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is it because Discord and Aspen arnt the only spirits? Was Discord watching for another? A spirit he is scared of?
Hehehe Rayne throwing Discord into the wall must have felt good oh, hi fourth wall! I usually don't notice you in stories! *shattering noise* oh..... I didn't know that could happen..... hmm, I think Discord is being overly critical. the obsidian wolves sound awesome so he can go fuck himself I love how Discord stopped Rayne from taking his magic, classic good thing Rayne was smart enough to copy some of Discord's magic before he was stopped poor Rayne, having to explain his "evil plan™" to Discord well, it looks like Starlight is going to be ordering a draconequus on the rocks awesome chapter
Considering that a being with the letter D was referenced i suspect that it is 1 or more of the following
Destruction
Death
Doom
Darkness
And do to the superman reference darkseid
One's that may exist or be part of the before mentioned
Judgment
Justice
Order
War
Pestilence
Famen
Anyway great work can't wait for more
So predators in Equestria are monsters that needs to be put down?. Lol aspen needs to stop being such a hypocrite. Sure if his ppl were hunted and eaten then yes, I would agree with Discord, but a death sentence for hunting wildlife for food (the same for attacking and culling Timber wolfs that attacks ponies even outside of the forest when the mood strikes them).
Is this why there are so few griffons and other different species in Equestria ?.
But even if the deer race was hurt from 1 individual, Aspen attacked a entire race because he did not like them, and suspected them even when the offender was a predator that did not even look close to being a pony. That should put up huge red flags for the ponies.
And with Tirek, Sombra and the Storm King, the answer is to lock them away for the rest of time?. That sounds like a death sentence for me. Best case scenario; they go insane from the imprisonment (and could be considered dead). Ponies are a strange breed, but like he said 'not that bright'.
The mc choices are a bit on the dark side, but the more i read, the more i find his choices acceptable and in the right.
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So now discord know what rayne Going to do now ?
Wil he Going to kill Aspen and bring balance of equestria or tell him what he do is balance of equestria?
Also more please.
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*nod* right death is preferable than lifetime imprisonment or isolation chamber that IRL, for there case stonefication, but I'm the guy who prefers reforming others. The way you describe aspen and his action kinda suit him. a hypocrite. that should be one of his flaws as a spirit of the forest.
4th wall breaking is fun kind of breaking. Rayne is filled with love so it make sense do stupid and reckless thing for love, when you know your love one will always be in danger from in and outside forces. I have a question on HOW big is the room that Rayne is in, if he can summoned manticore, cragadile and multiple of obsidian-wolves that room should had been reck.
Discord that obsidian-wolf is awesome and don't deny it
If discord is a spirit of chaos and aspen a spirit of generation or whatever, there may be more spirit that is stronger than discord if we are going for spirits in all aspect of life like spirit of death, destruction, suffering and etc. That will be cool to dwell in.
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Yes so you are all absolutely right about King Aspen. His "attitude" is one of his character flaws. He overreacts! He is overly opinionated of himself, the forest, and those that live inside it. It's not that he doesn't care about life outside the forest. It's just that he doesn't weight the lives of ponies and others as heavily as he does the forest and it's creatures. But don't worry, I plan to cover ALL of this in a future chapter when he goes to Canterlot.
Yeah, the pony alternatives to Capitol Punishment kinda suck in Equestria. They don't believe in the death sentence... but oubliettes are fine? That's pretty terrifying. Reforming villains is something that Equestria has only seen within the last ten years or so thanks to Twilight and her friends.
Oh Marytryne, that room got CRAMPED lol. There was Cragadile butt halfway up two wall and the Manticore/Chimera knocked over EVERYTHING in that room lol. That is why Rayne moved to sit on the bed first so there would be room before he walked over xp.
Also I have a question for Midnight, Marytryne, and everyone else. Can there be different kinds of 4th wall breaks? Hear me out... when Pinkie or Discord break the 4th wall in the show it's amusing. But now this is a story about a show. Someone from beyond the 4th wall was placed within a different set of 4th walls. What I'm getting at is when Discord mentioned seasons 8 & 9 in front of Shining Armor that was a 4th wall break. But for Rayne in Equestria, it isn't a 4th wall break (for him) to talk about the show or his own world. It would be a 4th wall break for him to talk about THIS STORY. And Rayne doesn't know he's in a story. So when he has a dialogue with Discord about the show or abojt him being human, Discord is responding in that he consciously knows that he is in a TV show... AND that Equeatria is a real place with real lives (or as real as the 4 walls of my story are.) So what is that? Another 4th wall break? 16 walls? A half and half? 4th wall break to the half power? Lol
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I would say that it's a layered fourth wall break. In certain fanfiction I would say that there are two fourth walls, one for talking about the piece of fiction they're set in (such as the MLP verse or the Harry Potter verse (although this one can be removed entirely if the characters become aware of it, such as the main character explaining that the world they're currently in was fictional in their original world)) and one for the story itself. I would say that the inner fourth wall is still mostly intact in this story because Rayne hasn't made it widely known that this world is fictional where he comes from. That's how I see it anyway
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I did some digging and read up some things about that subject, it didn't correspond with the style of 4th wall breaking shenanigans we have here. In fact Rayne doesn't break the 4th wall he just referencing the event as well as discord, for he is part of the story blissful unaware, unless they exhibit an act of awareness that they are in a story within a story or bluntly respond to the reader. The best examples of this wall breaking shenanigans would be Deadpool franchise. But that is my opinion and would like to hear anyone else idea as well.