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should she dive back in later then you could play with the idea of her stumbeling across the she is one of the mares in his mark
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That's actually a really good idea, but I think that Luna has learned her lesson here with making assumptions about Rayne. After she finishes going through everything in this chapter and the next chapter, I think she'd be more likely to just ask him directly than to risk going about things one sided anymore.
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i mean raynes mark has been changing and shifting throught the story with it changling slightly in its base form and changing to starlight a bit ago. Is it possible even if you dont write it this way that rayne could be having his mark evolve? Could one potential future be rayne with luna, chrisalis, maud and starlight by his side and on his mark? Or more?
11150735
Well, it's true that there was one change to Rayne's cutie mark. It had always been about Luna and Chrysi, but it was gradually shifting towards Starlight Glimmer for awhile. But that was a change that was never supposed to happen. The way that it's supposed to work with pleasure ponies is that the requirements to seal their heart are set from the moment they get their cutie mark. And nothing is supposed to change that. It's like friendship missions from the map table. The situation already exists when the map alerts you, you don't get to pick the situation. As such, Rayne doesn't get to just pick which ponies, or how many, are set to his cutie mark. What was happening was Rayne was changing his fate for Starlight Glimmer. But fate will not be denied so easily, and that was a one time thing.
11150727
I've thought about something similar before. Not that specifically, but something along those lines. But as it stands now, I am undecided if I will actually use it later in the story or not.
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Yeah I see what you're saying. But that's the difference between consenting polyamorous individuals, and competing romantic rivals. Magnus isn't looking to share Luna with anyone else, and that's not the fate in store for Rayne.
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Im pretty sure that was a given but i dont know if destiny had counted of rayne having two mares who could and likely would move the heavens and earth itself to keep him safe and stop him dying due to being rejected by luna or chrisalis.
Absolutely amazing, can't say much else, beyond you deserve a round of applause for this performance.
Of course, dreams are fears and images from the subconscious that cannot be controlled. But for some reason, all the scenes shown show Rayne as weak and helpless, who should be pitied. But in truth, having an impressive arsenal of abilities, Rayne has now turned into a truly frightening creature that no one can stop. I can't believe what is shown is a staged performance for Luna. For even despite the past full of pain, it seems to me that in the current situation, the subconscious fear should not be "I am considered weak", but should be "I have turned into a terrible monster that everyone is afraid of and no one can resist me."
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Good argument, good argument. I really do like this point. And from an outside perspective, you would be absolutely right. But when someone has a nightmare, they don't have it from the viewpoint of somebody else.
Rayne doesn't suffer from a deep seeded anxiety of, "Oh no, I've amassed too much power and now I'm too over prepared to protect my loved ones." No, of course not. Having so much power only helps him to sleep better at night. So there would be no reason for him to be stressed about "being a monster" in his dreams when that's fun for him.
But if you take a moment to look at the effects of social anxiety, depression, PTSD, and many neurodivergent behaviors, you might notice some common trends. A lot of then include aspects of self inadequacy, self apathy, the inability to feel proud of ones own accomplishments, and a fear of not being accepted by others. It doesn't matter how much power Rayne has stored or how many friends it is he actually makes. Rayne fears he will still never be good enough to be worthy of those around him. He could have all the power in the world and it would never be enough.
And on top of all of those fears, he now has more than enough to go on to feel like a disappointment to Luna. He's wrong of course, but if he was concerned about never having been good enough for her in the first place then naturally that is going only going to get worse if he's now also concerned in disappointing her. And as for the helplessness? Well, I just suppose you'd have to feel it to understand. You cannot imagine how much of my life I feel cut off from with being allergic to the sun. There's no medicine I can take, there's no treatment which can help, and there's nothing to stop my condition from getting worse and worse. I'm trapped by my medical issues and I'm stuck with my mental anxieties, while there is no cure for either. Feeling helpless comes as natural to me as breathing does, I'm sorry to say. And the only real outlet I have for it... Is this story, writing about Rayne walking around in the sunshine and making friends which is something that I will never be able to do.
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condolences to you with your real problems and I really can not understand it fully. :(
P.S. Although I have a friend who has "photophobia" which causes him to tear along with a headache and pain in his eyes. Because of what he is forced to walk in special glasses during the day. Although against your background, he will most likely look like a person who says that his leg hurts a legless disabled person.
After what Luna saw in Rayne's dream. I'll bet that Rayne is going to go in a straight jacket. and in the psych ward as well, we all know Pony stick into herds so. they're going to fix him. and if they can't fix him. they can try making him a 'normal pony' (AKA lobotomy) or super therapy and mind magic if they are lucky.
but Rayne will not allow that. so he's going to have a fight over pudding if that happens.
what will his copies do.
good chapter. I did not get offended. by this one.
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Hahahaha! I loved this comment, thank you! That is so absolutely not going to happen xD. But I still loved reading this. What a thought! xP
Still hate Luna and have ZERO sympathy for what she saw in Raynes dreams. She practically states that she is OWED complete access to your dreams because of her abilities. I actually wish she had encountered far worse in her dream diving.