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His destiny was to get Luna and chrysalis, but he could do that with or without his cuti mark, one of the reasons he was fulfilling his cuti mark was to not die, and starlight alone could be avoiding that, and Rayne knew that too, starlight just rob him his salvation by rejecting him, now Rayne Must get Luna and chrysalis for sure.
Wait... If Rayne's cutie mark changed to represent his love for Starlight and settled in that change as he was getting the ring, then doesn't that mean Starlight just broke his heart by turning him down?
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So to clarify, yes Rayne was just royally hurt by Starlight rejecting him. But Starlight didn't throw it back at him. She said she wouldn't marry him but she didn't say something along the lines of "I could never marry someone like you." Doing that would have killed him. Starlight only made him feel like he "wants" to die...
Oh my mistake. Adding the detail at the end now that Rayne's cutie mark went back to normal afterwards..
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So the Harem from this moments also for maud is a true rayne or not also is there a possibility rayne learn Griffin magic and help Griffin to reclaim a former glory.
Also more please and don't stop this story.
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??? Uh, what?
I'm speechless... Ok I'm not, but I have too many to say that I'm unable to convey on what I want to say. So the title kinda dead give away on what about to happen, I enjoy the sweet moment the two had while it last, nice touch on dealing with the creep twin with discord and spike, I'm sure those two had wonderful bro moment with those twin.
The song really put the atmosphere in this chapter nicely. One thing for sure I DIDN'T expect the proposed scene, it really shocks me and knowing the cutie mark thing that going on. it heartbreaking moment for starlight, that she have to choose to have her happiness while robbing it from the mares he meant to be or doing the right thing and break her heart. She did a very noble thing. This as well impieties the role that maud is in that she is Rayne Guardian angel. Elly is very talented in her craft I wish we may see her again even it's cameo. Well, the coming days going to be awkward for starlight and Rayne, good thing those two will befriend in the end. The ship with flutter and discord are on the move. I have a question is Rayne , RD and Aj falls in the category of friends with benefits?.
Ok wow, way to drop an emotion bomb on us so, that beginning of the chapter had "foreshadowing" written all over it love Rayne's outfit, handsome as fuck those song choices were phenomenal the scene where Rayne proposes to Starlight and she rejects him felt like a gut punch I wonder how differently the story would have played out had she accepted this chapter definitely left me reeling, I just hope that they'll be ok glorious chapter
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Thank you for that wonderful comment. It was a hit for me as the writer to read that. I'm glad the proposal came as such a surprise to you. And yeah Inguess you could say Rayne is friends with benefits with AJ and Dash.
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And thank you as well Modnight for another awesome comment. I'm so glad that everybody liked the song choices and I'm glad that you liked Rayne's new outfit. This was a heavy chapter for me because I've been waiting to write it since chapter one. I feel proud to finally out it completed and published. And these wonderful reactions from all of you make all the time and energy spent well worth it!
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The Harem is stop i am so glad is stop
yeah man, I finished the last chapter earlier today, Gotta say men this Story jumped its was up to my top 10, I read in in just about one go. like the idea of the protag because I haven't seen it done exactly the way you have before, Keep up the good work my man, can wait to see the next chapter
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Thank you Slender very much for your review. It makes me happy as the auther to read that comment from you. The story is far from over and will continue in January. And if you've liked the story so far then I know you'll love what's to come.
So, why couldn't Starlight have been added to his cutie mark instead of replacing it?
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I'll be so glad when you "is stop" complaining about harems every chapter.