While Twilight casts her spell to change Flutterbat back into a pony, she is affected by Fluttershys stare. This changes her view of who has to be "healed".
Written for EQDs Writer's Training Ground.
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"Rarity set Spike to the ground next to Twilight, where he lied down beside her. Only a few moments later she felt him sucking at her mammary glands. Twilight smiled motherly at him." What. The. Hell.
wright more, this is really good
3716201 If I'll get a good idea how to continue this story maybe.
two things.
1 whats a mammatary gland.
2 lot of spelling errors
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1. Since I looked it up myself: Mammary glands. I didn't knew if udders would be correct.
2. I'm sorry for that. English isn't my native language and I had to write fast for the deadline of the Writer's Training Ground. If you would point out the errors I'll correct them.
i like it so far
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I said alot more than What the Hell.... I'm SO CONFUSED HERE!!
and you know what I SO DONT WANNA KNOW!
Do more chapters
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I'll consider it.
The thing is, that when I wrote it I didn't intend to add more chapters. It was just intended as some writing training.
Since I havn't written anything for quite some time, I will see if I can come up with a contiunation that I like. But I don't make any promises.
4188626 do need any help
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At the moment no (but a proof-reader would be nice). If I should fail to write something I like, I'll message you.
4193288 ok
the hell?
this left me really confused, yet i could never see this happen.
it left me with a bitter taste in my mouth.
felt un-finished.
4295966 applejack is determain to saved her friends before it gets out of hand.....(really what can get out of hand?)anyways she's doing this because it was all her fault for this mess that she we'll clean up.
IF HE CONTIUES UT
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I've already written a little bit more (~500 words).
When I have written the first part I had a good idea of the scene I wanted to write (although that idea changed quite a bit while I was writing). Also having much free time and a deadline have helped too...
This time I have some vague ideas, but I basically run on sight, hoping that ideas come while I write. Additionally my other current story "A changed world", that I personally like more than this one, is competing with it for my sparse writing time.
Still, I'm sorry for being tardy
4300512 Nah no sweat I like being tardy it gives u some suspension to find out more :3
I think this should have more chapters. Are they ponies in the daytime? Do they notice thy caused so much disaster? Do they remember the bat pony incident? If not, what does Applejack do about it? Is Spike a dragon in the daytime? I NEED TO KNOW!!!
Take all the time necessary. Sorry about my previous comment... so much suspense
6016253 Well since this story has not been updated for over a year, you are totally allowed to ask if I'm still there.
My problem is, that I don't like the follow-up chapter beginnings I have written so far. Therefore, I'm "slightly" unmotivated. Since I have other projects for which I'm higher motivated and lots of distraction, I have next to no time to write for this story.
Since you have successfully poked me and I have some free time today, I'll work on it today, but I don't know how long my motivation will hold^^'
Nice to see that Flutterbat has gotten some friends,
but it is sad that Applejack didn't become a member.
Oh well she was technically the reason why Flutterbat exists not Twilight.
A sequel to this story would be awesome!
7853448 I didn't like my written text so far, I have little time and many other things I want to do. Therefore I'm sorry, but it is unlikely that I'll write a sequel. If someone else wants to write one, feel free! I can support you with my ideas and by being a beta-reader.
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Ah, an oldie but a goodie!