This is the sequel of A New world, I recommend reading that story before you start with this one, but if you don't want to then here's a short summary.
-The mane 6 arrive on Earth.
-Jack takes care of them.
-Rainbow and Jack get into a relationship.
-They need to return to Equestria, Jack can't go with them.
-Rainbow doesn't want to leave.
-Celestia turns Jack in a pony and he can go with them to Equestria.
Now that Jack has arrived in Equestria, it is time for him to adjust to Equestria and to live happily, but this is disturbed by a new threat from Earth. Can Jack defend his friends and fight against his used-to-be species or will Equestria be destroyed by the human threat.
Also: I'm Dutch, not English. If you leave a dislike then I want to know why. You don't like the story, the grammar isn't good, anything, tell me.
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Yay
the sequel is finally here
826613 And you, my friend, will be in the story. I mean your OC will be in the story.
Because your Dutch and I will overlook a lot of the grammar problems. I am not sure how I think about the fact that you're going to make the human spying and being a threat, but i look forward to reading more of this story. keep up the good work
826845 Grammar Nazi activated: *you're. LOL
Also: My editor still needs to send me my edited version.
826850 where would i need a you're?
826882 Because Your Dutch = Because you're/you are Dutch.
Oh I didn't see that. Thanks for pointing it out.
826892 You're welcome.
I can't place my finger on it, but there is something about the dialogue that seems...I don't know, just seems off somehow.
Giving a like just because English isint my main language either... and there is too many ppl b*tching about grammar errors :)
and Nice story ^.^
i'll show this to my friends too :3
I like... I like
827078 I know, someone told me that already. I don't see something bad about it, probably because English isn't my first language, but if you or someone else see it, then point it out. I also know that word placement in Dutch is different in English. But how off: Context or grammar?
827669 Sometimes people give constructive critism about your grammar, other times they're like this: Yo man, you suck dick. But thanks for your comment.
828791 I like you... I like you.
Military?
Aw, crap.
829253 Can't tell, you will need to find out later.
829261
Either way, "Aw, crap." seems like the appropriate response.
829264 Mmm... you are correct.
Perfect. Loved it all *claps*
829291 Thank you.
Should or should I not be a dick on this...
Nah I'm a be nice
... THIS time. but in other news... I LIKE IT!...
I should probably start thinking bout what I type... Meh, my mind can bite me
ANYWAY! I think the dialogue is missing a little background and context but other than that(which is my own opinion) it is perfect so far, but i still see some holding back. Get in there and show us what you got boss
830058 I know, that's a problem I have, but I will try to fix it.
830071
I don't give a damn what you do, just give us more
. You have a great opener here and I think, and given time to develop, the plot and background involving the humans will become a lot clearer. I estimate about 1-3 chapters before you really need to have everything set up properly. 
Love the good work, keep it up
I only needed to read the first three sentences to know that this was gonna be good
830238 I like you, thanks. This story will have more action and tension than A New World
830245 Now your talking my language!
829177 Just context I assume. The grammar is suburb.
830650 OK, that's something I will pay extra attention to.
I'm glad a sequel was made using the happy ending but I cant help but wonder how the story would go if the sad ending was used. You know maybe like how the mane 6 would feel and live not to mention views of rainbow and jacks life in heaven
I for one dont really care about grammar, Even if English isnt your first language, it came out pretty clear to me.
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Oh man, this is getting VERY VERY interesting. personally I wouldn't mind showing up in this story, if you wouldn't mind putting me (my OC), then send me a PM, I'll reply with his name, cutie mark, pony type, powers (considering it goes with his CM) and his appearance.
842019
well, i read it few time through too....
and i even got some Pre-readers
and i got Editor who lived in US...
and still i got some "Fix ur grammar dick"
...hmph
842552 I'll think about it, but I'm not sure since there's already an OC in it from somebody else. If decide that I don't want to use your OC for this story then I will definately use your OC in another story of me, okay?
878311
sure thing, happy to help, just PM me when you want the details of him and I'll tell you what you need to know.
Holy shit. I was just getting ready to go to bed when I noticed this pop up and blew my mind. Who needs sleep?
1009909 NOBODY!!! Hell yeah.
1009917Lol, nice new user pic btw.
Now that I've read the chapter, I can honestly say I'm impressed. You have outdone yourself, but one thing bugs me. The others on the other side of the walkie-talkie knew how Jack used to be human. How? And what happened in the bedroom. Hmmm, so many things. I will simply leave it at a blowjob, 69, and classic sex. God I feel dirty just typing that.
Well, whatever. Going to bed now, hope to see new chapters soon.
1009929 Still, I've been there and I find it beautiful, but that's my opinion and not yours.
1009980 It's a modified walkie-talkie, it can listen in on conversations. Celestia gave the walkie-talkie to Jack, because its place of origin was Earth: hint, hint. Jack also says anyone instead of anypony when he tried to make contact.
I will reveal what happened in the next chapter, but I can tell you that you're wrong.
Yes a new chapter
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If a war is coming don't forgot storm is a master fighter in fist and weaponry
He knows MMA and in weapons swords spears knives etc
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1028865 Hmm... not yet, but it won't be long before shit hits the fan.
Oh shit... Super long new chapter. YAY!
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1073639You know, I never realised that it's only been 8 days since your last chapter. Felt like so much longer than that. Ah well, you certainly made up for it with this awesome new chapter.
1073661 Thanks, but that's the price for longer chapters. (And a minor writers block.
)
1073667I know how you feel. I haven't added anything to either of my stories in about half a month. Although to be fair, half of the reason was just me being a lazy bastard.
Ohhhh...
Jack! You got some 'splaining to do!
1073713 Ah, the life of a man... stallion. It's a wonderful thing, no?