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Hore the changeling Will chryssalis show up or not also more please.
Ok so, aaaaaaaaaaahhhhh iknewitiknewitiknewitiknewit eeeeeeeee ok... I'm good. suspicious Maud is cute grrr Discord at least Twilight and The Girls haven't caught on fully to what he was implying yet oh my gods, the changelings are so adorable hehehe, I can't wait to see how Rayne's romance lessons go oops, looks like Rayne distracted the changelings from noticing Twi and friends awesome chapter
Need to fix this one! A bit of your story is all italic.
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Haha, thank you so much! I love comments like these. It's always fun to surprise my readers and get to see their reactions.
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So while we are seeing the changeling kingdom here, and for any more sightings of Chrysalis we're just going to have to wait.
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Thank you, I always appreciate corrections being pointed out to me. Don't forget that you can always just send me a pm to.
And so it begins! The long-awaited arc has arrived. Eeeeee, I'm so Gibby that Rayne is back to hunt more power, with the looming surprise for maud in the horizon or underground and the hunt for chrysalis gem (wink wink) is around the corner. I really appreciate that Rayne is using his surrounding resource to his advantage, and being a manipulative chess master.
Look like discord is still pissed about Rayne getting an upper hand and going under his radar. It looks like spike may get a talking later on with discord since now that flutter is in danger. Discord dropping hint like a battle royal and yet the ponies are oblivious to what it means...morons
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Hehe, thank you so much. I am very proud of that chapter.
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If we take into consideration the fact that I haven't got through first third of chapters which you alredy released yet my "fail to see" only means that I have to read through them first to see anything. So far your story seems quite consistant on not introducing elements without a purpose and here we have a whole arc which doesn't seem like it have one. Thus "fail to see"... well, beside the obvious "huh, looks like there is an actual battle ahead sooner or later". How exactly it'll reconnect with the main plot I'm yet to see, though.
I apologize for the errors, English is not my native language, but if you are interested then Russian is my native language
Most of all, I want to say this is an amazing story for me. I added this story to tracking since the release, but I started reading this story a week ago. And I want to say that this is an exciting story with a great plot and emotions, action, good romance and clop scenes.
I like this story and I really got a lot of positive emotions and good impressions. All the characters in the story turned out to be very lively and perfectly conveyed the emotions of the characters.I look forward to the release of new chapters.
Yes, you would have a point... But you're forgetting that Rayne has a panther form that is carnivorous, while he's in that form raw flesh has no ill effect on him and it served as a psychological warning to bit wannabe villain, since he chose to be an anti-villain that is very brutal and willing to put aside morality to get the best outcome. And we can easily blame it to his panther instinct, to eat raw meat. That the way I see it
Lol, I don't know what's weirder, one of the changlings being named after the bottom side of a penis, or the other one named Kevin.