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    Twilight reminisces about her past and Princess Luna overhears her commenting on her night.
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  • 15w, 11h
    POLL REGARDING SPARKLE NO MORE!

    Okay guys, I want you to decide what I should do with Sparkle No More.

    Should I

    A) Cancel it

    B) Stick with my original ending that would probably upset a lot of people (which I think I have saved somewhere in my Drive or computer, but believe me, it doesn't do it the story justice)

    C) Stay close to my original ending but change it slightly to add more emotions to it (which is what I'm leaning towards)

    D) Change my ending completely and have it filled with reactions from all the characters.

    I've been trying to do the last option for the post months and have had no luck doing it all. So if this is the option that wins, it may or may not even ever be finished.

    What would you guys like?

    15 comments · 103 views
  • 18w, 10h
    I just don't know anymore

    I love Sparkle No More. I really do. I don't want to see it die. But I've had no motivation to write.

    I want to the fans of the story to be happy, but I know my original ending will leave a lot of people dissatisfied, so I wanted to change it up and see what I can do, but this is proving much harder than I anticipated.

    Emotion is hard. And I don't know how to go about writing my final chapter anymore.

    SNM isn't canceled yet, but it's looking to be a possibility...

    5 comments · 100 views
  • 24w, 4d
    Writing is Hard...

    I'm sorry everyone for still not posting anything in a while, but I promise that Sparkle No More is not dead. I'm stuck in a corner.

    In the beginning, I was going to have something else be the ending, but a lot of your comments helped me realize that my original ending probably wasn't the best idea, and I've been brainstorming for a long time about what to do, and I've hit a diamond wall with reinforced steel in terms of writing. I've never been this stuck before and it's driving me crazy.

    But I will not let this story die. That much I promise you.

    Please stick with me a while longer. My school semester is almost up and I'm in the process of slowly working things out in my head. I should have it out by the end of summer.

    I'm so sorry with how long it's taken, but again, it is NOT dead.

    1 comments · 87 views
  • 38w, 2d
    Sparkle No More On Hiatus

    So, I hate to say it, but I have to put Sparkle No More on hiatus again. It's only the second day of classes for my college, and I'm already feeling overwhelmed by my Statistics class. As much as I want to say that school is the only reason I'm doing this, I can't. The other problem is I just don't feel like doing anything at all. I don't feel like writing, I don't feel like gaming, I don't feel like doing schoolwork, and everything is very uninteresting. So for now, I have no estimated release date for SNM chapter 9. It could be as long as until school's out in May that I continue working again.

    Sorry guys. I'll keep you updated with any progress though.

    3 comments · 117 views
  • 40w, 4d
    SURPRISE CHAPTER UPDATE! Go read chapter 8!

    So yeah, I was originally going to have this be one semi-long chapter, but decided to split it into two as I work on the latter half, which needs work. But it should be done soon. If I force myself to work I may be able to get it done before school starts on the 27th.

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It is the thousandth year since Nightmare Moon's banishment and she has  has returned. When the battle with Nightmare Moon goes awry, Twilight's friends and family must cope with the destruction left in Nightmare's wake.

Note: This story is based off of the picture giuliabeck's You Are Mine and Sparkle No More.

First Published
3rd Jan 2012
Last Modified
14th Jan 2014
#1 · 72w, 6d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

hay dastardly I kinda got offed by missing story in my tags so I went to check it out ond found this fun little piece of fiction again I hope you don't mind be commenting on it since you hid it from your other story's:twilightsmile:

#2 · 72w, 6d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

>>2667198

Haha. I'm in the process of uploading three chapters right now. It'll be back up in a bit.

Comment posted by Equestrialize deleted at 10:10pm on the 2nd of June, 2013
#4 · 72w, 6d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

>>2667208 wasn't there a fourth? or are there more than four chapters in this story, and will you actually decide to let Twi live, or are you going to stay with her being perma dead?

#5 · 72w, 6d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

:twilightoops:  

More.   :pinkiecrazy:

#6 · 72w, 6d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

>>2667243 heavy is spy!:trixieshiftleft:

#7 · 72w, 6d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

>>2667226 Oh, there's still more to this story. Trust me.

#8 · 71w, 3d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

Bizarre. Never notified me of updates

#9 · 71w, 3d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

>>2712810 Well, thanks for checking up on it! Makes me happy to know you're interested enough to look it up!

#10 · 71w, 3d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

>>2713565 I've noticed it's doing this to me with a bunch of stories, so I'm going through my list and finding everything it didn't tell me.

#11 · 71w, 3d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

>>2713879 Well still. Thanks for following my story and for sticking with me through the lack of updates.

#12 · 71w, 3d ago · · · Repercussions Part 1 ·

>>2714897 No worries. Glad to see it did!

#13 · 70w, 5d ago · 6 · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

RUN, BITCH! RUUUN!

#14 · 70w, 5d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

Hmm... I hope Celestia can catch her. Really we need to get these misconceptions out of the way.:twilightsmile:

#15 · 70w, 5d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

>>2736584 What do you mean "misconceptions"?

#16 · 70w, 5d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

>>2736588 as in Luna thinking that Celestia wants revenge on her personally, but Celestia is really angry only at Nightmare. also I'm still hoping Twi makes a comeback, like a savior.:twilightsmile:

#17 · 70w, 5d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

More is needed & the chances that twilight is dead is 1 in 10 to the power of 10 to the power of 100  AKA googolplex

#18 · 70w, 5d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

>>2736876 So are you saying you think she's dead or she's not dead?

