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Congratulations on achieving the 100 chapter milestone Haunter_Rayne
To be honest the last scene of chrysalis and Rayne in chapter 99 I was speechless happy galore, so I was unable to comment on it and got a downturn when I remembered Anansi, that she could be that chrysalis.
I got worried when I saw the title of 100 bittersweets, that my suspicions were correct and I'm glad I was wrong. Reading this I'm very VERY happy that Rayne got to be with our hard to get love bug, that he has a long way to go in achieving mutual love from her. I'm glad that you bring Anansi and crew again I even joy them even in very short scenes, Anansi is right thought that Rayne will become their dad and it inevitable, and she's very kinky buggo. Once again congratulations on 100 milestones. So stay safe and get well soon me amigo.
Congratulations on getting to one hundred chapters!!!
This chapter didn't go where I thought it would go, but I kind of like that
so my first thoughts on seeing "two weeks earlier" were "fuck yes! time to see how he found Chrysalis again!" and boom sex with Fluttershy that turns out not to be Fluttershy threw me for a loop and poor real Flutters, not understanding what was going on in her own bed it's nice that our sweet buggy girl is ready and willing to help Rayne out changeling servitude indeed
Just the blunt "we found her" was great short, sweet, we get it. but more importantly Rayne gets it cut to Chrysalis talking to our favorite lesbians who are getting more and more suspicious of her shitty fake backstory lucky Rayne was there to save the day seeing Rayne so submissive is.... jarring? shocking? feels weird? I know he has to worm his way into her heart before he can go for the kill but it's kind of an eye opener to see how far he'll go I wonder if his seemingly physical pain from watching her leave is due to her being one of his pleasure pony soulmates or something phycological? I've got some theories. hmm the state he's in while she's feeding on him troubling
This one went places I'm worried, curious, and excited about. awesome chapter! once again congrats on getting to one hundred chapters!
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It's seriously thanks to fans like you that it keeps me so driven to keep going. Wow, 100 chapters. I almost can't believe it. I knew from my very first outline that my story content would reach this far but I never knew if I would accomplish it or not. Your words are so moving to me. I love hearing your thoughts, your reviews, your expectations, your theories, and your surprise! The feedback I've received means so much to me and I can never thank you enough!
Hmm. Jarring... Yeah I can't think of a better word for how I was hoping to portray Rayne here in chapter 100. Rayne being so submissive is definitely out of character for him, not that he's bad at it of course. But it's certainly not the way he dreamed of spending time with Chrysalis. But he wouldn't trade it for the world though. There's going to be a lot of angst in Rayne's future, but it's all worth it to him in the end though.
And lastly, I hope you all liked the picture! ^_^
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Aww well I'm sorry that some of the chapters in this section weren't as catching to you. I was really hoping that chapter 85 would have inspired more of a review because I worked really hard to lead up to that moment and develop that scene. Yes, there were a lot of songs in this part of my story but it's kind of like the finale for that specific arc to end so I was having it go out with a bang. There will be more songs still of course but not as heavily pressed together.
The lore is great so far from chapters 91 to 100.. Now I think the story is great so far and there were some issues a little pinch like I said in the last chapters 81 to 90... there are still some pinches that makes me wanna feel it. Chapters 93, 95 to 97, 99 and 100. I made it at last!!!!!!! and let's review the whole 1 through 100. it's clearly everyone should know that it's clearly an 8/10 now for the chapters 91 to 100 it's at least 8.5/10 only because i saw beautiful pictures and more lore to this book or fiction...
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Review... I do like some characters and then some characters I just say meh... It's still good... however, it's still not complete yet so... as of today. all characters besides rarity and rainbow... they could use a little bit more work... discord is the greatest thing and the princesses.
Zecora is pretty cool as well... tough character to place in a fiction due to rhymes and such.
I agree with Rayne, the original black Changelings are FAR better then the Disney-fied garbage they became.