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Mmm... this chapter.. I liked parts and hated others. Like I enjoyed the obvious Aladdin reference, but I hate how Luna just blows Rayne off. It just doesn't sit right, even though they have flaws, it seems overly emphasized on their specific trait.
Although everything else is great! So great job.
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So I'm always happy to take in a new viewpoint that I hadn't considered before. I'm curious, how is it that you see that Luna was blowing Rayne off?
In any case, I appreciate th review. ^_^
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To me, it seemed like she didn't care how much work he put into everything, such as when she said you didn't know about Luna bay.
wow it's been a while Haunter_Rayne I like to review this now between chapters 111 to chapter 116 if you don't mind... I have to say this is still a little bit confusing but I think I have it. I want you to know that this part section between the 111 and chapter 114 were pretty interesting to read such as chapter 115 and 116... I wonder what are the next chapter because I came a long way to read the rest of the latest chapters you posted... I'm now wondering a lot for the future... I wonder what kind of ending you would place for this masterpiece.
Don’t leave me on this cliffhanger!