Hello, I'm Storiesatrandom, and, I, do stories..... At Random.
Writing Glory accsidently turned Celestia and Luna into little fillies after pouring a youth potion in their wine. how will she managed?
the stories are chained, which is why Trixie is grand Vizar.
Image by a deviart user named Alfa i think.
rated everyone+10 due to alcahol reverence.
i wish this site has a "Heart-warming" tag.
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> alcahol reverence.
I could go for some alcahol reverence right now
204601sorry. it's a mis-spelling, it's meant to warn you that, even though it's an Everyone fic, it features wine.
Here take a 5star :3
204797 have a faverite part in particular?
I only really like looked it over a little to be honest.It's a one shot and as such could of been slightly longer to put in more plot but it seemed like a cute story.
Honestly i just felt like being nice and giving you the 5star.
204833 oh. understood.
204837
204852 you mean that valentimes day episode spiecal is out now?
204861
Yeah itunes realesed it early got major sales on it in the time it was out there so hopefully they might start putting them out a day or two early but here is a working youtube link for you Hears and hooves
I'll make this review short.
While this story isn't too spectacular or anything, I had a ton of fun reading it. The antics, the hysterical nature, the fanfic references. I had a ball!
I don't get the backstory of Writing Glory, Trixie, or Creation, but that's probably because I never read the stories that connect (if there are any). I like the cutesy-ness of the young princesses. They were also barrel of laughs, especially when wanting to pick a book for Glory to read.
I truly loved the ending, as well as the princesses' idea for Glory's punishment. Just adorable and hilarious! And I think those two words describe this story best. Cute and funny. And I love a story like that.
There are a few spelling errors, as well as improper word usage. But I can let that slide, especially if spelling and grammar aren't one of your strengths.
Above all, it's not that great of a story. But I don't think it's supposed to be. It's just good, cute fun. And you have done that very well.
Thumbs up.
If anyone wants a nice, short, funny story about childhood, or "fillyhood", this is a great choice.
204874 thanks, but, do know i planned to have the errors adjusted soon by my short story editor.
one question though, what do you mean the story isn't "Spectacular"?
harmless curiouity is all.
204883
I can't speak for him.But it's somewhat like a common fic idea.
Still good though.
>>storiesatrandom What I mean is, the story isn't anything groundbreaking or even that strongly held up. But like I said, I can tell you weren't trying to do that. You just wanted to write a short, funny tale. And I really enjoyed the hysterical humor and jokes you put in. The characteristics for Glory, as well as Celestia and Luna, are done well too.
204894 wait, specificfy, do you mean the "Princesses turned young" idea? Man, i thought i had an orginenal idea!
204906 so, exsactly how many "Princesses turned young" ideas are out there, i thought i had it down as orginal.
204907
Eh more are less man.
204913 I never really said it was unoriginal. It really is one among very few. I just said it isn't the strongest kind of story, yet I can clearly see that's not the intention here. It's written for laughs and smiles. And I can honestly say I grinned while reading it.
204925 oh, ok. well, it is morely a one-shot, plots are often not a focus.
same can be said for most cartoon shorts, just random acts of sillyness.
204925 oh, and uh, check my accounted and click the story button to see the other connecting story, but, small warning, some of them might be alittle uh, stronger then this, and they all have some errors, so, you might wanna wait untill i get them adjusted. ok?
>>storiesatrandom I'll consider it
i lol'd at cupcakes & rainbow factory reference. here, take the onternet. and my money. and Saturn. you earned it.
517877 your prasie and saying you like it is enough, friend.
204815 lol i loved the ending of it i cant breath im laughing so hard
I reviewed this fic tonight you can find the review here
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