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now the question is will discord agree with rayne's explenation and point of view and stay frends and allies or will he attack and force rayne to flee
What has Rayne been doing, Discord? Becoming a worse Tirek than Tirek, that's what. The road to Tartarus is paved with good intentions, and oh boy has Rayne got himself one hell of a gold-paved highway to Dant Hay's Inferno. If he's tried as a villain against Equestria, he's going deeper in the pit than Tirek was. Like, actually in the pit.
Oh shit this chapter what a ride it's good that Discord is around to bring a bit of humor to the otherwise serious situation it's good to see Twi using some of her princess authority, she doesn't use it enough it was inevitable that Discord would learn about Rayne's involvement in the disaster, darn it's going to take a lot of smooth talking to get him out of this situation as I don't think he's quite ready to face Discord and steal his magic yet awesome chapter
My guess is that discord only did what he did to Rayne was because he recognized what had happen to the 'forest creatures' and feared a new Tirek incident, and that it would effect him next. A short explanation from Rayne and discord will be back to his happy state again.
Maybe event happier thx to Rayne gaining power, and being able to shake things up more than he first expected.
Oh, wonderful chapter.
(“Oh, oh. Is it Applejack’s fanciful but wildly ridiculous Great Seeding come to life in a dark and twisted re-imagination?!” Discord shouted. Then after getting several strange looks from the others he leaned back and scratched his chin while thinking out loud. “Oh right, that isn’t introduced until season nine. We have hardly made it half way through season eight yet.”)
Hahaha, this is the best line to debunked my guess about the seedling. THE BEST!.
I'm suck a fool for forgetting about the deer even exist and that you rarely use comics as well. It a good idea you added more spirit to world-building aspects of this story, it makes sense to add them. Seeing twilight declining the apologies of a foreign ruler shows she took the role of a ruler of her nation.
Well I'm starting to see discord will be very pissed and he will see his relationship with Rayne like that of tirek and him, Rayne need to make a explanation and fast or his goose is cook. Feel like maud and zecora will come in and save the day.
Ok so what kind explanation that rayne will answer to discord and Mane six also the spirit of forest also celestia and Luna?
Also more please.
Just out of curiosity, was this story a little bit inspired by the fan game “Banned from Equestria Daily”? It just seems like there’s been a lot of inspiration coming from that game.
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Nope. I've never even heard of that before. While I don't deny that maybe someone else and I had similar ideas, this has just come from one source and one source only. My wife asked me what I thought my cutie mark would be. And that question spawned all this.
And 72 chapters in, we haven't even gotten to the main part of the story yet. XP
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Wow... your dedication is admirable... we’re not even at the main part yet? Wow... God bless you... How long has this story been in development anyway? Everything just seems so perfectly planned out, you must have one complicated outline... how long do you estimate this story will end up being when all is said and done?
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Originally this story was first written and posted starting on 3-16-2018. But that was on a different website and I didn't like their format. Later I decided to move my story here and have been much happier ever since.
To he honest, most of the "main arcs" for this story were thought up with only about twelve minutes worth of work. The intro, Pinkie's party, nail Rarity before (somehow) hooking her up with Spike, sleep with as many mares as possible WITHOUT making it a harem story (just individual flings), find steal Tirek's power, find steal Sombra's power, then steal everyone and everything's power but don't be showy like Tirek was (be secretive), steal a dragon's power so that I can (spoiler, spoiler, and spoiler), fall in love with Luna, fall in love with Chrysi, (spoiler) with Chrysi because she is a friggin bitch, it all works out because you love her, deal with whatever happens at the end of season 8 & 9, (spoiler, spoiler), big fight, big fight, story end.
That was the original "outline" for the story. Obviously that has been expanded upon and better developed. Since then lots of mini arcs have been added, stuff for the episodes in season 8 and 9 have been added, the pleasure pony story came later on, the decision to include plot from the comics was originally rejected and later accepted. I hadn't figured out what to do about Spike and Rarity until the chapter before that I wrote it.
So it has been an adventure for both the writer and the readers as this story has developed. But, yeah there is a structure that I've been building on for the last two years. It seems well laid out because I've had scenes in my head for this story that have been years in the waiting for me to write. The first hunting of Tinberwolves, the first jazz song with Discord, the first date with Starlight, this current arc with the forest, many many things that are being built up to... I've had these ideas waiting for SO LONG that it has been killing me. And there are still many more that I'm looking forward to FINALLY being able to write. Woeing Luna, big fight scenes, resolving plot... ugh it's torture for me lol. I have an epic one liner for Rayne to transition the story between season 8 to season 9. I get so excited! But I write linearly and that is the only way I can write.
As for the over all length? I have no idea. I know this story will surpass 200 chapters and that's without counting filler or if my future planned arcs running for multiple chapters each. This story will continue beyond the end of season 9. I don't know how the show ends yet, don't spoil it for me. But, whatever happens I have my own ending for this story. I dont want to but I will break off from the show if I need to. And yes, this story does have an end. I know exactly how it happens and what all the details are already. But that won't be any time soon. All of season 8 and all of season 9, plus my own additional content will be portrayed in this story before the ending is reached. (Side note: even though my spin off story Orderly Files is not cannon to this story, it is set in Equestria after the end of season nine. Just goes to show how far off I have things planned for.)
As it stands I will probably finish this story in about two years. But of course anything could happen within that time. I will say though that my story will NOT include anything for gen5 when it comes out. Even if gen5 has the same world and same characters. I might do a gen5 story after this one, but this will be a gen4 story only. Also this is not the only fan fiction I'm currently writing either.
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You just make rayne to have many Harem also is more isekai genre as well
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Impressive! Keep up the good work man. I won’t spoil season 9, but just know that it’s freaking awesome!
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Yeah, the point I was trying to make in story was that Rayne ended up with his harem accidentally. Yes Maud and Zecora he sought a connection with. But Applejack and Rainbow Dash were just meant to be flings. And he certainly never expected to develop feelings for Starlight as strongly as he has. This all just kinda happened for him which wasn't part of his plan. Obviously he doesn't mind though.
Oh and Alfaridwan, isekai animes are my absolute favorite! I love stories like that!
At this rate, I'm willing to consider our main character as our resident antagonist, "villain to other villains" or not.
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Talk about isekai Tate no yuusha anounce season 2 and 3 i don't when Will be release but my guess is Next year.
Also more please
Hahah