I usually stick to common themes in my stories. I like to have all the characters have a good reason for their goals. I shoot down any concept of fate. Also, there are always dragons.
No pony could have prepared for the adventure or horror Cerberus would bring to Equestria.
A single pound is added to the scale of love and tolerance in Ponyville, and everything changes.
A colt with a strange body structure and even stranger past...
Four mysterious horses wanted for treason...
A shift in Princess Celestia's disposition...
The sun at it's peak...
A heartbreaking inferno...
A war against everything everypony has ever believed in...
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FIIIRSSST!!!!!!!
shock-and-awe!
Finally get to see this online! woohoo!
Hmmm... a secretive, half-dragon colt, found in the middle of the Everfree Forest on death's door. Seems Legit.
Poor Cerberus. Applejack is HONESTLY being a jerk. I was kind-of hoping that Fluttershy would break-out with The Stare to get AJ to stop being so mean to Cerb.. So Applejack is disgusted by a pony-dragon cross-breed huh? I guess that it's obvious that she's never been to Xanth, or herd of the infamous Xanthian love springs.
44400 Well, yes, but look at how she - in fact, ALL of them - reacted to Zecora. I'm guessing that she just doesn't like to well, 'like' something strange before getting to know it I seriously doubt that even she could be so low brow the entire time. But, that's up to the author. Post moar, Plz!
Pretty good. A few technical and grammatical errors, but other than that, this story is moving along. The track you have set, though, appears to be a bit bumpy. At points it moves fast, but at other places, it seems to move slow. Try to maintain a balanced speed throughout, and people will be more likely to read it. Well done. 4.25/5
47652True.
48575 The next chapter will involve new characters. I do better when working with OCs, so expect improvements in pace.
50566 Oi, dude. When Can we expect it?
53274 Hopefully by the end of the week.
Great so far. Work on transitions, though!
The next chapter involves more of the mane 6, so you have that to look forward to.
War,Famon,Pestalance and Death. All that good stuff.
wait if NNM is his mm whos the dad?63788 wait di I just misspell mom?
63789 All will be revealed in due time.
when can we expect more
64903 The next chapter is a long one. Give me a week to two weeks. Maximum.
64915 FINISH SOON!!!
Just so you all know, we're up to 7 pages and counting for the next chapter. Told you it was long.
Uploaded a new one. It's the FIRST PART. It was getting way too long for its own good.
Part 2 will be uploaded soon.
woot woot!
It says to read Flames: Eclipsed first, but I disagree. Read both at the same time. Flames actually starts a chapter behind Dragon of the Eclipse.
when shall this be updated, good sir? I request an update as soon as equinely possible!
88346 I really mean that, too. I cannot publish my next chapter until this one is done! And that is not so very good for me, because I have been waiting for almost a week to update my side. PLEASE get the next 2 or three chapters done soon!
I genuinely apologize for the delays on my part. This Christmas break was busy as all hell. I've got a whole chapter prepped to release alongside another, which is about halfway done. This will break away from the relatively lighthearted part of the story and go into the drama.
When ever they say "Cerberus" or "Cerb" I feel like its directed to me because I go by Cerberus or Cerberusx on every site I join. But I'm loving this story. But does Cerberus have sharp teeth?
109780 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ft7zHARLUs0 I'll elaborate on that later in the story.
109780
... He's got fangs.
Woo! 2 more chapters, and I can update!
Oh, and I like how you kept my changes. I know I already told you, but that's seriously awesome.
moar please...
, there must be more
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pretty awsome so far
201790 What does that have to do with anything?
*jaw drop* that... was... amazing!
nice cliffhanger there at the end by the way cant wait for future chapters
214035 I love a good cliffhanger! The next chapter's a doozy, and you should know - Pinkie Pie would be FREAKING OUT about it.
SWEET! looking forward to it especially if pinkie would FREAK about it
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New chapter, now up!
What do ya think, eh, my pretties?
*Cough, cough, cough* Well, still sick. Curry time!
Editor Here! Hey, hey! We got it up! Woo!
I think you'll like this one. A minimal amount of touch-ups were needed, so, here it is! The long awaited ninth chapter! woo!
Great chapter, I especially like the "Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull" reference.
249736 Thanks. It was a lot less understandable when it was passed to me for editing, but... I like it now.
i hope celestia is humbled in her foolish attempt to kill twilight cause i dont think she woulda survived if cerberus hadnt come and distracted twilights internal conflict
of them.
eitherway commens the slaughter
this is gonna be awsome i love twilight but its so unlike celestia to even think of killing twilight let alone attempt it its ... its unthinkable i hope to get a good reason for why celestia would do this to twilight. sry its just so oocharacter for her not even an internal struggle. oh well sry bout that just so strange.
o and still good sooo take my staches all
249205 Celestia trying to kill twilight was like a slapping the cannon in the face.... I LIKE IT!!!! But we all know celestia is going to die now
252116 Celestia has chosen that her hate for halfbreeds is stronger than her love for her favorite student. It's evil, but in her eyes, justified.
252211 Shh!!! Celly might hear your treasonous slander!
252592 ok good enough hopefully tho twilight can strap her down and teach her a lesson on tollerance
elements or not
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thx fr the explanation and if celestia doesnt realize her mistake and apoligise she'll realize how powerfull her student has become from the little filly she used to be and how much of a nightmare it is to have that power turned back on her
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252592 WHO CARES!!! LET MY VOICE BE HEARD ALL AROUN- (This user was banished to the moony by: TrollSunTyrant026)
..... Houston we have a problem....
249205 This one should clear up any confusion from my last two pictures!
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Stop children, whats that sound? everybody looks whats going down!
252858 Oh. Now I get ya! I understand completely what you are saying with those pics! American tourists are piss-depraved werewolves that are trying to control the world through Super Bowl rings! It makes perfect sense!
252924 ....................... DID YOU REALLY JUST SAY SUPER BOWL RING????????????? SOMEONE GET MY KNIFE DIS CRACKER GOING DOWN!!!!
253256 Oh, thank Celestia! Please kill me!