The elements of harmony aren't strong enough to destroy Nightmare Moon, Nightmare wins. She takes the mane 6 captive for her own pleasure and to use them as her servants. Will they adjust to their new life or will they fight against the so-called tyrant? Maybe looks can be deceiving?
What can you expect: Love, adventure, war, plots, traitors, assassinations and more.
I love it when villains win.
Inspiration from these two stories: After That Fateful Night by Peppy Greyskull and Nightmares Don't Last Forever by BB
Also: I'm Dutch, not English. If you leave a dislike then I want to know why. You don't like the story, the grammar isn't good, anything, tell me.
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Chapters (5)
SHE WON! YES! WHOOOOOOO!
That's ALL I NEED TO KNOW! I don't have to read this, IIIIIIII'M OUTTA HERE!!!!
*runs into street cheering "Freedom!"*
826891 get back here!! *You're getting chased by the FimFiction police.*
826897 FUCK DA POLICE!
*blows them to smithereens with mah alicorn magic*
DEAD. NOT BIG SURPRISE.
... I don't like this Nightmare Moon at all.
But I shall continue to read; you sir, have gained one watcher.
Very good writing, this story looks promising, keep up the awesome!
Watching, simply cause I also LOVE IT when bad guys win.
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YES! THE BAD GUYS WIN! LONG LIVE THE NIGHT!!!!!!! will read later to busy with my own story right now.
cough.Past Sins.cough Nyx. cough oh sorry had somthing im my throat
I like the cruel queen thingy
Keep it up my friend
this is a great fimfic! keep up the good work!:excitedpinkie:
i like it when villains win to
827226 (Dead. Not big surprise.) Why do I have a feeling you play Team Fortress 2?
829139 Because I do.
, MY DEAD, ILLITERATE FRIEND!
AH, NOOOOO!!!!
*More FiMFiction police arrive*
*Looks around, sees car coming down street*
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*Runs over, throws the driver out*
*Peels out as I speed away from FiMFiction police*
YIPPIE-CAI
"Quick! BAN HIM!"
You know who: "I would, but he's too far away! TO The BAN-WAGON!"
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*And an epic chase scene began...
its okay, i guess.
......................Why do I have the sudden urge to equip myself with an anti-magic devise with a mini-gun, an AA-12 shotgun and a pair of anaconda revolvers while having Juggernaut class armor and a store of ammo equivalent to world war 2's and break into that castle to attempt to retake it?
@Jortyguy please update. I like the idea of a 'what if' story myself.Just PLEASE UPDATE NOW
.I'm sorry for yelling 
but could you update? 
861763 I was on vacation for a week. I will try to update it but I'm not sure, because in 3 days I'm again on vacation, this time for 2 weeks and a half, sorry.
976699 Update will come when my editor edited the next chapter. (It's an 8K words chapter, chapter 3 is going to have over 10K words.)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODONT KILL DASHIE
1002941 I would be stupid if I killed Dashie.
1002965
oh yea BTW I wove it so far
This is gonna be a good story i has a feeling bout it
1005959 Thanks, that means a lot to me.
i like the kind nightmare. There are plenty of stories where shes evil, so a version who is stern but not truely evil is a fun thing to see every now and again.
1016112 I wrote this chapter with the purpose to make Nightmare evil, but my mind subconsciously made me write a more kind Nightmare. So I guess I like a kind Nightmare better than an evil one.
nightmare being scared of spiders sounds a bit stupid but i can live with it
plz do kind nightmare i realy like her caracter
1018570 Even the greatest villains have their fears. I can know, I have a major case of Arachnophobia. (Being afraid of spiders.) I'm even afraid of the smallest spiders and that was my source of inspiriation. I think I shall write an overall kind Nightmare, but with some eruptions to the evil side.
YAYYYYYYYY KIND NIGHTMARE :D
Hopefully Dashie will be able to fly again :)
And this is THE FUCKIN BEST NIGHTMARE STORY in my opinion
With lots of fan love,
DoubleRainbow
1019160 I must resist the urge to hug you right now. I must, but I can't. *hugs*
Just a warning: she won't be always kind, but most of the time she is going to be kind.
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I still will loooooove the story
*hugs back* its ok if she isnt nice all the time
1019209 The next chapter is going to be laaaaaaaaaaaaaaarge. I'm already at 8000 words and I haven't even written half of the chapter.
1019223 YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Oh great. Nightmare's a sadomasochist. We already knew she was twisted, but this is just...DAMN!
And scared of spiders. I burst out laughing, and Nightmare loses a couple villain points. Not many, but still...
1023415 I don't think I will write sadomasicism again, I don't really like it and I don't think it will fit with the relatively kind Nightmare.
Oooooooooooo......... Someone's a softie.........
I love it!!! I think you should do a mix of both nice and evil, like alter egos
1023843 Like I said in the previous comments, it's going to be a nice Nightmare, but with an evil side.
I think Twilight would resist more. She is extremely loyal to Celestia and I doubt she would start looking at the bright side of things.
Anyway, good job. Looking forward to the next chapter.
1034662 I think I know what you mean and you just gave me a new idea to put into the story, so thanks.
I like this side of Nightmare! We need more Fanfics with a nice Nightmare Moon!
If nightmare is too nice, she might as well just release celestia. I think you gotta keep her mean side up and about. And also Twilight, in this situation, should not be the voice of sanity. She would try and find a way to release celestia or something.
Yay, a nice long one!
Also, first!
Yay!!!!! Loved it, but I think that in this part, " Nightmare sighed and released the sword from her magical grasp. “Alright, they get one last change, but I keep them in the dungeons until I’m sure that they learned their lessons.” shouldn't change be chance?
just finished the first chapter, and i have to say it is an intersting concept and that i quite like it. however i felt that it was rushed and that you were mearly describing a serries of events rather than telling a story. there was also virtualy no characterisation in it, nothing to define the characters, who they are, why they were there etc. personaly i would try to weave in a few paragraphs describing each character and explaing a little bit about their personalities, as well as extending the fight between shining armour and dark shadow, as at the moment it is very brief and dark shadow is a very forgettable character- i actulay had to look up his name. the closest you came to any of that was at the end when the mane 6 started insulting nightmare moon. then theres also you difficulties with english, but you have a reasonable explanation for it, and to be perfectly honest mine is not that much better and i AM english.
long story short; after reading the first chapter i feel you need to slow down the pacing a bit and spend more time focusing on the various characters.
despite my critisms, i must admit that i am very much intrigued by this story and will continue to read it.
1135813 Well, read the next chapters and tell me what you think, but I have to admit that describing details is kinda hard for me. I do appreciate your critisism and I'll try to describe more details in the next chapters.
Yay my friend u updated again
Oh how I missed this story
Yet again my good friend a another amazing chapter
Can't wait for more l
1137757 It's going to take some time now. School will start in about a week and I also have other stories to attend to, that's why I gave you this huge chapter.
I’m so stupid to hit her, but she deserves it. wrong color
your faithful student happydeath
1138247 Why didn't I notice this before?!
That's what you get when trying to format a 19k chapter, things can go wrong. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll change it.
no problem
your faithful student happydeath
the thing with the maps made me laugh
1143998 Hey hey hey, I tried my best and I think it makes everything much clearer. (Yes, I used paint.
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