Epilogue
Celestia's Ascension to madness: Epilogue.
Let's get though on how is everyone doing after Celestia's mental illness.
Rainbow Dash and Gilda are still holding a strong re-kindled friendship, and Gilda does visit back when she can.
Hoity Toity and Photo finish are now married, with a young adoubted Pegiscous foal in their care. They then apilled the filly to flight skool.
Blueblood is still taking tutering lessions from Fancy Pants, but is aprooving well, a few snags and misunderstandings, and bruzed egos aside. Oh that Blueblood.
Tiara and Silver were made to go to Miss Smackwhip's reform skool for fillies: the younger filles skool by their parents
Trixie is still adviser of the Princess Celestia. She maintains a friendly relationship with the council, the guards, and Luna. She has abit of a friendly non-threating rivalry with Twilight, you know, like Applejack and Raindow Dash.
Cheerlee was given teacher of the month by the skool board for her (though brief) part in trying to reason Celestia. She still teaches in Ponyville, though retains a better relationship with all students, even, relucently, to Scootaloo.
Philomena returned to Celestia's side, and was forgiven on her part to capture her own master.
Twilight and friends returned to Ponyville and back to their families, pets, and friends without a hitch, and, pretty much went back to normal.
Manehatten was put back togather by a repair crew selected by Grand Vizor Trixie.
The Cutie Mark Crusaders are still looking for ways to earn their cutiemarks. Sweetie Belle remains silent about her crush with Celestia.
Thundering Might (even though he practitly disappeared by the later chapters) is still general, though has been given medals and rewards for safeguarding the cizosans while the madness accured.
Red Peppers became a hot sensation thoughout equestia, and most pony filled contreies.
Luna and Celestia maintained their sisterhood, ensuring there won't be another case of insany.
And Pinkie Pie….. Is still Pinkie Pie.
Pinkie Bursts out of the screen and shouted: "AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPLY EVER AFTER! THE END!"
DAH! Pinkie, what did I tell you about breaking the forth wall on the Epilogues?
Pinkie Pie said: "Oh, sorry, I thought the ending need something extra Pinkie Pie, so-"
Twilight yelled: "PINK-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E-E!" Pinkie Pie said: "Yes, Twilight?"
Twilight said: "The story is done, let's leave."
Pinkie said: "Ok, good bye, see ya, don't forget to- (a purple aora surrounds Pinkie Pie) WHOA!" Pinkie was taking away from the Narrater's face.
Ok, that's, pretty much it, folks.
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This story was close to being one of my favourites.
Where it falls short though is the fact it doesn't seem to follow the basic guidelines of writing a fanfic. What I am trying to say, is that it is a good story... but it needs some serious editing. Normally I wouldn't do this but if you need an editor, I would be willing to go through and edit the whole story. Send me a message if you're interested storiesatrandom.
DAMNIT! i was expecting more
128214 like what exsactly?
127850 i am gonna have that addressed, i already got Sir Duke, he's currently working on Chapter 1. i'll keep you posted when the chapters have been aprooved.
Thanks Storiesatrandom, I'm glad to hear it. This Story goes into a lot of backstory for Celestia, but the layout sort've ruined the experience and I found myself skipping parts of the story (holds head in shame
). But now I know you've got an editor, this story is bound to improve. I'll continue to track it and wait for the updates.
128761 believe me, even i wish how this was exicuted was more cleanly done.
well, at least know i am actselly doing something about it and not being an anti-critic jerkwad and delete insulting comments in sight.
don't think i would get popular that way.
128761 Chapter 1 has been improoved.
i believe you need to focus more on character development, i have only read the first chapter but in the parts where celestia had to lose luna i just didnt feel any emotion, your based more around plot, and dont get me wrong thats great. I just feel as though you need to show a little emotion from those who are supposed to be feeling it, i havent been into fanfics that long, but what i have seen that are great have a mixture of both. Just thought i would generate some constructive criticizm [insert spitfire happy face emote here]
1076239 i thought it's emotional enough as it is, thank you very much.
again i only read the first chapter, i wasnt being agressive just i suppose that after reading some verry emotional stories by stephen king and other great authors i could offer a little of my personal knoledge, i have been reading good, tradgic books for a very long time and i suppose thats just what i have come to expect, i dont mean to be agressive or brash all im saying is this story could be amazing and triumph above all others and even give background pony a run for its money i understand that some people take constructive critisizm as insult and others take it as advice, and i am sorry if i had offended anyone i will not go back on what i said about the first chapter, however i said nothing about the whole story because i have not read it.
1082363 oh, ok.
now, for something random.
Discord dance!
sorry, i wanted to do my first video comment.
EDIT: there was a comment mistake. CORRECTED!
i love the plot, but the little things like "Alicorn Fu" and "Celestias white ninja attire" really threw me off and confuzed me and in hindsight i saw it was an understatement to say they could spruce up the emotion a bit it needs serious TLC. i also revoke the statement on it being possible to rival or even come near the quality of background pony. I think the author just needs to slow down when he writes stories and make it more serious and more descriptive. The last thing i would llike to mention is that things like (pinkie pie pulls out partie cannon) and things of that nature sre to only be used in scripts. If i remember, when i hook my computer up to the internet and when i dont have to read stories on my phone i might make a remake of this that will take the plot, make it more descriptive and then release it as a improved version. the plot, story, and charachters will all be credited twoards the author however
1082550 it also has the comedy tag, it's bound to have a few funny moments to balence out the seriousness, otherwise it'll be abit of a sob fest. about the Alicorn Fu thing and the Ninja thing, that's to make it more actiony instead "Magic Magic, MAGIC EVERYWHERE!" I didn't want it to feel like a wizard quest. also, both of my editors are caught up in my more recent stories, and i don't have a 3rd for this or the other older projects.
okay, i thought there was a comedy tag on this, i suppose i just felt as though the plot was really something and if i dont will you make a serious version of this? I love storied that bring great emotion to me i understand balanceing it out, but for me in order to make something truely great you need to make the reader feel emotion so strong it ties apart of him to the book. Look at Cujo, here you have a sympithetic veiw of a dog who got rabies, and the dog goes on a killing rampage and kills like 7 people. but at the end of the book the boy was still sad because his best friend in the whole world was ripped away from him. It was a tragic moment, but thats wahts seperates it from being the run of the mill book. Humor is a great thing to have in a serious book i just dont believe you should put it in such serious parts. I may not be back on this thread for a while, i wish you luck and please consider my advice.
1082874 maybe, but with only a limited shorse of editors, it might not be a quick chance change.
i couldnt go to sleep as quickly as i had thought, storiesatrandom who is your avatar? its kinda buggin me that i dont know is it an oc?
1082988 It's the Laurn Fast Alicorn Oc.
i thought it looked familiar, now i just feel like an idiot. Still say the best oc ive ever seen is incidnea in antipodes
1083098 it's ok.
1924125 thanks for liking this story reguardless of obvious and amatauristic mistakes.
What program did you use to write this? I need to find the coder and have them shot for not implementing a proper spelling/grammar check function
2706229 I used Microsoft word.
2706779 In what language?
1083098 (gasps offended), ENGLISH YOU INSENSITIVE ASSHOLE?! I AM AN AMARICAN?! I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE THINK I'M FROM ANOTHER CONTRY?!
(RUNS AWAY CRYING?!)
Um...PM me if you would like an editor. The concept is good, but the spelling....
2755408 OH FINALLY! MY PREYERS BEEN ANSWERED?!
Chapter 1 has already been put togather, and i think part 2 as well, but you can help me with the other chapters.