#19 · 70w, 5d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

>>2736938 Well, if I read that right, he says the chance of Twilight actually being dead is 1 in 100,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000,­000.

So, at a guess, he doesn't think she's dead, or believes she's likely to come back. :unsuresweetie:

#20 · 70w, 5d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

>>2737069 Ah. I see.

#21 · 70w, 4d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

to short, need moar.

#22 · 70w, 2d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

>>2739991 More is coming, don't worry. The next chapter is actually nearing the final run of edits. I found a section that really bugs me, so it may be a few more days, but it's almost there.

#23 · 69w, 5d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

>>2736938  no she isnt dead is my guess simply because :twilightblush:

#24 · 69w, 5d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

>>2771737 Haha. I see. Well, you'll find out soon enough, as the next chapter is almost finished.

#25 · 68w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

wow...just wow, this was heart breaking, bravo bravo bravo i shall fave

#26 · 68w, 4d ago · 2 · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

I like it. I really do. And I'm not usually one for Dark fics, but this caught my eye.

Your Celestia and Luna are extremely well thought-out, and the writing seems very real. It was a very small change you made in the canon version, one that I haven't seen before, and it's intriguing. I think now, most of all, I want to see what happens next. It is going to continue through the rest of the series without Twilight? How will the other five, Spike, and Twilight's parents handle the news? Will the other five have a falling out, or will there be another element of magic? What's going to happen when Discord returns, if he returns?

This story is a sapling now and I expect to see it grow and branch out. I hope to see some of these questions answered in later chapters. Don't disappoint.

:twilightsmile:

#27 · 68w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

Good to see this updating!

Also, at one point you say she's 'lalone'.

#28 · 68w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

I stand by what I said before that twilight isnt completely dead  

#29 · 68w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2809860 Fiixed. Thanks!

#31 · 68w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2809541 I know what you mean. If it hadn't been for the two pictures I link in the description, this story would never have come to fruition. When I saw them I thought. "AHHH! ... I could make a dark story out of this... why are these thoughts coming to me?" and next thing I knew this was published, and then unpublished for major rewrites. What you're looking at is probably the third draft of the story.

#32 · 68w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2810648 You'll just have to wait and see. Chapter's 6 and 7 will have, probably, the longest wait between uploads.

#33 · 68w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

:raritydespair: the feels they return

also PLEASE do not make twilight a zombie

#34 · 68w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2811414 or find doctor hooves

#36 · 65w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

I think I remember reading this a long, long time ago, back when it was just an idea, or an outline. It looks like it was just put up a little while ago. I swear I haven't read it in at least a year...

Anyway, it's amazing how much it's improved! The writing is quite solid. Color me impressed.

I'm wondering, is it complete? Or are you still writing parts?

#37 · 65w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2926344 DUDE! I REMEMBER YOU! I CAME TO YOU IN THE IRC CHAT AND ASKED FOR YOUR HELP!

Thanks for the comment. I really am proud of how far it's come.

#38 · 65w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2926459

As you should be. I saw you on EQD just a second ago. It's quite an achievement.

#39 · 65w, 4d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2926477 Yeah. it's undergone countless revisions and even full fledged rewrites of chapters. It's been one helluva ride, but I did it. And I'm grinning ear to ear right now.

#40 · 65w, 3d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

I've said it elsewhere, but I feel the need to say it here too: congratulations on the EQD post! It's been a long time coming and you've put in a ton of work; you deserve it. :twilightsmile:

#41 · 65w, 3d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

Hmm... alternate history that turns this sharply? I think the what would make it more compelling is if the other element bearers didn't get an insta heal and had to live with their injures long term.

Wonder what Cadence is going to say.

Also, who will be the replacement bearer? Can there be a replacement? I personally think yes, but many think no.

#42 · 65w, 3d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2927111 Sadly, it was because of that instant heal that Twilight passed away. Changing that would ruin a lot of the story. As much as I would have loved for Twilight to have lived through that, it would have defeated the purpose of this being a "sad" story. :fluttercry:

#43 · 65w, 3d ago · · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

Black tar like vomit? Lovely.

#44 · 65w, 3d ago · 1 · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

I'm sorry, but I can't wait until they have to answer to Twilight's parents. "It's ok Luna, everything's going to be ok." Really? Yeah, she was under Nightmare Moon's control, but seriously, she has a lot to account for and I hope it doesn't just end in a happy ending. Twilight made a bigger sacrifice than even Starswirl did. She saved everypony. I really like this story, I'm not saying it's bad so please don't rail me about how I feel, it just seems kinda bullshit that Twilight dies and the 2 who pretty much caused it, Luna and Celestia, are all happy and reminiscing and shit.

#45 · 65w, 3d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2928949 Don't worry. Twilight's parents will make an appearance.

#46 · 65w, 3d ago · 1 · · Repercussions Part 2 ·

“I mean, am I so wrong to wish that they would see things like I do?” Her voice softened. “...That they might love me, too?”

Her breathing quickened as something snapped in her mind, and her sadness shifted to jealous hatred. The shadows of the forest around her rippled.. “And why shouldn’t they? I’m tired of being overshadowed by my sister! The day is not greater than the night!”

I see what you did there...

#47 · 65w, 3d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

First fic in a while that had me at the edge of my seat.  Excellent.

#48 · 65w, 3d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2930468 YOU WIN AN INTERNET COOKIE! :D

#49 · 65w, 3d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2930478 That actually makes me pretty happy. Thanks!

#50 · 65w, 3d ago · · · Reconciliation Part 1 ·

>>2926239 Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.

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