little he is up against.
It's hasn't been just dumb luck that's gotten him this far... He's put the work in for it. He has what he's gotten because he's been careful and thorough. He understands where others have failed and he's avoided their previous mistakes. And there's been so much groundwork and foreshadowing already laid down that you've yet to see come to fruition for how detailed his efforts were. But even still, Rayne has had a lot go not according to plan so far. And when it finally comes time for it to all come crumbling down through his hooves, I assure you that you won't be disappointed by the epicness of what I have in store.